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PostPosted: Sat Jul 09, 2011 2:27 pm


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Im planing manga story maybe some one haves any tips for me what should i focus more and stuff
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Uh maybe add detail to characters and the background? From what I saw from that manga thing you posted earlier, you had the basics down, but if I saw more, there would be more chances of spotting out little flaws first before you start with detail.
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 12, 2012 7:16 pm


I know this is from July, but if you're still doing it definitely work on your grammar. A good thing to focus on is character development.
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