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Posted: Fri Aug 26, 2011 10:17 am

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Name: Netsu Kanjo

Age: [Actual:_583__] [Looks:__16_]

Birthday: (Optional)

Height: 6ft

Weight: 135 lb

Body Type: Thin,muscular

Hair Color: Brown

Eye Color: original is red

Gender: Male

Sexuality: Straight

Personality: Netsu is the kind of person who has alot of emotions. But most of the time he is nervous around people he has not met and when he does talk with people he's not comfortable with he stutters. The only person he feels comfortable talking with is Kasai. Netsu was rejected as a child so he doesn't talk with to many people thats why he is so nervous about them.

Race: Shinigami

Species: Dragon

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Division
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Division: 8

Seat: Solider

Squad Ability: (If Learned)

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Spells
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[Hado]
4. Byakurai (白雷, Pale Lightning)
31. Shakkahō (赤火砲, Shot of Red Fire)
32. Ōkasen (黄火閃, Yellow Fire Flash)
33. Sōkatsui (蒼火墜, Blue Fire, Crash Down)
35. Breaking Palm
52. Bakuhatsu no Chakudan (Detonating Impact)
54. Haien (廃炎, Abolishing Flames)
72. Burst Geyser
73. Burning Spirit

[Bakudo]
35. Fushibi (伏火, Ambush Flare)
37. Tsuriboshi (吊星, Suspending Star)
39. Enkosen (円閘扇, Arc Shield)
60. Hitoshirenu Nankan

[Jokou]
3. Blue Mist
10. Doragon no Hifu
22. Bikan (Beautiful Sight)
35. Misutobodi
60. Doragon no Kawa

[Chiyudo]

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Shinigami Abilities
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~Dashing~
A most basic technique that allows the user to throw him/herself to a certain direction using a certain angle of which way the the stance is directed and executed. Based on an individual's atributes, dashing can be quite a moderately fast move instead of running. Also depending on the distance, dashing can be quite useful if in closer range to the opponent. This technique is basically for all ranks.

~Furikkā (Flicker step)~
This technique was created by soldiers and officers after seeing how lieutenants and captains had a technique that allows them to move faster than the eye can follow, after studying Shunpo the soldiers and officers came up with this technique similar to Shunpo but different from it as well. Similar to Shunpo, a movement technique that allows the user to move faster than the eye can follow. This technique requires a very high level of training, thus a most difficult one to obtain. One, who is of a high soldier ranking, must be able to possess Furikkā. Furthermore, not like Shunpo this technique is only for short-range but none the less it is a speed known to be the exceeding ability than dashing. For soldiers it is nearly mastered, yet not perfect. Therefore, a soldier can only move 1-3 feet with this step. For officers Furikkā is fully perfected and move 1-6 feet with this step. Once lieutenant rank they loose this ability and gain Shunpo.

~Garganta~
Through out researching the gateway that Arrancars and Hollows use to leave and enter Hueco Mundo, Shinigamis and Vizards came up and made their own version that is similar to the original in every way but before they can open the gate an incantation must be said before hand, the incantation is: "My right hand is the stone that bridges worlds. My left hand is the blade that binds reality. The black-haired shepherd is hung from a chair. Stratus clouds come, and I strike down the ibis". If you want more info on this just visit Arrancar Skeleton (New) and look under "Hollow Abilities".

~Senkaimon~
(穿界門, World Penetration Gate) is the dimensional gateway which Shinigami use to enter and leave Soul Society by unlocking it. When guided by a Jigokuchō, the Senkaimon takes the form of a waiting room entered through a sliding door. Humans can also use such a gate through the use of Reishihenkanki (霊子変換機, Spirit Exchangers), which convert solid matter into spirit particles.

The Tenkai Kecchu (転界結柱, World-Shifting Binding-Posts) is a variant on this gate by using four linked points to create one spiritual unit of area radius that swaps something that it encircles with something else in Soul Society.

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Zanpakuto
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Zanpakuto Size:
Height:3ft
Weight:15 lb
Width:2in
Thickness:1/2in

Zanpakuto Guard: A dragon crest

Zanpakuto Sealed (Sword) Form:
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Zanpakuto Type: Fire manipulation

Zanpakuto Name: [Name:__Kasai__] [Meaning:__Fire__]

Zanpakuto Spirit:
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(Regular form (Emotion normal))

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(When in normal flames (Emotion normal))

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(When in green flames (Emotion Nervous))

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(When in golden flames (Emotion courage)

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(When in black flames (Emotion Anger))

Spirit’s Biography: unknown

Inner World:
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Shikai
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Shinkai Form:
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Shikai Size:
Height:4ft
Weight:50 lb
Width:2in
Thickness:3/4 in

Shikai Release Phrase: The fire of my heart, the emotions of my soul give me the strength to move forward Kasai.

Shikai Ability: Courage(Golden)-Even though scared but still willing to fight, Netsu's flame turn into an awesome gold color. This flame bears the pain Netsu has endured and turns it into power. Depending on the amount of pain he has taken in is the amount of damage Netsu can inflict. Netsu stats increase the more pain Netsu endures. This flame cannot be put out except by Extreme pressure. Netsu cannot take damage from this flame.

Shikai Attack One:
Blazing phoenix blade- Netsu surrounds himself in intense flame so strong he cannot be seen inside of it. By pointing his blade up the fire takes the form of a fire sphere that surrounds Netsu. Netsu charge's at the enemy with intense power and speed. This skill can pierce through objects and defenses.

Shikai Attack Two:
Burning soul- With the power a burning soul Netsu gains a new power that will unleash a dragon soul. By condensing his reiatsu Netsu can form a dragon soul made of fire. The dragon will appear hovering behind Netsu at all times. This dragon posses the same weapon/attack's as Netsu. The color of the dragon is depending on Netsu's flames.

Shikai Attack Three:
Fire sphere- By concentrating fire in his body to a certain extent Netsu can release it all into a single flame explosive wave. Netsu can block out any attack if its power is less than the amount of power Netsu put into it. People who try to enter this sphere don't leave without getting burned. This move can also act as a little sphere that Netsu can hide himself in. Netsu can also use this sphere as travel/ to fly around. Any attacks from the inside will go threw the sphere without destroying it. This sphere can only go up to a distance of a 30ft radius.

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Bankai
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Bankai Name: Eien no Kasai (Eternal fire)

Bankai Form: Basically Like Toshiro's Bankai in bleach, Netsu gains flame wings,his left arm gets wraped up in flames that it looks like a flame arm with claws,his right arm gets covered in flames that it looks like the head of a dragon,his feet also get covered in flames almost like the shape of his left hand and he gains a fire dragon mask over his face. (except his weapon turns into dragon rings on his finger's)

Bankai Size: None

Bankai Release Phrase: Bankai! Eien no Kasai

Bankai Ability: Anger(Black)- Lost in anger Netsu's flames turn blackish red, the flame's are so intense it can melt any object that comes into contact with it. While in this form no physical projectile object can get past the flame's. All of Netsu's stats are multiplied by 3. People hit by this fire get a 4th degree burn. This form can grab/attack intangible people/objects. This fire cannot be put out unless by something of equal power or strength as the flames to cancel out . Netsu cannot be damaged from this flame.

Bankai Attack One:
Dragons Brilliant Flame-Netsu summons flames on both fists and combines his gold flames on his right hand with his black flames on his left hand. The moment he brings them together, he creates a giant explosion powerful enough to destroy the surrounding area and blow the enemy a major distance away.

Bankai Attack Two:
Exploding dragon blade- Netsu creates a torrent of blade-shaped flames(max.10) that strikes the enemy in a spiral formation. Every time the enemy is hit with a blade, it explodes and burns the enemy.

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Other
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Items:
-Dual knives (each knife hidden in each shoe)
-A dragon necklace given to him by his mom

Misc:
Likes:
1.Girls
2.Games
3.Hanging out
4.Sleeping
5.Fighting
Dislikes:
1.Being woken up
2.Eating vegetables
3.Doing work
4.Being told what to do more than once
5.People who think they know everything

Theme song: Indestructible

Special talents:
-Netsu's reiatsu is so intense that his reiatsu takes the form of real flames. His reiatsu forms around him giving him a flame aura. His flames change colors depending on his emotion's from his zanpaktou. When his reiatsu is released Netsu can cover his blade in flame's.
-Nervous(Green)- Feeling so nervous Netsu's flame's turn green, Netsu's speed is doubled. This fire cannot be put out by any wood type or fire type unless by Netsu. Netsu cannot be damaged by this flame.
-When Netsu is feeling normal his flames would be red, When he gets nervous his flames would go green, even if he was in shikai or bankai his flames would change. In courage he needs to feel the emotion that he will fight even though scared to change colors and he can still have the effects of his gold flames even in bankai if he is not angry. In black flames Netsu must be angry to activate the full affect of his bankai ability and he can take the form of his bankai with his other flames as well but not with his black unless he meets the condition.

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Biography
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Netsu was born into a strange family. He was born into a family where his father was a soul reaper while his mom was part dragon. The only thing Netsu adapted from his parents was his soul reaper powers and some dragon traits. When Netsu was young he was an outcast among everyone. In the rukongai district no one wanted to play with him or even talk to him. When ever he would talk to anyone he would always stutter since of rejection, he could never get used to talking to people with out getting nervous. He was like this all the way even to attending the soul reaper academy . But in that time in school he finally started to make some friends and with them he got the courage to talk to people a little more. The one thing that people found odd about Netsu was his eye's. Netsu inherited his mother's dragon eyes. With his emotion's his eye color would change. He felt so angry even though he had friends but still that he would still stutter even around them, so his eyes would go black. When his friends died from certain events, he would not talk to anyone, he would always stay quiet . Without knowing anyone Netsu was like invisible. Most of the time his eyes would glow green since he was always nervous to ever speak up. When Netsu retrieved his zanpaktou most of his dragon powers from his mom were in his sword. His zanpaktou spirit was a teen around his age who was a dragon. And depending on Netsu's emotion he would morph into a dragon of that color. When Netsu first met his zanpaktou Kasai he was so nervous but the more he met and got to know about Kasai the more confident Netsu felt. So his eyes would start to glow red or gold every now and then. Every day ever since graduating from the academy Netsu has been training with Kasai to master his powers. But still since that day its still hard for Netsu to talk to other people but he can still get through the day. But to fully understand himself Netsu has joined squad 8 to gain balance and focus. The weird thing most of all is that when Netsu passed on to the soul society he has been gaining his dragon looks from his mom. He has dragon ears/eyes/claws. He has the senses of a dragon. He has the physicals and mental capabilities of one as well.
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Posted: Fri Aug 26, 2011 1:13 pm

I will be judging this... hold on let me get my glasses...

Alright, I'm still discussing the details, but it says that your species is a dragon. A dragon as you know is a mythical beast that does not exist within the human world, which is where the majority of the shinigami souls are supposed to come from. Now most of the souls in this guild do not follow this and are either born within the Soul Society or have some sort of mythical beast within their blood. Although I personally don't agree with this, I'm still going through the details. However what I'm really curious about is, why does it state dragon but your rpc character just looks like a regular human?

Next point, just double check your grammar throughout the profile. First three seconds and I saw solider. I'm guessing that was supposed to be "soldier."

Next is the fact that is says you can use Garganta. Only Arrancar can learn this, which states so within the Shinigami Skeleton forum and Arrancar Skeleton forum. Which makes sense since it is the Arrancar who made this.

Then next thing I'm going to have you explain is what is with the multiple dragons. I see that they are different colors but how does that effect you whatsoever? Your going to have to explain that so others can understand.

Shikai ability, it states that Netsu's power increases with the damage he takes, but it also says that his stats are increased by the max amount that can be, on just the first ability. Lower the stat increase and/or take it out completely because it contradicts with the first half of the ability or take out the first part. You can't have both.

1st Shikai attack, looks good.

2nd Shikai attack, Summons a dragon to fight with you, knows your abilities and at the same time increases your attacks by another three times. No... One or the other... That is two separate abilities.

3rd Shikai attack, Well this is somewhat of a weird ability. It creates a sphere which can explode. It can also be used for transport. <-- That's the good half. Netsu is able to hide in it and attacks go right through it. <-- retarded half... It's a giant fire sphere... He's in there somewhere, granted I can't just run in and smack him on the head but a big attack can easily take him down, also this would also make it so that Netsu could not see his opponent. Attacks being able to go through it also gives the opportunity for people to just walk in, for any hostile action can easily be perceived as an attack. Which if that's the case then there's no point in having it to hide yourself. If your going to have it so that people cannot enter the sphere than your going to need to lessen the radius of it, 100 ft can be too much for tight areas.

Bankai, Actually describe it if you don't have a picture, "Basically like Toshiro's" isn't cutting it for those who have not seen the show.

Bankai ability, Stat's increasing by 5, big no-no. The highest you can go is 3. Also physical projectiles cannot hit him? I disagree with that and I'm going to need good reasoning for why that is so or I'm not accepting that. Eating fire is also not something you can do. Also the flame can only be put out by another flame? Does that really make sense? Edit that.

Other than that I don't really have much to say about your Bankai attacks, other than how are you able to use Gold flames when your Bankai ability states that your using Black flames.

And before I say anything about your bio... Please can you tell me where the junior/high school is in Soul Society?

That's all I have to say at the moment