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Muirgheal "Tamm" Irving

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MeroMerokono

PostPosted: Sat Nov 26, 2011 11:03 am


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Name: Muirgheal Irving

Nickname(s)/Alias(es): Tamm or, less commonly, Heal. She never uses her birth name. Instead she always introduces herself by her nickname, Tamm.

Race: Shinigami

Rank:

Rank:

Squad:

Physical Description:

A slender and flexible woman, Tamm has a way to catch your eye. Born with icy blue hair and eyes, Tamm is highly unusual looking woman. Although that doesn’t mean bad looking, she catches more attention by simply looking strange. Although she has perfect posture and an oval-shaped face, Tamm bears a large scar on her face, leading from an inch above her nose-bridge down to the far side of her right cheek. The scar leads right over her right eye and is very distracting to those attempting to have a conversation with her, that is if her normal scowl didn’t scare them away first. Usually, Tamm hides her scar by using a bandana and folding it over her eye. However, she may not hide the scar if she dosn't like, or trust, the people who she is interacting with.
Due to the strange color of her hair and eyes, and the fact that they seem to unnerve some people, Tamm takes great care of washing and cutting her silky short hair. The farthest she’ll let it grow is shoulder length, but that is extremely rare. Most often, it’ll be just long enough to cover her ears. Fond of earrings, Tamm loves elaborate designs hidden under her hair.
Rather tall for most women, Tamm stands at 5'8" and weighs around 140 pounds. With not much muscle, Tamm's body is supple and elegant. Those who see Tamm from a distance often view her walk as cat-like, sure-footed with the swift elegance of a hunter.
Tamm loathes the standard shinigami uniform and has gone as far as tearing some of her old shihakushos just for fun. In the seireitei, she is usually seen wearing a shihakisho with a pastel green sash with a small sparrow charm dangling down.


Personality:

Bold, vindictive, cold, and haughty, Tamm isn't afraid of saying what she. To those she doesn’t know, she can be extremely violent and ambitious. To her friends, she is thoughtful, brave, and determined.
Not friendly with any person, Tamm is a great lover of animals. In fact, many don’t think she even has a heart until they see her with an animal. With even a small lizard, Tamm become a caring, playful, trusting individual; the kind of person many would be happy to trust their lives with.
When in a relaxed setting, Tamm's emotions tend to be easy to read while in a stressful situation Tamm's emotions are completely hidden. Often thought of as feral, Tamm's trust is easy to gain if you know how, which is to say through kindness, patience, and strength. Although she hates most people, she tends to look up to the 'strong, silent type'

Reiatsu:
Always around, Tamm's reaitsu manifests itself as smoke. Since Tamm usually holds her reiatsu in, the smoke is hidden, but she always smells like smoke, a strange contrast with her icy personality and hair.


Zanpakutou:

Zanpakutou Spirit:

Kimyona Kemuri (or simply Ke) takes the form of an extremely graceful and large scarlet bird with golden tail feathers. Very mature and kind, Ke is the sort of creature which seems to glow with wisdom and strength, the very sort of person which Tamm both looks up to and needs to counter her immense distrust of others. Ke tends to be formal and loves riddles, even though his skill with them is zero. Warm voiced, Ke takes the form of a man with dark red hair when summoned from outside of Tamm’s world. The only time he can come out in his ‘true form’ is when summoned during Bankai.

Inner World: Tamm’s inner world is a very overgrown forest, peaceful and mysterious; a place where one could go to forget and be alone. Mist constantly drifts through the enormous tree trunks, though it isn’t cold. The world appears as if it is about too see a freeze, but it stays pleasantly warm. When ever Tamm comes to her world, she always enters in a small clearing with a small stone temple standing on an island in a small lake in the center of the clearing. The temple is where Ke usually shows himself.

Sealed Form:

In sealed form, Tamm’s zanpakuto appears as a wakazashi with bright blue wrappings, a slightly curved handle, and a tsuba designed with flames surrounding the blade. The scabbard is made of larch, a light cream colored wood. A small sparrow charm is set into the wood right under the sword’s opening.

(Not obtained yet)


Shikai Name/Release Phrase:

"Supaku, Kimyōna Kemuri."

Kimyona Kemuri seems to separate into a faintly glowing full-body shield and a one-handed sword with a basket hilt, both sword and shield smoking. A warm gust of wind usually accompanies the release, raising the temperature of the surrounding area by a couple of degrees.

Shikai Description:

Tamm's shikai appears in two parts, one as a sword and one as a shield. The shield is as tall as Tamm and appears to be carved entirely from a monstrously large garnet. The shield is rock hard and gives off smoke. Tamm's sword is shaped quite strangely. The hilt appears to be made of gold and the blade seems to be made of a single sickle shaped large ruby. Both the curved back of the blade and the catching curve of the blade are edged and the sword, too, smokes. Both sword and shield give off a warm, red light which catches the craggy sides of the zanpakuto and give it an eerie appearance as it lights the smoke blood red. The sword and shield, despite the weight normal rocks that size would weigh, are the same weight as a normal buckler and katana. Only the bulkiness of the shield hinders Tamm.


Shikai Powers:

Kimyona Kemuri is a weapon as unique as its owner. The smoke constantly ‘scratches’ at her opponent’s eyes and its smoke scent is often overwhelming, leaving those with sensitive noses confused and exhausted. The blade and shield often unnerve those who see it and can stress cowardly enemies into fleeing.

✿1. – Licking Flames: With a swing, Kimyona Kemuri can produce flames which will curl around the blade and gather in the space around the curved blade. Then whenever the blade or shield is hit, the flames will explode out, attempting to severely burn the attacker.

✿2. – Curling Smoke: When Tamm wills it, the smoke can gather into a condensed ball of smoke which will then throw itself, dodge able speed, at any one enemy, temporarily blinding the enemy and sending him or her into a coughing fit.

✿3. – Covering Smoke: A last resort; when Tamm finds herself, or an ally, trapped and unable to fight their oppressors, she can summon a mass amount of smoke to cover an area about forty feet around to escape. If pursued of attacked, the smoke will simply stay where it is. Attacks will go through the smoke, but will not push it away unless the enemy is stronger than Tamm.

(Not obtained yet)

Bankai Name:

“Bankai, Shinzhao Kimyona Kemuri”

Bankai Description:

The appearance of the weapon and shield remain the same as in shikai. While the weapon and shield do not change, Tamm gains red and gold arm bracers, & chest plate.

Shinzhao Kimyona Kemuri now released an extreme amount of smoke and ash (ash falling from the sky like snow), capable of covering an area of 200 feet in less than ten minutes (ten posts). Flame constantly surrounds the shield and sword and shoots a blast whenever swung. Tamm seems to glow in a deep red ‘battle aura’ which is extremely intimidating.

Bankai Powers:

✿1. – Dancing Flames: Tamm sticks her sword into the ground and columns of flames randomly shoot up from the ground (near an enemy) with such heat that the ground near the attacks will become glassified.

✿2. – Smothering Ash: Ash falling from the sky will now cut when it lands on an enemy. Lasts three posts.

✿3. – (Passive) In bankai, whenever Tamm uses “Curling Smoke” the smoke will follow her enemy for one post. (One usage, two post cooldown)

✿4. - Flaming Rage: As a last resort, Tamm can summon the spirit of her zanpakuto into a physical being in bird form. The bird stands at a towering height and the air around it drastically heats up. The bird can attack with flames; use any of Tamm's attacks (excluding Smothering Ash), can shoot feathers like arrows, and is very talented at fighting other spirits.

Special Accessories:

The only special accessory Tamm owns is a thick golden earring about two inches long. It hangs like a thick clip and is the only reminder Tamm has of her old friends.

Skills/Abilities:

- Animals (attracts them and can keep them calm. They always seem to like her)
- Air-grip
- Good cook
- Hunting

Kidou:

Bakudou:

  • 1. Restrain (Sai)
  • 4. Crawling Rope (Hainawa)
  • 8. Repulse (Seki)
  • 9. Strike (Geki)
  • 9. Disintegrating Circle (Hourin)


Hadou:

  • 1. Thrust (Shou)
  • 4. White Lightning (Byakurai)

    Biography:

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    Having no memories of her childhood and no family willing to adopt her, Tamm began wandering around the soul society. The going was rough, since most members of the Soul Society had no need to eat or drink, but she quickly learned how to hunt and gather in the woods and she stole what she could when she came to towns. After a couple of years of this, the locals began to view her as cursed and started attacking her whenever she came near. With her ice blue hair and eyes, she looked every bit the evil spirit.
    Unknowingly, Tamm wandered to a village not far from the one where they saw her as "ghost girl". She hardly had time to look over the shocked faces of the villagers before three men ambushed her from behind, one stabbing her in her upper-arm, and one cutting her right eye. Only the fact that Tamm was so used to running away and living in the forest saved her. After she reached the forest and climber up a tree the men gave up.
    When they left Tamm had time to look at her wounds. Fortunintly, her arm wasn't cut too deep, but the cut on her face was bleeding profucily. The man had, luckily for Tamm, missed her eye, but had left a deep cut from an inch above her eye down in a slanted line reaching mid-cheek.
    Having lived in the woods for years, Tamm made a mixture of certain herbs and garlic to help her wounds, but she began to avoid all interaction with people.
    Months later, after compleatly stopping her wanderings and staying in the woods, Tamm recognised a group of shinigami from the seireitei set up a camp right below her tree-house



    (not done)


    Powers:

    Shikai
    Kido & Bakudo: 1-10
    Air-grip

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  • PostPosted: Sat Nov 26, 2011 5:46 pm


    Ok. Since I'm the first to post here I'll say everything I can think of.

    While a picture can help give a description more meaning, we still require a description of the appearance of your character, usually around 4-6 sentences long. How is she built, does she wear the bandanna a certain way, yadda yadda, little details like that. The same can be said of the personality. instead of just giving the singe details, try and think of how they think, and how they would react to certain situations. Does she show emotion a lot, or can she hide it? Is she outwardly expressive, or more withdrawn. Things like that.

    Same goes for your released zanpaktou appearance, as well as shikai appearance. If the shield is as big as her, it would weight a decent amount. Is it made of a light material, or what? Pretty much the one thing you need in your profile is description.

    And as for the bankai, I'm a little confused as to how the elemental resistance comes in. I can see the shield being able to fend off attacks if it is made of a certain material, but to say that you get elemental resistance to things that were not mentioned in shikai is a bit much. As it looks in your shikai your zanpaktou is a flame/smoke type, as well in the bankai information and attacks, so where does dark, wind, and lightning zanpaktou resistance come into play?

    the last thing is the Bio. I know it can be kind of annoying writing one out, but usually it is expected to be at least a paragraph. You can say she doesn't remember much, but what are her memories? She has to remember something, otherwise she wouldn't remember she was a shinigami, she had a zanpaktou, anything like that.

    I apologize if I come off as blunt or rude. But I'm just trying to help. Just post, but don't quote this, if you have any questions. Wouldn't want to make your profile cluttered with long posts.

    ^_^

    Asuma Haruka


    MeroMerokono

    PostPosted: Sun Nov 27, 2011 8:08 am


    You didn't come off as rude at all! In fact, I appreciate it when someone actually looks at my profile instead of just accepting it.

    For the weight, it says that the shield and sword are practically weightless. If they weren’t the zanpakuto would be impossible to lift. Since she's 5'7" and the shield would be about 5'3" and made of precious stone, well... You get the picture.

    I'll change the resistant elements. Now that I reviewed it they don't make sense. The dark-resistance was made with the idea that since her zanpakuto is glowing, it can weaken dark attacks. And if I had a reason for the others, I've long frogotten.

    As for the bio, I'll just re-do the entire thing. I said she didn't have any memories because I really didn't want to type a background. I usually either do nothing or an entire story.

    This is probably the worst profile I've done all year. As soon as I brought it out I kind of regreted it... Everything is seperated (detail wise) to give the profile a more "official" look to it, but that's just getting in the way now
    PostPosted: Sun Nov 27, 2011 10:29 pm


    Accepted~

    Asuma Haruka


    KyrosDevil XIII

    PostPosted: Mon Nov 28, 2011 3:11 am


    Sorry to do this but I have to pull rank on this. Asuma, I'm sorry for over riding your call but there are a few more things that need to be said.

    First off, you'll want to switch the profile over to a new skeleton (more than likely the one provided to you). This isn't so much a problem for us as it is for the people who made the skeleton in the other guild.

    Next you'll need to remove any kidou other than the starting ones (1-10). This means no unnamed or unnumbered kidou as well. If this policy changes I will personally get ahold of you and tell you which ones you may add in.

    The bit about the smoke from your shikai overpowering low strength opponents doesn't really make sense so you'll either want to flesh it out a bit more, or take it off. I could see it happening for opponents that have a delicate sense of smell as it would be sensory override. Otherwise it wouldn't make much sense. If you can explain it I'm all ears.

    On the subject of your shikai I would like you to realize that just because it is your zanpukatou and is 'weightless' it does not mean you'll be able to throw it around like nothing. It is a part of your soul so it won't be as cumbersome as say, a shield made of granite that you make, but you'd still have to feel the weight of the shield to some extent and moving a shield that large is incredibally difficult because of the dimensions. Just food for thought, you may want to size it down or come up with some way to play it with the weaknesses.

    Your second shikai attack will need some rewording. How fast is extreme speed? And just because the intended effect is to blind your foe, and leave them in a coughing fit, it really dictates on how the person your playing with reacts You don't necessarily need to reword that part, but keep in mind it may not always go as you want.

    You're third technique is interesting, but makes it hard to approve as it negates anothers abilities. I would rather you word it that it is difficult to blow away (possibly because there is more smoke constantly replenishing it). This allows you the cover you want and doesn't negate anothers attack. Also keep in mind that the strength of your 'oppressors' will influence how effective it is. A fifth seat with shikai won't be able to keep a Captain away for example. Inversely a fifth seat shikai would be almost impossible to blow away with an unseated member attacking it.

    Bankai appearance: Why would you gain a tiger-faced war helmet when your spirit is a giant bird? Lol Just pointing it out.

    Your first bankai technique needs a bit more detail. How many columns are created? Can she dictate where the columns show up (if so it's not really random). Also just as a side note, glass only forms when silica is melted and cooled. If there isn't enough silica in the ground, no glass will form.

    How long does Smothering Ash last? Does it effect friends and foes alike? Does ALL the ash cut?

    No sapping reiatsu. Just no. That's one of the things that isn't really allowed here. Sorry ^.^'

    Flaming Rage looks fine (I'll have to talk to some of the others to make sure) but as long as you take damage at the same rate as the giant bird I don't see why it wouldn't be allowed. It would take a great deal of energy though and would likely force you to revert into an unreleased state. Side note: Why does it matter that the bird can fight dragons? Do you intend to fight a lot of dragons while in bankai or is it just a side note?

    The rest seems okay save for some spelling and grammar errors. The only think you may want to ask about is the knife and sword mastery having just come out of the Shojo Academy.

    Sorry if this is a bit scatter brained. It's a bit after 2 here and I'm kinda out of it. And sorry for having to interject after Asuma said you were good to go. There were just some things I needed to say.
    PostPosted: Mon Nov 28, 2011 6:05 pm


    I can't believe you caught the mask thing! I didn't even notice it untill you pointed it out!

    I re-did the entire profile and hopefully I explained everything throughly enough in it. And don't worry about checking it again. I'd rather someone point it out now then when I'm actually role-playing.

    MeroMerokono


    KyrosDevil XIII

    PostPosted: Tue Nov 29, 2011 8:28 am


    Better. The last two things are:

    1. Your physical description tends to focus only on her head and face. How tall is she? How much does she way? Does she carry herself with any particular fashion? I know you had some of this in your list and I meant for you to add it in the paragraph when I had to remove the list. Lol

    2. As of right now I don't believe we're allowing new members to have shikai. I will check with the other crew on that and get back to you. For now I want you to put [Not Achieved] and once I figure out the final verdict I will send you a message or not. If the case is now then I'm sure it won't be long before you get it the old fashion way. You seem to be fairly skilled so all you'd need is the activity.

    Once those two things are done I will consider this officially approved.
    PostPosted: Tue Nov 29, 2011 3:45 pm


    Alright, I finished with that.

    MeroMerokono


    KyrosDevil XIII

    PostPosted: Tue Nov 29, 2011 6:13 pm


    Approved.
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