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Sapphire Waltz Vice Captain
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 Posted: Sat Feb 25, 2012 11:32 am
Her past would need a few clarifications, please, it seems a bit too choppy. If you could answer these questions/expand on a few details, it would probably help.
-What was Cerise's age when her mother brought her up to land?
-Could you elaborate on her life on land with Cozart and growing up? Did she go to school? It seems like you jumped it a bit too much.
Powers
Mind you that her ability to manipulate rain will only work on the current thread Cerise is in. Other than that, it seems fine.
Please quote me once you have finished editing the profile and I will look over it again, thank you.
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Posted: Sat Feb 25, 2012 12:08 pm
I did everything I could think of, please take a look.
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Sapphire Waltz Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Feb 25, 2012 12:31 pm
It's better thank you very much.
Sorry if I ask this now, but could you also explain:
-Why did her mother turn into ashes?
-What happened to her father?
Otherwise,
Cerise Perriot L. Petit will be sorted into Burnar.
Please quote me again so I can give the final approval and put her into a dorm, sorry for the inconveniences.
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Posted: Sat Feb 25, 2012 7:15 pm
Because she was too weak, then she died.
Cerise's father died of a heart attack.
finished once again. Please take a look, again.
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Sapphire Waltz Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Feb 25, 2012 8:10 pm
I'll just assume that you depict the death Morgens as turning into a pile of ashes.
Cerise is approved and sorted into Burnar!
Please be patient for a dorm, meanwhile, you may begin posting!
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Posted: Tue Feb 28, 2012 3:13 am
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Posted: Wed Feb 29, 2012 8:52 am
waiting for Cerise's dorm~
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Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2012 7:20 pm
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- ғυчυ αcαםємч -
cяєω Cerise now has a dorm!
Burnar House, Eton Dorm
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