This is my first experiment with iambic pentameter. I hope you enjoy! ^_^
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If love was but a wondrous feeling bright,
All happiness would never be the past.
My heart would never fail to feel so light!
My feelings for you, love, would always last.
If love was but a simple kiss hello,
Every day before you left for work.
missing a syllable My heart would always beat for you, and so,
my smile would never be an ugly smirk.
But love is something so much more than that,
It's something so complex, I cannot say.
Love is what I waited for while I sat,
the natural emphasis is on the first syllable in "waited", your beat's thrown off And waiting for my love I sat all day.
It seems that love is more strange than I know.
I can't imagine that my love can grow.
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