X_x Dekita x_X
I liked it <3, very funny, but maybe you could have put a "better" ending. Like them arriving or finishing doing what they had to. 'Cos it sorta ends harshly...
That's my point of view but apart from that I lauphed alot, and even my bro -who doesn't know the caracters- lauphed and said it was good !
Are you thinking of writing another seen ? A sorta follow-up ? *want's more to read*
Yeah! Sure. I was kinda trapped in how creative I could be. Since I was planning on being able to perform it, and I was running everything, set design and all. But since I'm no longer using it as a school project for a One Act I can add more to it and more Acts. I'll just consider that Act 1.
Any one want to suggest what their up to? All I can think of at this moment is some interview scenes (which are all playing out in my mind) and a concert which would be kinda hard. I don't know any suggestions?
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