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explodingstaples

PostPosted: Sat May 28, 2011 12:02 am


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I got the Alice in Wonderland glove set for my birthday on May 8th. I just uploaded my first video. It's a little laggy and I have an issue with one light, but I like the video. Feedback please? Oh yeah, and we mustn't forget my fingershow. Feedback, advice, and subscriptions are appreciated =D


Bubbles!
PostPosted: Sat May 28, 2011 11:34 am


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Well your finger show looks pretty much the same as your gloving show. First off you have said yourself your camera doesn't hold up well to your fast movements. From what I can tell though you seem to be very fluid in the transitions and they are good.

Gloving show: For me the song choice is too slow for your style of movements. I do like what I see. I would say work more on the downtime when your hiding the lights and instead of hiding them in the front and making them come out try a different angle or different place to hide them.

Finger show: It's good, but I'm more used to seeing liquid when I see the finger shows and your too static in front of the camera. Granted this would be in front of a person, but well I would like to see you incorporate more of your body into the show and once again I don't personally like the song choice for the style your showing.

Overall it's decent. Keep up the good work and practice.

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explodingstaples

PostPosted: Sat May 28, 2011 12:18 pm


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Thanks for the feedback =3 I work a lot on transitions and flow, whenever I can, in fact. The finger show was, like I said, to test the camera, which is why I was so static and focused on the computer screen >_>
I'm open to suggestions on the music. What I used just happened to be what I like and, I agree, slower is not better for my style. I just have to be careful because the faster I go, the more my camera lags.

I'm just stoked I got a decent when I think I'm such crap. I suppose I should stop comparing myself to Team [e] xP


Bubbles!
PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2011 11:39 am


explodingstaples


Well honestly everyone has there own style and just as long as your movements are fluid from one transition to another and your not doing the same move for like 2mins then you will be fine. Like with me I incorporate a little bit of tutting in mine and I normally don't do that, but I figured it would look cool with the lights cascading and such. On the music front yeah I would pick up some of the higher beats music. Like alot of Happy Hardcore and Hardcore have some really good songs you can do lightshows to. Also like you said your camera doesn't like fast movements, so maybe that would be something to work towards is getting a better camera that can capture your entire style without you having to slow down for it.

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explodingstaples

PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2011 12:51 pm


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Thank you for all the feedback and advice. I'll keep working and my friends and I will continue uploading videos to our channel, DigitalMoogle. Please subscribe and comment. We would really appreciate the support x3


Bubbles!
PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2011 2:01 pm


Anytime. I'm always here to lend a helpful hand.

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explodingstaples

PostPosted: Sun Jul 10, 2011 8:59 pm


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Two months after buying my gloves <3


Bubbles!
PostPosted: Sun Jul 10, 2011 11:31 pm


explodingstaples


I see tons of improvement from the first show you posted up. Very nice keeping things alot more fluid this time around. Just know for a lightshow artist we never stop learning and there is no such thing as a good one or a bad one. We all have talent and always keep practicing your craft.

Now for a few minor suggestions. Don't always get stuck in the transition always being liquid when you go from one move to another one. For it being over 6mins long you did extremely well making sure to not repeat things for too long. Also not sure if you thought about this, but since you did this show with the lights on maybe you could use the mask more in the show. Like the eyes could move in different ways or you could cut the mouth open a little more and use that to your advantage. Still though WELL DONE. Keep up the good work.

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