(Myreu for Maureu on a different site)
I've gotten lots of good constructive criticism on this piece of work already, I plan to redo this piece to post to my [new] DeviantART account (I hated the username of my old account).
I will be closing-off critique on this piece for now, however I may list things that have already been said to open it up again.
Please, it is nothing against any of you - I just get so, unbearably annoyed when critique is repeated, and it's too early in the morning for me to be typing it all! XD (Clearly not a control freak).
