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 Posted: Mon Nov 28, 2011 11:42 am
Feel free to comment on any of these if you recognize them. Im going to copy memorable excerpts from fanfiction that strike me as making a character epic or otherwise. should be fun^_^
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Posted: Mon Nov 28, 2011 11:45 am
The sound of teeth grinding was audible from several feet away. Hyuuga Hiashi had seemed shocked, at first, at his daughter's violation of proper decorum. Especially as it was to comfort an ill-bred piece of trash that clearly had no idea how to behave in public.
He settled for glaring at her for a moment. Hopefully, when she looked back, she'd see his expression and realize the gaffe she had committed. That way she would know to return to her proper place without him having to break protocol as well.
Except she didn't turn around. Or even look back.
His sense of outrage building, Hiashi was about to step forward to retrieve his errant child when he blinked in confusion. The Aburame boy was standing with them as well now, engaging in very unusual behavior for one of his clan. Had that wretched brat infected his entire team with the seeds of madness?
He shook his head. That was a problem for the boy's parents to deal with. He had his own daughter to discipline. It was at this moment that two shinobi, both wearing the formal black tunic and pants, stepped forward, flanking him on each side.
Hiashi froze at the sudden violation of his personal space. He could banish them in an instant with a Kaiten, but to do so now, for anything less than an actual assassination attempt, was unthinkable. And that was a remote possibility, at best, as he recognized both men.
To his right, Hatake Kakashi spoke first. His lips barely moved under his ever-present mask, but the words were clear. "Appropriate weather for a funeral," he said.
"I suppose," Sarutobi Asuma rumbled, a little louder. "Rather not have any at all."
"True," Kakashi agreed. "Still, it's nice to see such a strong turnout. Making Jonin is hard work, something that people should recognize, even if they never see us doing our jobs, neh?"
"If we do it right, no one ever sees us," Asuma agreed.
Kakashi nodded. "Good to see that respect. It's important. Especially since Kurenai was one of us, right, Asuma?"
"Right, Kakashi."
Kakashi nodded again. "Good to see her team together like that. Shows how much she will be missed."
Hiashi made a sharp inhalation. If he thought the humiliation of the Hyuuga clan was some sort of tribute to—
"They're doing better than I did," Kakashi added, seemingly as an afterthought. "When my sensei died, I went on a bender, just so I'd be too drunk to attend the ceremony."
"I didn't know that," Asuma added quietly.
"Things were really a mess back then, I doubt anyone really noticed. I'm sure Sensei understood." Kakashi murmured. "Anyway," he added in a firmer voice, "I know you have no wish to do anything that might seem disrespectful to Kurenai-san's memory, so you'll stay right here and leave her team alone to say goodbye as they wish to."
"You have no right to interfere with my clan," Hiashi hissed under his breath.
"No, I don't," Kakashi agreed. "But I do have a right to share any jutsu I've acquired. You know, 'Copy-Cat Ninja Kakashi' and all that. Bingo book says I know over a thousand." He shrugged eloquently. "I know of at least two dozen that can neutralize or otherwise bypass eye bloodlines… like the Byakugan. Iruka's always after me to contribute some jutsu to the Academy curriculum, especially for their advanced jutsu workshops."
Hiashi froze in place. He turned his head fully toward the former ANBU Captain. "That's treason," he said harshly.
"No, not at all. I'm providing these to the village as a whole. Just because everyone else in the village learns how to fight against the Byakugan – if they have to – doesn't make it treason against Konoha, does it?"
"I don't have anything half so elegant," Asuma added. "I'll just kick your a** if you take one step towards those kids."
Hiashi turned toward the more direct threat. "Do you really think you can do that?" he asked with a sneer.
"A few days ago," Asuma replied in a low tone as the rear ranks of the assembly slowly departed, "the two of us were fighting two of the most dangerous missing-nins in the world. We were out of position or too slow to save a valued comrade from being killed. Now here you are, someone she clearly despised, trying to make an a** of yourself and disrupt her funeral." He paused. "How can we not?"
Hiashi barely stopped himself from lashing out at the fool and making an even bigger spectacle of himself. "You haven't heard the last of this," he snarled.
Kakashi merely nodded thoughtfully.
"Come, Neji," Hiashi commanded, and stalked toward the back of the Memorial Square.
Neji nodded and followed. His expression did not change as he caught the eye of his own sensei, who had a somber expression, but still spared his student a nod.
~Team 8: by S'TarKan
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Posted: Mon Nov 28, 2011 11:50 am
"You try to get the emotionally constipated and staunchly illogical Uchiha to do anything the way you think they will and then get back to me." She snarled. "I've tried threatening them, beating them, giving them what they ask for- all ended in disaster!"
Jiraiya held up his hands in surrender.
"So am I staying here tonight or are you teaching me those seals?" She snapped at Minato.
"I don't know that you can learn them in the few hours left of the day…" He stopped when he saw her heading up towards the stairs. "Where are you going?"
"Not sleeping on the couch again. You can if you want to, but I'm not responsible for the shape your back will be in in the morning." Musume said from the stairwell.
"You can't sleep in my room! Take the guest bedroom!"
Jiraiya cleared his throat.
"You can take the couch, dammit. You should have a house here, anyway." Minato scowled at Jiraiya.
"I like your bed better, anyway- it has the bonus of a warm body that comes with it!" Came the faint reply from the second floor. Minato blushed and hid his face in his hands.
"Just like a married couple." Jiraiya mused. "And you're not getting the benefits?" He asked with a pitying look at his first pupil.
"Argh!" Minato growled, before pulling out the blankets for the couch. "Fine, take the guest bedroom you freeloader." He glared at his couch like it was a traitor.
"She could sleep with me, Dad." Naruto offered.
"No!"
~fuzzy logic: by Deritine
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Posted: Mon Nov 28, 2011 11:53 am
I ran.
They were half a mile away, but if they were as fast as I was that was too close for comfort. It was three miles to the palace, and even that was within the range of Hinata's Byakugan. I wasn't going to lose them in the rubble no matter what I tried, and even if I could beat them it would take far more chakra than I could afford to spend right now. So I ran, weaving leaps and replacements and a few judicious body flickers into a chain of flickering movement that would get me to my destination in less than a minute. Assuming Naruto didn't just cover the whole city in clones. Where the hell was the next attack?
A thunderous roar behind me told me the next stage had finally started. I glanced over my shoulder to see four copies of Yugito unleashing their Nekomata on Naruto. Each of them spat a gigantic bolt of pure chakra at him, blowing away his clones and gouging out deep craters in the rubble.
Naruto's dragon form rose from the smoke as the pack of feline bijuu moved to surround him.
"Is this the best you can do, Sasuke?" He roared. "You think a bunch of little kittens are going to stop me? Dragon Sage Mode!"
I paled, and paused for a moment atop a crumbling pillar to look back again. My chakra senses confirmed that he wasn't bluffing.
"Oh, holy hell," I muttered. "He can channel sage chakra in dragon form? Sasuke, there'd better be a lot more ambush you didn't tell me about."
I turned, and concentrated on running faster.
~Time braid: by ShaperV (I highly recommend this fanfic. Time loop sakura/ hintata centric)
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Posted: Sun Dec 16, 2012 5:53 pm
Personal Custom Taijutsu style
Tempest fist
Mind your tongue
___Description:
Tempest fist favors a high, narrow stance with the elbows kept close to the body. Within the stance, arms are positioned across the vitals of the centerline. Shifting or turning within a stance is carried out variantly on the heels, balls, or middle of the foot depending on lineage. All attacks and counter-attacks are initiated from this firm, stable base. Tempest fist rarely compromises structure for more powerful attacks because this is believed to create defensive openings which may be exploited.
Structure is viewed as important, not only for reasons of defense, but also for attack. When the practitioner is effectively "rooted", or aligned so as to be braced against the ground, the force of the hit is believed to be far more devastating. Additionally, the practice of "settling" one's opponent to brace them more effectively against the ground aids in delivering as much force as possible to them.
Softness (via relaxation) and performing techniques in a relaxed manner, is fundamental to Tempest Fist. Tension reduces punching speed and power. Muscles act in pairs in opposition to each other (e.g. biceps and triceps). If the arm is tensed, maximum punching speed cannot be achieved as the biceps will be opposing the extension of the arm. In Tempest Fist, the arm should be relaxed before beginning the punching motion. Unnecessary muscle tension wastes energy and causes fatigue. Tense, stiff arms are less fluid and sensitive during trapping. A tense, stiff limb provides an easy handle for an opponent to push or pull with, whereas a relaxed limb provides an opponent less to work with. A relaxed, but focused, limb affords the ability to feel "holes" or weaknesses in the opponent's structure. With the correct forwarding these "holes" grant a path into attacking the opponent. Muscular struggle reduces a fight to who is stronger. Minimum brute strength in all movement becomes an equalizer in uneven strength confrontations.
___Notes:
• The combo's in this style are unique to the taijutsu class. Others can learn this style however if they are not of the taijutsu class this style is much easier to block. The combo's in this style are impossible to stop if you are not of the taijutsu class or are a higher rank than the shinobi using said style, after the first hit has been made.
• The reason for these combo's to be so difficult to dodge or block is the speed of their execution. These attacks are meant to get rid of a would be attacker in a matter of moments.
• Regardless of class, size of body, or experience, taking an open hit from one of these combo's will traumatize the body and leave the recipient in severe pain, likely needing medical attention.
• All techniques in this style are learned as if complex.
• To progress past stage 4 you must have won a spar or battle using only this style's techniques.
___S t a g e O n e [1]
Minor redirect
Simple // E Rank
The most basic technique's can leave an opponent wide open for an attack. This counter is made for punches, and is used by the person gently pushing away the opponents hand or a basic block and grab for the trap. This is usually followed up immediately by a swift counter.
Major Redirection
Simple // E Rank
Works similar to the minor redirection, however this counter catches the persons leg and either holds it for a catch follow up or tosses it to the side throwing the opponent off balance as their leg lands further behind them.
Deft strikes
Training, Passive//E Rank
The user, through training learns to throw out their punches and attacks from a relaxed position, increasing the speed and fluidity of how their attacks are made. This decreases the time the opponent has to react just enough to make them think twice before closing range with the user.
___S t a g e T w o [2]
Sloping hillside
Simple//D Rank
This is a side kick to the opponents ribs or stomach done from a standing position while you have a hold of your opponent in some way. This will easily force the air out of someone or crack ribs.
Howling Monkey
Simple//D Rank
This combo starts from a Minor Redirection counter. The moment the attack is blocked or redirected the user pushes a kick to the targets inner thigh to bring them to their knee. The user will then twist the targets arm, deliver a quick kick to their chest or ribs and a downward elbow to their head or between their shoulder blades. Finally the user will kick the falling target in the ribs sending them to the floor several feet back. This is the simplest combo in the style and is capable of inflicting severe trauma on a target.
Rapid Degradation
Simple//D Rank
The user makes use of both redirection techniques and various blocks and counters to simply ward off the attacker. No attempt at a strike is made at first. This can severely tease a would be attacker and the moment the opponent makes a wrong move they will find themselves bent over the users knee, wind knocked out of them, and severe pain wracking their body.
___S t a g e T h r e e [3]
Utter Pain
Simple // C rank
Starting from the Major Redirection the user keeps ahold of their targets leg. At any given moment the user drives an elbow at either the joint of the knee or the hip, outright breaking either. Needless to say this will cause SEVERE pain.
Hissing serpent
Simple // C rank
Starting from a Major Redirection the user throws the targets leg to the side to throw them off balance. With the motion their body makes the user will then deliver a swift punch to their targets stomach to bend them over and immediately proceed to clap them over both their ears with a hard smack to each side. This will deafen them. The final hit is made with a quick retraction of their hands as the user moves to one side to deliver a potentially lethal blow to the side of their windpipe with the knife of their hand.
Grounded Eagle
Simple // C rank
A simple combo in execution, the user catches the target in the trap version of the minor redirection and steps to their opposite side, thereby crossing the targets arms with their chest. A quick knifehand chop will be made to the bridge of a targets nose to stun them as the user moves his foot in front of the target to sweep their feet from under them causing them to fall and spin as the user still has their arm. Finally the user with drop into a knee to their chest to keep them down and deliver a massive punch to their face. This technique is 80% certain to knock an opponent out if it lands.
___S t a g e F o u r[4]
Rising wind
Simple // B Rank
Another simple technique in execution, this combo starts from a minor redirection of a thrown punch. The user after pushing aside the punch will deliver an open palmed punch to turn their head downward, a swift knee to the bridge of their nose, and lastly a second knee into their gut ending with them being tossed away from the user and to the floor.
Advanced Redirection
Complex // B Rank
As with the other redirection attack, normal taijutsu can be countered but by surrounding their arms with a coating of chakra, this version can be used on harmful substances and weapons. This effectively lets the user use his body as a more effective tool to combat kenjutsu users.
___S t a g e F i v e[5]
Deft Precision
Training // A Rank
Through rigorous training the user knows exactly which spots to hit to cause the most pain. These points are located allover the body and even the largest of people can be brought to their knees with a few simple attacks. This technique lets the user accurately target pressure points in combat.
Blistering Heat
Simple // A Rank
A dangerous combo to be caught in. This starts from a simple trap, pulling the opponents arm in close. With the hand caught in the users the user delivers a strong elbow into the ribs of their target, cracking them on impact. Using the quick moment of the opponent being in insane pain the user will deliver a second elbow destroying the rest of the targets ribs that were previously broken. Using their arm as leverage the user then flips them over his back and to the ground, inflicting more pain from the broken ribs. While their target is one the ground the user will give a sharp kick to their broken ribs, capitalizing on the pain being inflicted. Finally the user lifts their leg above their head and drops their heel with force on their opponent, crushing their chest. This will put them out of the fight, or kill them. Medical treatment WILL be required if this is not fatal.
Pelting Rain
Simple // A Rank
Using the opening granted from minor redirection the user will keep a hold on the opponents arm, throw a kick to their opponents kidney stunning them. With this opening the user will wrap their leg over the opponents captured arm and push them to the ground using their leg over their arm, causing some pain to their arm as well. Then following them to the mat, the user will unleash a violent volley of punches to the targets chest and face, giving them no time between attacks. This can kill a target in a matter of moments from the amount of blunt force trauma being given.
___S t a g e S i x[6]
Tempest
Training // S Rank
The user can now apply chakra to any of their techniques. This isnt the normal aura of chakra but large quantities of the raw element springing from their strikes. During this state the users eyes will glow according to their element in a visualization of raw power. Fire will burn in their eyes, water will deeply reflect, lightning will make the colors of their eyes very vivid and occasionally people will see a storm or a few arcs of lightning manifest in the eyes, wind will give them a clouded appearance and earth will make them seem hard and unforgiving. The elemental attacks will manifest from the striking surfaces of said attacks during all movement of the users when activated. This increases damage from all attacks by a full rank as well as adding elemental damage of equal rank to the attacks themselves..
-_-_-_-T a i j u t s u M a s t e r:
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Anyone using this style in any other guild without permission from holy rinaku will be reported
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