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Vanna1994

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Posted: Sat Dec 31, 2011 10:09 pm

http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-330.jpg
Current wip above, my character Seth, age 17 (current age) and 7, I cant do height relations..

and here is my character Londun
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-1494.jpg
He has red hair, and is currently the longest of all my characters mrgreen

Seems rare that I post in here.
I cant be trusted to stay active in places..

Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2012 2:58 pm

I'm not critiquing the first one, it's too sketchy.
But for Londun, you need to work a lot more on the body. His neck is reeaally long, kind of creepy-snake like, and the head is turned too much. The hand is also really weird, it looks backwards to me, maybe it's just the sketchiness though. His feet are also too small, normal feet are deceptively big, so keep that in mind. And in general his body shape looks weird, although I can't put my finger on anything in particular. I think the back might be turned too much, his arm might be too long,

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Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2012 4:23 pm

Since nobody feels like critiquing the 1st I guess I'll have the honor.

The shoulders are too broad and too large for a seven year old which makes me doubt that he is actually seven. If you're going to make a seven year old then at least make proportions correct. Right now he looks as if someone decided to chop his lower torso and replace it with short legs. Just the arms.

Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2012 8:05 pm

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Since nobody feels like critiquing the 1st I guess I'll have the honor.

The shoulders are too broad and too large for a seven year old which makes me doubt that he is actually seven. If you're going to make a seven year old then at least make proportions correct. Right now he looks as if someone decided to chop his lower torso and replace it with short legs. Just the arms.

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if I could get the proportions right I would..

Anyway, I did more with the first, I just never posted it forgot about this thread (its 2 months old) the anatomy problems in that picture has been fixed since then (on other drawings anyway).
Its ugly looking so I am not posting it here gonk

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Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2012 9:10 pm

Vanna1994

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Since nobody feels like critiquing the 1st I guess I'll have the honor.

The shoulders are too broad and too large for a seven year old which makes me doubt that he is actually seven. If you're going to make a seven year old then at least make proportions correct. Right now he looks as if someone decided to chop his lower torso and replace it with short legs. Just the arms.

...
if I could get the proportions right I would..

Anyway, I did more with the first, I just never posted it forgot about this thread (its 2 months old) the anatomy problems in that picture has been fixed since then (on other drawings anyway).
Its ugly looking so I am not posting it here gonk

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