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 Posted: Tue Feb 07, 2012 6:13 am
Breeana Peters
Breeana frowned a bit and looked at the life maiden.She listened to every word the life maiden said "Am guessing my ancestors were responsible for the life maiden's protection,Dantie great chaos is about to happen Snizle told me a war is coming and it’s called the age of the demons,the two evils that are plaguing the realms are demons and the government right now."she said."I will,I promise.'she said.She watched as she was picked up by the life maiden and they flew back to Alfea.
Breeana saw Angel and Grizelda frowning at them,Angel looked at the life maiden,"No Ms.Grizelda."Breeana said."It's Dantie Landers who else I be spending all my time with until curfew."Breeana said.Angel looked at the Life Maiden."Well Landers have you tried changing back to your normal form?"Angel asked."Yes Ms.Marigold Dantie has tried that but all he did was grow brighter."Breeana said."Hmm Breeana you go back to your room,Dantie come with me and Grizelda maybe we can find a way to change you back."Angel said."Y-yes Ma'm."Breeana said as she quickly embraced the Life Maiden "I love you Dantie ,I do hope they can find a way to change you back."Breeana said then went to her dorm.Breeana immediately called Snizle "Snizle I need your help please,It's about the Life Maiden,is there a way you can change the person who is the Life Maiden back to their original form or are they destiny to stay like that?"she asked.
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Posted: Tue Feb 07, 2012 7:17 am
The Legendary Life Maiden Life Maiden hugged Breeana good by and kissed her.As Breeana was kissed she started gazing into the future, in the future Ragnarock in the flesh had stabbed Bloom in the gut with his claws as he laughed wickedly.
"Sure Marigold im coming." Life Maiden said. The Life Maiden flew behind Angel glowing in the night as Marigolds flashlight until Marigold stoped walking. The windows blew open and Snizle's enchantex form came into the room as that evil figure. "Lukly I was near by in the hospital due to a certain Warlock of Destruction flashing pistols at me earlier." Snizle said. "Life Maiden, hate to say it but I don’t know much about the Life Maiden besides what she did in the past, as for who is underneath the Life Maiden you must not reveal who you are, enemies could go after your family my dear." Snizle said. "Snizle!" Life Maiden sneered. "As I said don’t reveal yourself, I to could be your enemy." Snizle replied. "As for your glowing beauty over their Angel, Life Maiden perhaps don’t wana disappear right now, she has done that with her hosts thousands of times in the past." Snizle said. "Also a gift from me Angel, kiss the lips of the Life Maiden, I heard rumors you could gaze into the future and feel the universe surging through you if you kiss her long enough."Snizle said. " Did you know people died in many wars just to try and kiss the Life Maiden?
“I read the reason why Life Maiden is so popular is because power is knowledge and she is it." Snizle said.xxx
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Dawn Landers Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Feb 07, 2012 3:57 pm
Breeana Peters
Breeana watched as the life maiden kissed her and she saw a vision of the future and Ragnarock had stabbed her mother in the gut with his claws laughing wickedly.Angel stopped walking and watched as the windows blew open and Snizle's enchantex form came into the room as that evil figure.Angel looked at Snizle "Yes."she said."Crane your mother was kidnapped by Hate am sorry that I could do nothing to prevent Hate from taking your mother."Angel said."I think the Life Maiden did kiss your god daughter though before she left,she should be in her dorm."Angel said.
Breeana was on her bed thinking about the future vision she saw of Ragnarock stabbing her mother in the gut.The image kept slowly finding a way to repeat it's self over and over again in her head,she got up and began calling upon goddess serenity."Mother Serenity please hear my prayer,I ask for you to change Dantie back to his normal self please."she said.Goddess Serenity heard Breeana's prayers she appeared before Breeana "Hello my dear Breeana."Serenity said."Hello mother Serenity."Breeana said."So you wish to have your mate back my dear,unfortunely Breeana Dantie must call upon me himself to ask to be changed back you can not do it for him."Serenity said as she disappeared in the blink of an eye away from Breeana.Breeana looked at Serenity "yes mother."she said.Breeana teleported to her secret garden at Alfea and looked up at the sky and began contacting Dantie through her thoughts.
(edit this later)
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Posted: Tue Feb 07, 2012 4:38 pm
The Legendary Life MaidenLife Maiden read Breeana's thoughts and spoke to Angel. "Life Maiden cant seriously be that power, but since I’m her minus well see if the rumors are true about future and crap." Life Maiden said. Life Maiden flew over to Angel and spoke up. "For the record the Life Maiden kissed you not me underneath." Life Maiden said. Life Maiden kissed Angel and started showing her the future. "We have received a notice that a group called Warlocks of Destruction are going to steal the statue of liberty from right under are nose in fourteen hundred hours." The news anchor woman said on the news. The vision then switched to another point in the future. "You know the drill ladies and people, put all your valuables in the bag and this is a stick up." Havic said inside a large bank somewhere in the future and then shot someone dead. The vision then turned to Goddess Trinity hugging Angel as a old lady in the late future.
Life Maiden stopped kissing angel and then vanished and emerged in front of Breenana. "Normally a woman wouldn’t kiss another woman, but considering Life Maiden don’t qualify as a person she don’t count." Life Maiden said. xxx
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Posted: Tue Feb 07, 2012 7:19 pm
To: Users
You claim there is to much going on in story, for the record the main villain of the story isn’t always the main focus of the story every freaking time, you got other matters causing problems while the main villain or villains are silent for a while. To RP well you must see the story as a fictional world, you got politics, criminals, characters personal problems and more , expand your imagination 100% people if you wana survive on this RP. Im not editing anything just because one user got problems.
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Posted: Tue Feb 07, 2012 7:31 pm
Breeana Peters
Angel looked at the Life Maiden and listened to her,Then watched as the Life Maiden kissed her and watched as glimpses of the future came forward to her.Angel immediately released her lips from the Life Maiden's and watched as she disappeared.Angel quickly got her thoughts together and vanished and went to Incanta to go get Usha.
Breeana watched as the Life Maiden emerged in front of her,She embraced the Life Maiden and tried to use all her power to help Dantie change back,but failed each time "Err am going to try something diffrent just don't freak out."she said.She summoned her fairy dust bottle and a small dagger and made a small cut onto her arm and allowed a small amount of her blood to drip into her fairy dust bottle.She shook the bottle well then poured some into the palm of her hand and blew it onto the Life Maiden hoping it would work and change Dantie back into his normal self.
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Posted: Tue Feb 07, 2012 8:17 pm
The Legendary Life MaidenLife Maiden looked at Breeana and sneezed. "She doesn’t wana come off me." Life Maiden said. The Life Maiden threw a small bell in the lake and a clone Dantie appeared and walked up to Breeana. "I think we should leave Life Maiden alone, perhaps when I complete what ever task she has she will release me." Dantie clone said.
Just then Life Maiden collapsed to the ground feeling Ragnarock somewhere out there. "No, Ragnarock has appeared in someone yet again!" Life Maiden shouted. xxx
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Posted: Tue Feb 07, 2012 8:38 pm
Breeana Peters
Breeana watched as all the Life Maiden did was sneeze.She frowned a bit and watched as she threw a small bell into the lake and a clone of her boyfriend appeared and walked up to her."I do hope so Dantie."she said as she embraced the Dantie clone.She watched as the Life Maiden suddenly collapsed to the ground and shouted something about Ragnarock and that he had appeared into someone yet again.She kneeled to the Life Maiden's aid."Who is that Ragnarock has taken over this time?"she asked very concerned.
"Dantie when the Life Maiden kissed me,I saw a glimpse of the future Ragnarock was never destroyed true he left Snizle's body,I just hope he is till trapped in the sword,but I fear he may free himself from that sword and start causing chaos soon,I saw him alive and in the flesh he had stabbed my mother in the gut with his claws and he was laughing wickedly."Breeana said.She missed the original Dantie very much,she embraced the clone of her boyfriend and buried her face into clone Dantie's chest with tears coming from her eyes.
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Posted: Tue Feb 07, 2012 9:10 pm
The Legendary Life MaidenLife Maiden looked at Breeana and spoke up. "I’m sorry Breeana but Adrien is Ragnarock’s new host." The Life Maiden said. "Ragnarock in the flesh, be careful Breeana demons are slick and slippery." Life Maiden said. The clone Dantie kissed Breeana on the head like the real Dantie.xxx
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Posted: Tue Feb 07, 2012 9:12 pm
Months later in what was left of the year, Ragnarock had been very active terrorizing the realm of Halin , Eraklyon, Linphea and other realms out there. Breeana and her friends fought back at Ragnarocks army of demons but retreated for they were outnumbered. Ragnarock has possessed Adrien’s body causing him to do all acts of evil and even caused Adrien to attack his own mother Stella.
Outraged Stella used the sword of Ragnarock and freed her son from Ragnarock. Weeks later Ragnarock tried to kill Breeana in her sleep but Rose the pixie awoke Breeana before Ragnarock could kill her. Ragnarock fled Alfea in the night and days later injured Heidrun going shopping and later that night Ragnarock attacked Leon at work.
The realms grew tired of Ragnarock and led a hit squad on Ragnarock and his demons. As many died including demons, Ragnarock laid his ultimate sinister plot into motion. Creating black holes that would kill all life realm wide, Breeana and her friends arose out of the ashes of retreat and attacked Ragnarock on his throne, but to no luck Ragnarock fled once more.
Week later Ragnarock attacked Eraklyon and kidnapped the Life Maiden from under Bloom and Sky. Days later the Life Maiden was on the brink of death covered in Dantie’s blood strapped to a filthy wall in a underground cave in Darkness Kingdom. When Breeana and her friends saw Dantie the Life Maiden in such a horrible condition, Breeana friends became upset but Breeana went mad and started attacking Ragnarock making sure he wouldn’t escape this time. Ragnarock over powered Breeana and threw her onto a wall and that was when Niandra, Snizle, Shita and Heidrun fought back at Ragnarock.
Ragnarock fell into the lake bellow very weak, he opened his eyes minutes later to only see Breeana standing over him about to destroy him with the Dragonfire. In a loud painful scream Ragnarock looked like Breeana had finally won against him destroying him, but Ragnarock was clever and played dead good enough to even fool the wise men in Darkness Kingdom.
A month later Dantie managed to turn back to normal but the Life Maiden would still be in him until he die. As the summer kicked off Dantie went back to Linphea living in a resort hotel by the beach, but if Breeana stayed with Dantie over the summer that remains unseen.
The end for year 1.
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