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 Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2011 8:23 pm
Enshara The shikai ability is fine now. Shikai one: can you place range that the blood you shoot from the sword can go? Also, does the blood come off like a bullet or a long whip type of effect Shikai two: Please state the strength of the burn and for how long the effect lasts Shikai three: What is the purpose of this ability. The shikai abilities are all supposed to be attacks but this doesn't seem to have a purpose. 3rd is so she can get close to her prey, or i they decide to get to close to her. It's like a back off thing. May change the radius for just a little more. Will add effect to the list for 2nd, and first could be like a whip.
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Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2011 8:26 pm
Okay please add in those details and add in more detail for the third shikai. Even if you are a soldier rank you are only permitted to use shikai 1 and 2 just to forewarn you. Also, we let you fill out all the slots on the profile for your attacks that way you dont have to worry about filling them out when you go up in rank. So please go ahead and fill in the bankai information as well when you are done with the shikai.
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Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2011 8:28 pm
Well if she is going to be a member of my squad, since she has applied to mine, she might as well create a 4th shikai since my squad ability allows soldiers to use 3 shikai attacks, officers 4 shikai attacks, Lieutenants 4 shikai attacks and 2 bankai. Captain 4 shikai and 3 bankai.
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Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2011 8:30 pm
Reddeye Gojiro Kiryu Well if she is going to be a member of my squad, since she has applied to mine, she might as well create a 4th shikai since my squad ability allows soldiers to use 3 shikai attacks, officers 4 shikai attacks, Lieutenants 4 shikai attacks and 2 bankai. Captain 4 shikai and 3 bankai. ah... gonna need to start thinking again...
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Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2011 8:33 pm
Enshara Okay please add in those details and add in more detail for the third shikai. Even if you are a soldier rank you are only permitted to use shikai 1 and 2 just to forewarn you. Also, we let you fill out all the slots on the profile for your attacks that way you dont have to worry about filling them out when you go up in rank. So please go ahead and fill in the bankai information as well when you are done with the shikai. Have fixed it
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Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2011 8:38 pm
Lady Lieselotte Enshara Okay please add in those details and add in more detail for the third shikai. Even if you are a soldier rank you are only permitted to use shikai 1 and 2 just to forewarn you. Also, we let you fill out all the slots on the profile for your attacks that way you dont have to worry about filling them out when you go up in rank. So please go ahead and fill in the bankai information as well when you are done with the shikai. Have fixed it For Shikai 2 what is the manual way to remove the burning effect. There also needs to be a percentage effect for the burn as well. Meaning it as a 50/50 chance of working. I dont see anything wrong with the third shikai now but if another crew suggests for you to edit it please be sure to follow their instructions. Make the changes that your captain has said and add in your bankai and i'll look it over again.
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Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2011 9:28 pm
shikai four: There needs to be a limit to how many times you can use this ability in battle.
Try to clarify you bankai ability a bit more.
Bankai 1: Does this attack do anything other then form a tornado? Does it stay up until the strand is broken or is there a time limit to it?
Bankai 2: Because this is a like entering another demension please state how long she can be in the puddle before she must emerge. There must be a time limit for this and state how many times in battle she can use this ability.
Also you are permitted three bankai because of the squad ability.
Also the release phase is something like (like mine for example) "Come into the light Kousetsu."
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