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To Serve and Protect (free verse)

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 16, 2011 11:09 am


******dedicated to all police, Military, etc. that risk their lives every day to make the world a better place******

They fight for our freedom,
they fight for our safety,
they risk everything for us every day,
so we can live without violence and fear.

They are dedicated,
they are always there to help,
they give us hope,
for a peaceful and brighter tomorrow.

But the costs are high,
for the men and women who serve our country,
and our freedom is often taken for granted.

These are the men and women,
the mothers, fathers, sons and daughters,
the husbands and wives,
who give up their lives,
to serve and protect.  
PostPosted: Thu Oct 20, 2011 11:36 pm


Sounds like a slam but less rhyme-y. i like the subject matter, but honestly the words arnt flow-y (gawd im making up so many words) and i think you could get more creative with the language.

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