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Name: Alonzo Merditorious

Age: [Actual:about 250 ] [Looks: 20-something]

Birthday: May 12th

Height: 6' 3"

Weight: 180 pounds

Body Type: Muscled (Extremely)

Hair Color: Blond

Eye Color: Very light brown, bordering on almost yellow

Gender: Male

Sexuality: He likes women. ONLY WOMEN.

Personality: Alonzo is extremely quiet, preferring to live peacefully in Hueco Mundo, but he is a soldier, trained as such, and knows that duty comes before personal preference, and so, will fight if need be. On the battlefield he is a monster, letting his normally ice-cold demeanor give way to a fiery temper and a need for blood.

Hollow Hole: Middle of his chest.

Broken Hollow Mask: It is a half mask in the shape of a skull, with massive canine teeth, jutting out, in a perma-grin.
Race: Hollow

Species: Vasto Lorde/Arrancar

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Rank
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Division: Squad Eight

Seat: Going to lieutenant

Squad Ability: Haven't learned any quite yet, plan to, however.

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Hechizos
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[Sacrificatorio]
2. Blindado (Armored) - The user cuts their wrist, while saying “Thy blood boils with thy own rage. Become the armor to thine own rage.” The blood covers the entire body then soon after the blood sinks back into the body. The wound that the user made is instantly close, the iron from the blood causes Arrancar's Hierro to be a rank higher than their current rank making the Hierro stronger. This last for 10 minutes.

8. Ojo (Eye) - The caster must cut around the their eyes, letting the blood drip into the casters eyes, they say “Thy life’s source, come into thine eyes, and save thyself.” As the blood mixes into the eyes, it increases the persons vision so they can see things twice as fast meaning everything to them that they see in their eyes is half their current speed (Is like bikain). Can only be used for 4 minutes.

3. Rascar (Claw) - The caster cuts the knuckles on both of their hands and lets the blood drip out while saying “Through the blood of thine rage, become thy weapons. Through the cat’s eye thy descends.” Then the blood forms and hardens over their fingers, becoming a set of claws that is as hard as steel. This last for 10 minutes.

[Elemento]
41. Tornado (Tornado) - The user sucks in the air around them, then says "To the wind of the heavens, come down" and blows out a tornado. The side effect is that you can not control the tornado and you can get sucked into it. The Tornado lasts 4 minutes.
39. Hielo Toque (Ice touch) - The caster says “Thy own body descend to the depths of the sea.” Then the casters tempature drops, making the body as cold as ice and when the body makes contact with something it freezes it over. Once over the caster entire feels numb and slightly frozen, the spell lasts for 4 minutes.
35. Disparar Atraco (Fire holdup) - Once “Thy own heat shalt descend to Hell” is said, the caster's body temperature increases to the burning hot level as well as any weapon in their possession. This allows the caster to cause contact burns with their skin and weapon but once the spell is over the caster feels slightly burned from their own body temperature. This lasts for 4 minutes.

[Maldición]
72. Cuerpo Interruptor (Body switch) - The caster draws blood from themselves, and puts it on their blade. Then the caster must stab their opponent, drawing blood. The enemies blood must get into the casters own wound. Then the caster says “From the mind of thine enemy, to the mind of thy own, let thine enemy become thy shield and thy sword.” What this does is switch both the casters and enemy's mind of state making that they are in one another body. They do not know what each other can do, and they do not have control of the powers meaning that they can't use each others powers nor their own powers but the only powers they can use is their own spells that they know. They are not allowed to harm their new bodies on their own. This only last 10 minutes.

73. Dislocación de una Articulación ósea (Bone Joint Dislocation) - The caster places there hands on the blade and a Pentagrama appears on the blade. The caster says “Let the bones of they enemy melt.” The next time the blade touches a body, other than the caster’s, the Patagrama transfers onto the opponent, dislocating the bones in the limbs that it hits.

74. Momia (Mummy) - The caster lets the opponent stab them with there blade. Then they say, ”Let the bind of the dead hinder you.” Then, the opponent looses their current release, making them go into their next one. For example if the opponent was in Shikai, they are now in sealed. Lasts for 6 minutes.

75. Presión (Pressure) - The caster charges a bala and shoots it at themselves then says, “The power double and turn there fears into nightmares” This allows all Ceros and Ballas to have double power. If I Shinigami has it effects Kido. There is one down side though, it uses more Reaistu to double the power. Last 6 minutes.

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Hollow Abilities
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Cero
Garganta
Senkaimon
Hierro
Pesquisa
Sonído

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Zanpakuto
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Zanpakuto Size: It's slightly shorter than normal katanas, as well as being slightly thicker, making it better for slashing attacks, with a spiked hilt for punching out, and a deep red handle.

Zanpakuto Guard: Wheel with spikes on the end.

Zanpakuto Sealed (Sword) Form: (Same as in picture)

Zanpakuto Type: Space Manipulation

Zanpakuto Name: [Name razz hantasma] [Meaning:Ghost]

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Sealed Form
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Sealed Ability: In it's sealed form, Phantasma can tear holes in space.

Sealed Attack One: Alonzo tears open a massive hole, grabbing one half of the person, pulling them through, and slowly constricts the portal on them. If fast or resilient enough, however, they could probably break free before it crushes them.

Sealed Attack Two: Alonzo tears open two portals, putting one fist in each portal. The other end of the portal opens up a few feet away, and can begin to move. Basically, this is as if his fists have detached, and now can have a much longer reach, being able to punch where he wants to. However, this is rather tiring to him, and can only be used for about three posts' length of time.

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Reserreccion
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Reserreccion Form:
Reserreccion Release Phrase: Unmask the fears, Phantasma!

Reserreccion Weapon: The bands around his arm.

Reserreccion Ability: Phantasma can open up a portal in space, into a hellish world, an illusion that changes based on the person, taking form of things that may have scared them at some point, bringing up childhood fears and bottled up emotions.

Reserreccion Attack One: Alonzo opens up the portal, taking the person into it. The area is slowed down in time, and in a few seconds, the opponent will witness a few days of their greatest fears taking physical form and attacking them.

Reserreccion Attack Two: The bands on his arm unravel, with ancient demonic writing on the insides of them. Each length of band, about four lengths total, can take the form of a weapon, creating four different weapons around him, that he can use. A hit with this weapon will have one of these four effects:

Traspasado Pinzas de un cielo: A hit with this weapon, a needle-like rapier, will cause a the opponent to be trapped again within the hellish world.
Espadón de un fluido Miedo: A hit with this weapon, a massive, thick broadsword, will open up a portal, with the other end opening up straight at the hilt of the blade. This way, unless the opponent has a large amount of both strength and speed, they will be impaled at superhuman speeds onto the blade.
Guantes que ocultan la verdad: A hit with this weapon, twin massive gauntlets, will open a portal to the opponent's insides. However, due to the delicacy of the portal, it is both hard to attack, and slow as well. The portal will fade away after a single round of posting (So two posts)
Palas círculo de dolor: A hit with his final weapon, an enormous chakram, will open ten portals all around, through which the chakram will fly through. The portals are spaced apart, so it is possible to get out, but the chakram moves so quickly that an opponent would have to shield themselves all around and break through.


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Second Reserreccion
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Reserreccion Name: fantasma del diablo

Reserreccion Form:

Reserreccion Weapon: Curved Sword

Reserreccion Release Phrase: This is it! You have left me no choice! My inner self devours all! Come hither, great demon! Come embrace my soul, Fantasma Del Diablo!

Reserreccion Ability: Fantasma Del Diablo can summon and bind the souls of all past opponents, using their reiatsu to fuel himself.

Reserreccion Attack One: Alonzo creates a loop of reiatsu, from three to fifteen feet wide, created out of the reiatsu of his defeated enemies, not his own, and binded with his own reiatsu. This reiatsu travels within his previous portals, winding through around twelve portals, creating a circular shield of reiatsu around himself, like the shape of a ring. When not shielding him, to conserve his own energy, as enormous as it is with his enemies', he keeps it within the portal. This attack can last long, but serves more as a defense than an attack.
Reserreccion Attack Two: Alonzo devours the souls of all past opponents, and offers his own soul to his inner self, who wakens, taking him over fully and completely. When he does this, his inner self has complete and utter control, usually putting him in a bad position, physically, as the inner soul will not feel the pain of his body. Therefore, his attacks become a lot more reckless, because his inner soul doesn't care much for this body in the first place, and won't care if it mostly destroyed. His inner self can force the souls of all the people around him to be offered, binding them all into one massive bomb, which he activates by rupturing the seals, imploding the souls, which has a blast radius slightly less than that of a hydrogen bomb (A weak one could be about 100 kilotons of TNT, think about that, also blast radius would be about 2 kilometers in any direction outward, and about half that upwards.). However, once taken, Alonzo must be freed from his inner self by having someone else defeat or at least subdue his inner self, either through defeat or by some strong emotional breakthrough.

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Other
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Items: None
Misc: Alonzo is a massive fan of books, reading whenever he's not training, and writes quite a bit himself. He has an intense dislike of tomatoes, but other than that, enjoys most human food, particularly steak.

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Biography
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Alonzo's story is truly a sad one. He was born as a menos, eventually fighting his way, with a friend, to becoming an adjuchas. It was then that his inner self first awoke. Alonzo's inner self is a bloodthirsty demon resembling a dragon that had been imbued inside of him since birth, and wishes to become free, and rule through his body. He was fully possessed, killing his friend, and devouring his soul. The demon's pwoer was so great, that with the adjuchas's power added, Alonzo was elevated to Vasto Lorde strength. Since then, he went into hiding, killing hollows as he saw them. Finally, one fateful night, he awoke from the control of the demon, falling into a fever soon after.
Alonzo had the fever for months, shaking on end, always weak, until he tried to go outside. Finding a sword off of an adjuchas he had killed, he picked it up, instantly bonding it to him. The sword opened up a portal seemingly by itself, which Alonzo wandered through. After wandering through, he collapsed of weariness, waking up a few days later, seemingly fine. The sword had saved him, and more so, it blocked out his inner self away.
For years after that, Alonzo trained, killing and gaining more power. He never gave up on his goal of fully locking away his inner self, or for finding a way to communicate with his dead friend.
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I changed it a bit, is it suitable for judging now?

Well before I can go any further your Sealed Ability doesn't make sense with your Zanpakuto Type, because Fears and Shadows doesn't grant the power to tear holes in space, that what Space grants, the best thing you can do is to open up a Dark Shadowy Void, so that needs to change and once that change, everything else after it is gonna have to change as well because of the previous change.

Well i am gonna read it and see but you can change to Space Manipulation

Seal attack one-auto hit/kill
Seal attack two-There is no limit to the attack and they are all auto hits
Ressurection Ability-meda gaming or not even possible you know what the oppoenents fear is or if they even got one
Ressurection attack one-How much is time slowed down and will the opponent inside also move slower.(God mod) And like last time you don't know if the opponent has a fear or not
Ressurection attack two-Not even considered an attack that can be put inside of your bio
Segunda Ressurection ability-You can't use an army of dead soul's powers since that can be any person from who knows what in there. And there is a godmod for summoning an army of random people.
Segunda Ressurection attack one-Sort of like an auto kill since anyone you defeat gets sucked into it and how does a cero go in with your Ressurection ability. What is ghostly spectors and how do they fit inside the cero
Segunda Ressurection attack two-This is like Ressurection attack two but not all people know the size of a hydrogen bomb so its best to explain. And how does souls fir into space manipulation

Alright, since it has been a while since anyone else has last seen this RPC, I will proceed in judging it. I am Zoro, and I will be your proctor.

Alright, the thing that's the biggest thing I must say about this rpc is that its well thought of, but also very iffy... Space manipulation is great but can be very easy to use for godmodding... Your going to need to put some sort of drawback into using it, if you make portals often. It's nothing personal, I just know that people are going to call you out on it all the time. I don't mind you using it, just don't depend on it for everything. Also keep in mind that you can't just grab people and throw them in the portals, your going to have to be able to grab them previously with them being aware of it.

I'm going to be look at every detail of this profile and make sure to tell you every little thing I would suggest to change. I promise to get back to you soon. But from my skim over, I doubt there is really anything to change, maybe a few attacks in your first and second res, but that's probably it. Also your going to need to apply for the Lt. position, I know the captain and he isn't really one to give out positions that fast.

Is that better?