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 Posted: Thu Feb 09, 2006 5:47 am
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Posted: Thu Feb 09, 2006 10:33 am
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Posted: Thu Feb 09, 2006 2:34 pm
Holy <********>, look at my typos. xp I was considering changing that first line as it was. Too poetic for prose.
Yeah, I think the main character is just putting that in. I think. Righto.
And it was supposed to be 'what I'm really trying to do is buy matches,' but then I decided it was a bit odd and forgot to take out the is. whee Silly me. Yeah, they know her. I'm just running out of pronouns.
Sorry about the tense thing. I was copying from a notebook and had written in past instead of present. I'll get on that.
How 'bout this is a decrepit store and the sprinklers are rusty. xd I realized that halfway through. 'Holy crap, those sprinklers are still on? Crazy place.'
Yeah, she is a little rich/insane. wink But hey; rich, insane, good-looking girls make the world go 'round, right?
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Posted: Thu Feb 09, 2006 6:44 pm
I figured you were going for either "what I'm really trying to do is buy matches" or the above and ended up somewhere in the middle. XD
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Posted: Thu Feb 09, 2006 6:49 pm
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Posted: Thu Feb 09, 2006 7:14 pm
Stick around then, cowboy.
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