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PostPosted: Thu Sep 08, 2011 8:14 pm


~ Critiquing is Love! ~

If you see something grammar-wise that's confusing or misspelled, or just want to share your thoughts on an overall piece, or anything to that effect, please post here. If it is a statement that may take a conversation such as 'I can't believe this happened!' then please make yourself a thread in this subforum where you can host discussion. This is here for you to post so I know if you've read, and whether or not you like the stories, and what I can change or fix.

This is important, please use this thread as much as you're able. I NEED critisism! XP
PostPosted: Fri Feb 17, 2012 5:04 pm


I love the Book of Jeremy. Its such cute writing little Jeremy is sooo adorable! I really like the current part where is shows kindness can even overcome a language barrier its adorable and a lovely message.

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 17, 2012 7:26 pm


Aw, I'm so glad you read it! XP And even more glad you liked it! >A<; Wait 'till you see the next part; I think its hilarious. <3
PostPosted: Fri Feb 17, 2012 7:44 pm


Well yes Keshet demands I read it..plus I enjoy his story. You know Keshet hardly knows anything about Jeremy. He doesn't talk about himself at all he just listens to all of Keshet's bad history.

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 01, 2012 5:08 pm


Oh dear me you poor boy. *pets Jeremy* someone can't hold their liquor.
PostPosted: Thu Mar 01, 2012 5:38 pm


Jeremy: No. v.v No I can't. I couldn't then and I still can't today.

Wait 'till I tell you the story of when he learned what a 'jello shot' was! *Big, evil grin*


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PostPosted: Fri Mar 02, 2012 3:24 am


Keshet: *hugs him* I'll make a point never to let you drink then *squeezes but can totally hold a ton of liquor*
PostPosted: Sun Mar 04, 2012 4:23 am


Jeremy: ^_^ Thank you, Keshet.I am sorry you had to see me like this.


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PostPosted: Sun Mar 04, 2012 5:15 pm


Keshet: Mates shouldn't hide anything from each other *smiles*
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