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 Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2006 3:48 am
If you dont mind may I place a prequel of my novel in here. Granted in is more mature but I will keep it as PG-13 as I am able without damaging the story. Nah just kidding, I can make it PG-13 twisted
4000 yrs ago, The third war against the dark sect Flaithis Las has begun. However in twisted event they have gained two powerful Allies, the empire of Persia. Ruled by king Darius, & The dark island of Atlantis, ruled by a queen known as Elisia. Like an inferno the swept through the western world, nearly gaining control of everything. only small handful of contries remain to fight against them. China, Japan, the empire of Africa, & Masadonia. Yet...the true beginning of this has yet to come...
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Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 11:03 am
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Posted: Wed Feb 22, 2006 6:35 am
The royal palace...Same time.
The grand hall is still, as the emperor sits listening to his generals about the tactics to be used when Flaithis Las and their allies will try to make their invasion into china. Japan has made their pact once again to aid them, as they spoke a prefect runs from the outside. His informants delievering a message he would never expect.
"the Philosopher of light has been murder, the wife of the great general and daughter are dead. Flaithis Las has secretly entered China!"
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Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2006 4:56 am
It took some time before The Emperor, and his court regained their bargins. as the messenger said with tears flowing from his eyes. Yao remains silent as he is filled with anger building. Raising from his seat he said no words, however the general understood the meaning as he soon leaves the room along with some of his men that were with him.
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Posted: Fri Mar 03, 2006 6:30 am
As the fire continues to rage, a large silhouette comes out of the entrance. Holding in his arms is his wife & daughter. The crowd soon starts crying, some fall to their knees in tears. Head bowed He walks past the people making his way to that one place. The place which meant so much to her & their daughter & to him. The soldier raises to his feet as he gazes at the general leaving. Still others try to save the house.
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Posted: Mon Mar 13, 2006 6:13 am
This place, was always theirs. where time seems a memory, where nothing is touched. Entering the forest he makes his way to the lake. the shadow still sloaking his eyes as his heart feels numb. without pausing he walks into the water, stoping near the deep end. he slowing lays their bodies into the water. Like angels they sink slowly into the bottom. He stood their, for the longest moment he stands there in the lake water. Lifting up his head the tears flow as he stares into the sky.
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