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 Posted: Sat Feb 18, 2006 9:22 am
Daddy will be home for Christmas
Don't you worry, baby
Daddy will be home for Christmas
He'll be here soon, maybe
Last year he couldn't make it
But maybe this year he's changed
Maybe this year he's a different man
Maybe his schedule's been rearranged
Daddy will be home for Christmas
He will be coming home pretty soon
Daddy will be home for Christmas
I'm sure he wants to give you the moon
Why hasn't he shown up yet?
Why isn't he here?
He said he'd find time
Maybe it's something severe
Daddy will be home for Christmas
He promised me this year
Daddy will be home for Christmas
So wipe away those tears
He can't abandon us
We're his own kin
But I suppose we'll be alright
So put on a grin
Daddy will be home for Christmas
Although the chances are getting slim
Daddy will be home for Christmas
So stop looking so grim
Christmas has come
And Christmas has gone
He has lied to us again
But, we have to move on
Daddy will be home for Christmas
Well, maybe next year
Daddy will be home for Christmas
But it's not a promise, dear
Us sisters have to stick together
And it is our number one rule
Because we both know
He hasn't been home since pre-school
Daddy won't be home for Christmas
But I suppose that is okay
Daddy won't be home for Christmas
Because we know our bond has decayed
He'll never be home
All he needs is his booze
At least we've run away
Now we can't be abused
Daddy won't be home for Christmas
I suppose that's lucky for us
Daddy won't be home for Christmas
So now we don't have to hear him cuss
The way the two fight
Brings back old memories
Mommy and daddy...
Stop fighting... please?
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Posted: Sat Feb 18, 2006 9:28 am
Sad. crying
But aside from that, nice rhyming, and the repition of the same lines gives it a good flow. Their are a couple lines where I think the syllables are slightly off, but it could just be that I'm not accenting the right places when I read it. You so totally put me to shame.
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Posted: Sat Feb 18, 2006 9:40 am
Illiandra Sad. crying
But aside from that, nice rhyming, and the repition of the same lines gives it a good flow. Their are a couple lines where I think the syllables are slightly off, but it could just be that I'm not accenting the right places when I read it. You so totally put me to shame.
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Posted: Sat Feb 18, 2006 9:50 am
iluvwritin Illiandra Sad. crying
But aside from that, nice rhyming, and the repition of the same lines gives it a good flow. Their are a couple lines where I think the syllables are slightly off, but it could just be that I'm not accenting the right places when I read it. You so totally put me to shame.
Let me find one and I might... I have to figure out where I stored them redface
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Posted: Sat Feb 18, 2006 10:18 am
Illiandra iluvwritin Illiandra Sad. crying
But aside from that, nice rhyming, and the repition of the same lines gives it a good flow. Their are a couple lines where I think the syllables are slightly off, but it could just be that I'm not accenting the right places when I read it. You so totally put me to shame. Let me find one and I might... I have to figure out where I stored them redface
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Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2006 4:31 pm
Wow. I really like that.
It actually made me shed a tear or two since it hit so close to home for me.
But like Illiandra said, nice rhyming.That's all it takes.
To buy a gun.
x//_____<3
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Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2006 6:57 pm
Gifted_Not_Psycho Wow. I really like that.
It actually made me shed a tear or two since it hit so close to home for me.
But like Illiandra said, nice rhyming.That's all it takes.
To buy a gun.
x//_____<3 Thanks, but yeah this wasn't even personal, so I'm surprised that it went so well together. Thanks for the comment. If you post something I'd be more than happy to comment back! ~K*J~
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Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2006 8:32 pm
it reminds me of a song i love to listent to its called "House of Pain" by Faster p***y Cat... there a one hit wonder and thats there hit it a favorit of mine and your poem is simmilar to it in a way
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Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2006 8:35 pm
Goddess_Rya it reminds me of a song i love to listent to its called "House of Pain" by Faster p***y Cat... there a one hit wonder and thats there hit it a favorit of mine and your poem is simmilar to it in a way
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Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2006 8:51 pm
iluvwritin Goddess_Rya it reminds me of a song i love to listent to its called "House of Pain" by Faster p***y Cat... there a one hit wonder and thats there hit it a favorit of mine and your poem is simmilar to it in a way yeah they were an 80's band that didn't last long they had a good ballad and a couple of other songs were good but never reached charts and they are not together anymore...i think
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Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2006 9:01 pm
Goddess_Rya iluvwritin Goddess_Rya it reminds me of a song i love to listent to its called "House of Pain" by Faster p***y Cat... there a one hit wonder and thats there hit it a favorit of mine and your poem is simmilar to it in a way yeah they were an 80's band that didn't last long they had a good ballad and a couple of other songs were good but never reached charts and they are not together anymore...i think
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Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2006 9:03 pm
iluvwritin Goddess_Rya iluvwritin Goddess_Rya it reminds me of a song i love to listent to its called "House of Pain" by Faster p***y Cat... there a one hit wonder and thats there hit it a favorit of mine and your poem is simmilar to it in a way yeah they were an 80's band that didn't last long they had a good ballad and a couple of other songs were good but never reached charts and they are not together anymore...i think *nods* yeah figgured
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Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2006 9:06 pm
Goddess_Rya iluvwritin Goddess_Rya iluvwritin Goddess_Rya it reminds me of a song i love to listent to its called "House of Pain" by Faster p***y Cat... there a one hit wonder and thats there hit it a favorit of mine and your poem is simmilar to it in a way yeah they were an 80's band that didn't last long they had a good ballad and a couple of other songs were good but never reached charts and they are not together anymore...i think *nods* yeah figgured
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