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The_Last_Spartan77

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Posted: Tue May 24, 2011 7:24 pm

Forgive me father for I have sinned,
Please listen to my pathetic confession,
I tried to keep in one direction,
And I could not hold my attention,
As I took the life of an innocent.

Please tell me what you think in the comments!!!

Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2011 12:22 am

man i guess this guild is pretty much dead but um i gotta ask did you hit the person with a car in that poem XD

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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 2:51 am

nightmerz

man i guess this guild is pretty much dead but um i gotta ask did you hit the person with a car in that poem XD

XD uh yeah it's about someone confessing to their sin of killing someone in a car accident.

Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 10:05 pm

The_Last_Spartan77

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man i guess this guild is pretty much dead but um i gotta ask did you hit the person with a car in that poem XD

XD uh yeah it's about someone confessing to their sin of killing someone in a car accident.

just wondering but do you have any longer poems by chance?

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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2011 5:31 pm

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man i guess this guild is pretty much dead but um i gotta ask did you hit the person with a car in that poem XD

XD uh yeah it's about someone confessing to their sin of killing someone in a car accident.

just wondering but do you have any longer poems by chance?

Yeah, i do.

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