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 Posted: Sat Oct 29, 2011 7:42 pm
ғeel free to call me. . .
Yuki
чou think I'm what age? No, I'm. .
13 almost 14
The υniverse welcomed me on. . .
nov 13
α lot of people say I'm. . . Yuki is a Inacent girl She is sweet and kind to anyone she meets.But She doss have a Dark Firce fighting side but its rarely seen because shes shy it nomly comes out In times of danger or if its to protect her friends. shes a loyal friend and wonce she is a friend with somone she normly stays friends with them.
she grew up in a small vilage intill about the age of 4 but cant remember anything else other than being there. when she was 6+ she traveld the world lerning differant fighting techneques.when she turnd 12 she herd of this school and decided to try to in role it took her the past year to travel here.she has no memery of what hapend between 4 and 6 so she dosent know why she left the village or why she was alone and can't remember her family.
Yuki dosent know about her powers but in the past 2 years shes been haveing werd experances which is why she wanted to come to this school so she could mabe find out what is happaning to her and help her remeber her past.
I aםore. . .
○ friendly people
○ sweet treats
○ love
○ meeting new people (even tho shes shy)
єvery time one of these come into my life, things just go downhill . . .
○ power flashes
○ people talking and asking about family.
(there are more but i will put them in later)
мy House, Dorm, and Homeroom are. . .
House: [House, Please edit in when you're assigned one.]
Dorm: [Dorm Room, Please edit in when you're assigned one.]
Homeroom:
чou see, I'm controlled by . . .
Yuki Garaa Love
shes a new student and is first seen stumbleing into the nuses office after being atacked on the way there.
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Posted: Sun Oct 30, 2011 9:37 am
ғeel free to call me. . .
Ren Osamu
υnless you're blind, you should see that I'm. . .
male
чou think I'm what age? No, I'm. .
15
The υniverse welcomed me on. . .
october 31st
α lot of people say I'm. . .
Ren is taken by most people as a truble maker, but he never rely means to get in truble hes loud and hates being talked down to he works hard and is very powerfall. .He's very smart, friendly, thortful and caring towards other people.but some people are frightend of him as they think he comes across as dark. He is very athletic and can be hot tempered as well as protective towards people he really cares about.
can you blame me for what I am now? After all, I grew up. . .
Ren never new his perents and was brought up in a orphanage. When Ren was 7 years old, he relized his powers and stated working on controling them. while he was in the ophanage he dident make meny friends because agen they thort he come across as dark and never saw beond that. As he got older he grew stronger with his powers and when he turnd 11 he joined Fuyu academy.
Ren isn't much more popular than he was in the orphanage but he seems to be quite popular with girls. he has a few friends but mainly he only hangs out and talks to his friend Tarou but they arnt in many classes together.. He loves training and has alwase wanted to lern diferant fighting tequnes so he can fight as well as use his powers.Ren is also a black belt in kendo,when he was in the ophanage he beged and beged them to get him kendo lesons and eventuly they caved in. He wears a locket around his neck ever its the only thing he has from his perants it's his most prized possession. in his last few years at the opanage i little girl named miki became quite atached to him and he still gos back to vist her weekly she sees him as a big brother.
Ren came to Fuyu because he wanted to get better at useing his powers.
αbilities? Yeah, I have . . .
Ren dosent know where his powers come from sice he dident know his perents but he has control over water fire earth and electrizaty basicly the 4 elements he also has healing powers.
I aםore. . .
○ training
○ weponry
○ Music
○ Art
○ meeting new people
○ being active in any way
єvery time one of these come into my life, things just go downhill . . .
○ people being afrade of me
○ people talking down on me
family related things
мy House, Dorm, and Homeroom are. . .
House:
Dorm:
Homeroom:
чou see, I'm controlled by . . .
Yuki garaa Love
http://i1131.photobucket.com/albums/m551/Yuki-S/th_axelhead.jpg
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Posted: Sun Oct 30, 2011 12:32 pm
ғeel free to call me. . .
Tamiko Naomi
υnless you're blind, you should see that I'm. . .
A girl
чou think I'm what age? No, I'm. .
21
The υniverse welcomed me on. . .
september 1st
α lot of people say I'm. . .
Tamiko is Cheerful and brightens everyones day.she loves to help others and people alwae come to her with advice.
can you blame me for what I am now? After all, I grew up. . .
she grew up in the area with her mum and grandma but she berly ever saw her mum because of work and her dad was abuseive and hit her when she was yung so her mum and grandma had to protect her all the time. she did a lot of volantery work at the ophanage while she was in school her grand ma used to own a shop in town.
αbilities? Yeah, I have . . .
control over plants and fire she also has the power to control peoples minds to get them to tell the truth.
I aםore. . .
○ helping people
○ training
○ sewing
○ Summer&spring
єvery time one of these come into my life, things just go downhill . . .
○ bullys
○ her dad
○ spiders
мy House, Dorm, and Homeroom are. . .
House: Don't have one, for now
Dorm: I don't have a dorm yet
Homeroom:
чou see, I'm controlled by . . .
Yuki Garaa Love
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Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2011 11:14 pm
Hello!
Could you please use the original version of the profile skeleton? It's easier to read and has a cleaner look.
Please read through what you've written in all three profiles, you have quite a few grammatical and spelling errors- we're literate here. : )
I see you have a small image for Ren, but could you put it in the directed area, and find images for Yuki and Tamiko as well?
Yuki:
Please separate her personality from her history.
Why can't she remember certain periods of her life? How did she travel the world and learn various fighting techniques when she was only 6? What "weird experiences" has she been having?
When you add the "Abilities" section back in, don't forget to explain her powers.
Ren:
What is the significance of the locket, other than that his parents gave it to him? (You say he never knew them)
Powers: Too many- it would be god-modding. Please pick only one or two of those you have listed. (Control of a single element counts as 1 power on its own.)
Tamiko:
Please add more to her personality and history. Why was her father abusive? Why didn't her mother and grandmother take Tamiko and leave him if he was so bad?
Lastly, please select one of the four homerooms for each of your characters. (Magics&Weaponry, Math&Sciences, Art&Music, World History&Magical Creatures)
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Rukia Arisawa Vice Captain
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