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PostPosted: Wed Jul 13, 2011 6:21 am


Genre:
Mostly fiction, but I do include the ever famous romance, action/adventure and all that good jazz.

Summary:
Alexandria thinks she’s just a normal orphan who lives in a foster home with almost 20 other kids on a Wyoming farm out in the middle of no where. She has very few friends and a disease that no one believes exist but she’s sure it must. When she gets an invitation to study in Athens on all-expenses paid trip to Greece, she thinks it’s just pure luck that she gets the once in a lifetime offer to study in a city patroned by the Wisdom Goddess herself. She doesn’t blink an eye when her two best friends, Zoe and Derrick are invited as well to study in the famous city. What she doesn’t know is that all of the Divine Twelve are waiting in Athens to claim their children, the 485 demigods traveling in from around the world, to transport them almost 3,000 years back in time to train in the old ways of Ancient Greece and become hero like the legends of old. Oh yeah, with one small catch- the only reason they’re being claimed and trained is because one rogue daughter of Nyx is trying to take on the throne and has amassed an army of nearly 4,000 warriors. But who is Alex’s parent? And why do all of the gods seem to want her dead, Athena and Apollo baddest of all? And why do her visions speak of a war of epic proportions, a boy from Italy who captures her heart from across an ocean, and a death close to her heart?

I may or may not be posting this on fictionpress.com if you wanna read it.
PostPosted: Thu Jul 21, 2011 4:16 pm


CHAPTER 1:

Alexandria sat dejectedly on the swing on the porch. Fifteen years she’d lived in the foster home, knowing she was different, that she never really belonged. She suffered terrible fits in which she saw the future, but no one ever believed her. She’d looked the disease up and found a name for it: Cassandra’s Tears. The Greek god of prophecy, Apollo, had fallen in love with one of his priestesses, Cassandra. He offered her the world and more, even the gift of true prophecy, but she declined, for she had taken vows of chastity and refused to break them, even for a god. He gave her the gift anyway, hoping that this would entice her to give in, but she still held fast to her vows. In his fit of anger, he cursed her gift so that none would believe her very-true prophecies. And this held true during the Trojan War. They all fell.

Only one person ever tried to make her feel welcome at school and that was Zoe. She was a fair skinned, platinum blonde girl with soft blue eyes. She was corded and muscled from years of riding horses. And although Alex was an alright rider, she would never achieve the level of success that Zoe had. Other than that, the two girls had nothing in common. Alex was a golden haired, tan skinned girl, skinny like she was anorexic when she wasn’t, and shy. Zoe was the aforementioned blonde that was outgoing and popular, never having trouble making friends, or making people feel welcome.

Suddenly, blackness loomed on the edges of her vision. She recognized the symptoms of her condition and fought it, but the future hit her like a wave and sucked her beneath the surface. She was standing next to a dark haired boy, who was burly and ripped. They both held slightly glowing swords in their hands and had slashes around their faces, like they’d been fighting. Their breaths came in pants as their eyes darted around. They looked battle-worn and toughened, like they’d been suffering for many days and many nights.

“What are we going to do Derrick? They have us surrounded, a legion to 2. They want the urlictide.” Alex gasped, out of breath.

"Think you could summon some mounts?” the boy, presumably Derrick, asked.

Alex shook her head. She glanced behind her and touched the bag hanging off her shoulder in an old-style sling. Inside was cradled something so precious, it controlled the fate of the universe. It was long and oval shaped, a metallic shine to it. Her fingers grazed it lovingly, recalling what they had gone through to obtain it.

“We can’t let them have it Derrick. If they had it…” Alex trailed off, a full-body shudder racking her frame. The boy nodded sagely.

“On three, you run for Elva. She’ll get you to the hill so you can make it to Athens. I’ll cover your back.” He suggested.
Alex turned to him in horror. “You’ll be no use to the Divine in the war if you die here Derrick. What you are suggesting is martyrdom. To visit Persephone’s cold halls before your time…”

He pressed his finger up against her protesting lips, transferring to the Old Speech. “I will no’ be far behind agapi mou. By some sick chance ye are right though, tell Elva…”

The thought went unspoken between the two of them. “Aye, I will Derrick. But if ye escape by some miracle, but I dinna, I would have ye tell Nickolas the same.” Alex murmured through his finger. He nodded anxiously and then silently counted to three. When he hit 3, she flew into a dead run, flying over the ground as fast as her legs would allow, seeking the marble halls of Athens and the warm embrace of her other half, Nickolas. Just as she began to see the light of halls above and the small silhouette of a small elfish girl, the real world snapped into clarity.

She was being shaken roughly by a boy above her. As she peered at the face, she realized something with a sickening thud. The small, stringy boy above her had the same startling eyes and angular face as the boy in her vision. Derrick. She’d known him all of her life, he was her PIC. And yet he was supposed to serve some kind of Divine person? And then there were the other two people mentioned in the vision. Elva and Nickolas. Although she had no idea who they were, Elva’s name somehow inspired her. It made her want to respect the person that the name belonged to. And the name Nickolas…A shiver went through her. Just from the name, she felt sweat-slicked and giddy. From the way she’d said his name in the vision, it was obvious that they were in love. His name resonated deeply through her as if it had struck something and it was the right thing. Suddenly, she realized that Derrick was saying something to her. She focused on his words.

“What did you see? You only see impending disasters! What was it?” he begged her. She shook her head, knowing it would only freak him out.

“You don’t want to know.” She murmured. His face betrayed his fury.

“I’m the only one who ever believes you have visions. Not even your best friend says you do. What would you do if you lost that?” he demanded.

Alex flinched. “I would die. Go mad. You’re the only thing that keeps me sane.”

“Exactly. Tell me what you saw. People could be in danger Alex!”

“We’re the ones in danger Derrick. And possibly the whole world. Can you get me to a computer without anyone seeing my bloodshot eyes?” She asked. The downside to trying to hide her visions: your eyes got bloodshot and hurt worse than hell, so you couldn’t make a public appearance for at least 4 hours. And someone tended to notice if she hid in herself in her room for at least 4 hours. They would check and then make her drink a vile liquid that would repress her visions for at least a month. And without her visions, she felt weak, vulnerable, and selfish. She could save lives (she had before) when she had her visions.

He stared at her in surprise, and then nodded once shortly. He stripped off his hoodie and then handed it to her. She pulled it on and pulled the hood low over her eyes. Together they ran inside, she sheltered inside the crook of his arm. Derrick dragged her into the computer room and booted up a computer. Once it was running, she pulled up her favorite search engine and typed in “urlictide”.

Over 2 million results came up. The first was a wiki site. It said, as a definition, that an urlictide was a magical Greek artifact that had the power to amplify hundredfold the intentions of whoever held it. If the person holding it had good and pure intentions, then all of the world’s goodness would be amplified hundredfold. And it also depended on who held it. If an extremely powerful person held it, that was added to it. Suddenly she felt a tingle she recognized. The future was changing. For better or worse she couldn’t tell, but it was changing.

She greedily devoured the rest of the information and then shut down the computer. She allowed Derrick to support her as he lugged her outside. They traveled to the farthest corner of the fields of the orphanage. Once he sat her exhausted form down, he began to demand answers.

“What’s going on Alex? I have a right to know.” He demanded, sitting down next to her.

She sighed. He was right, as usual. “You’d better sit down. This is going to take a while.”
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Sorry about the length, I'll try to warn you next time or put it up in peices.

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 28, 2011 10:35 am


CHAPTER 2:

Nickolas sat in his room. It was empty and barren, so very different from the room that had been here a few weeks ago. It had been warm and filled with the Italian sunlight that Nickolas’ family loved so much. Now it seemed as if a permanent raincloud hovered over him.
Nickolas’ stepmother, Caterina, entered and rubbed his shoulder comfortingly. She knew her stepson didn’t want to go to a boarding school in Greece, but he had no choice. All of the strange events last week told her that much longer here and he wouldn’t live. He needed to know his heritage and why strange and bent people knew his full name and threatened him with the Fields of Punishment.
“Niko,” she said carefully, being sure to use his favorite nickname with a loving caress in her Italian accent, “I know how you feel. But Athens school of learning is said to be the best. Its patron is Pallas Athena, the wisdom Goddess. Two years there and you may return home to me. I promise it.”
“I do not care stepmother. I will do as you say out of respect for the family name you carry and will be mine one day to give to a wife.” He said, as if mourning the loss of a family member. His voice was flat and dull, not at all like his usual lively voice, which could strike flint and was charismatic.
“There will be many exchange students, my love. Fourteen are coming from America, ten from France, twenty-two from Romania. You will not be the only Italian either. Five other Italians will accompany you on the plane.” Caterina comforted. Niko shrugged out from under his stepmother’s warm and loving hand, pounding down the stairs to the dining room. His little 2-year old half-sister, Azzurra, came in the doorway behind him and leaned on him.
“Ikka, you ve leavin meh?” she demanded. Since she was little, she could not pronounce Niko or Nickolas, so Ikka was her name for him, and her words ran together. He translated it as “Ikka, are you leaving me?”
He smiled at her and hoisted her up into his arms, causing her to giggle and shriek. “Nah agapi mou. I will come back. It is only for a little while. Want to play before my plane?”
Azzurra giggled and led him giddily to her room. She began to pull out all of her toys and play with them, dragging Niko down to sit on her floor with him. He didn’t mind that he’d grown up without a male influence in his life, or that both of the two females he loved most dearly in this life were his stepmom and sister. He loved them more than life itself and even the man who had died for Azzurra and Caterina wasn’t in his thoughts. He didn’t mind that Azzurra was only his half-sister. He loved her dearly, enough to sacrifice his own reputation to do what she wanted, not him.
They played for maybe an hour, hour and a half before his stepmom came into the room, saying they had best get going. Niko nodded soberly, and then flipped his little sister into the air, who giggled madly once more and allowed Niko to carry her out to the car. He buckled her into the backseat and threw his belongings in the trunk. Azzurra insisted he ride in the back seat with her. He obliged, keeping her happy and chirping all the way to the airport.
They went through the usual airport stuff, like getting the tickets and the metal detectors. When they got to the terminal, Niko was surprised to see at least 40 kids sitting there, all of different nationalities. He realized this must be a stopping point for all of the kids going to Athens, except for the Romanians, since this was the closest to Greece besides Romania.
“Sucsa.” Said a voice with a horrible Italian accent. He turned to see a small boy supporting a golden haired angel on his shoulder. Her breathing was labored and her eyes bloodshot. Niko quickly moved out of their way and the boy dragged her over to a plastic chair to sit in. He knew enough English to hear the girl’s trilling and lilting voice thank him, using the name Derrick. He wandered over, speaking slowly.
“Are you alright? I think you should be at home resting.” He asked, concern filling his voice. It was unusual for him to show concern for anyone outside his family, and Azzurra hissed in jealousy.
“I’m fine.” She trilled in perfect Italian, in direct comparison to the boy’s. “I have a condition that makes traveling a bit rough, but not impossible. I thank you for your concern. Do you travel to Athens as well?”
“Yes. By request of my stepmother.” Niko replied bitterly. He saw that the girl understood at once, compassion filling her eyes. He was suddenly shoved aside as another blonde girl stomped past, her hair more white than yellow. Her eyes were a soft blue, but sharpened at him. She snapped something in English at him and knelt in front of the girl. Her voice was gentle as she spoke to her, handing her a small bottle of something and was obviously begging her to drink it. The angel vehemently declined, shoving it away and Derrick began to shield her. Finally they said something in English that he understood.
“I said ******** no Zoe! I can save lives if I don’t drink that s**t!!” the girl snarled, her beautiful face turning mutinous.
“What are you talking about?” Niko asked, unable to contain his curiosity.
“The bottle she holds is supposed to stop the fits I have, but when I have them, I get glimpses of the future. They’ve been more frequent and scarier than hell lately. I need them. I’ve saved lives before with these visions. Only Derrick understands and believes me.” She replied in liquid Italian.
“Cassandra’s Tears.” Niko murmured quietly. “Then the boy is supposed to be your familiar of old. The legends say that each mortal with the Tears have another mortal who is where they get their strength and are the only ones with the clear-sightedness to see you speak the truth and the future. They are free to follow their own paths, but it mustn’t ever stray too far from yours. When the tongue of the gods leaves the lips of the Cursed, the familiars are the only ones who have the necessary synapses to translate it into an understandable language by instinct.”
She watched him intently, and then spoke. “My name’s Alex. What’s yours?”
He opened his mouth to reply, but then Azzurra replied for him. “Ikka, wet’s goh!” she screamed.
“Ikka?” she asked, clearly confused.
“No, Azzurra can’t pronounce my name, so that’s her name for me. My real name is Nickolas. Bye.” He said, departing and completely not noticing the way Alex’s face lost all color.
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