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w00t! My name is Zoro, and I shall be the one judging this rpc. Please bear with me, I'm getting back into this and you shall be my test subject.

Alright what I must say is that I really like the character, and I'd say, could easily fit in with the misfits of SRotS.

However, I would like you to add more detail for all three of your Shikai abilities. Just as a general idea of how they work for those who don't share the same vision as you. Such as how big the blasts are, what they are made of, how many times can you use it, how the attack is used, what comes from using the attack, etc.

Although it is not exactly needed at this time, more description on your bankai abilites can help quite a bit as well.

Also try to explain what type of poison it is, I am aware that it is capable of paralyzing a victim, but try to add how the poison enters the body, what it does to paralyze the victim and the such; example would be that the poison attacks the nerve system at a molecular level and causes the cells around to lose the ability to receive "orders" from the brain. Also keep in mind that there are rules against poisons within the guild, they are allowed, but may have a bit of restriction to it.

Accepted.