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manseyful
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 26, 2011 4:04 am


This is where you will apply for Kekkei Genkais found in the canon. There will be strict rules concerning the approvals of Kekkei Genkais.

You may only have one, unless it is an element release with only one jutsu and you may combine another that is compatible - i.e. Boil release with Lava Release.
RP samples must include the Kekkei Genkai and they must be detailed and Literate (4 paragraphs+)
Mangekyou Sharingans can only be gotten through the roleplay, and there may only be 1 holder per different sharingan.
If you choose a Kekkei Genkai with less than 4 jutsu's attached to it you may create 2 custom jutsu's for it also.
Once the limited number of users has been taken, please do not apply for it; there will be a selected maximum number of holders for each one.

Please fill out the form below and post it in the thread, then wait for approval.


Username: (your username)
RPC Name: (rpc name)
RPC Rank: (rank)

Kekkei Genkai/Clan jutsu applying for: (the name)
Kekkei Genkai stage: (sharingan; 1-3 tomoe)
Why Should you have this: (good, creative reasons please)

RP Sample: (4+ paragraphs, detail and literate please. Using the Kekkei Genkai)
PostPosted: Mon May 16, 2011 4:43 am


Username: raijin-sasori
RPC Name: Ken (Gluttony) Sasori
RPC Rank: S-ranked missing nin

Kekkei Genkai/Clan jutsu applying for: Explosion release
Kekkei Genkai stage: Stage 1? There is only one stage...
Why Should you have this: My rpc is gluttony and as such he is a massive man standing at about 7 and a half feet tall. Being so huge and his biography showing him to have such intense physical prowess it makes sense for him to have something that causes such massive and rather uncontrolled damage as an explosion based kekkei genkai. The village he grew up in was rather belligerent in nature also making this combination of explosion release very compatible with not only his current status but his past one as well.

(Would you mind if I made some techniques for the blast release? There is only one and the clay release has like 10... seems a bit one sided to me haha sweatdrop )

RP Sample:

A huge man could be seen walking into the area as he calmly looked about searching for what he had been tasked to steal. Standing roughly six inches short of 8 feet he was practically a monster compared to other opponents. Moving through the terrain of the rather hilly mountainside that surrounded him he grumbled to himself a bit as he continued to search for his soon to be prize " Why do these damn kids have to be so well hidden all the time?! I mean just once... Just once I want there to be a boy out in the open that I can just grab and I can bring back and then grab something to eat! I am tired of these endless journeys!!!!" he shouted the last bit slamming his fist into a nearby boulder and blasting it away. Panting heavily as his rage slowly subsided he took a deep breath and let out a considerable sigh as he calmed himself and regained his focus speaking " Look... the sooner I get this over the sooner I can eat..." he said nodding in approval of his own sentiment as he regained some confidence and moved back to the path he was following knowing he had to get this over with.

The extremely large man had begun to pick up his pace a small smile crossed his lips, lifting up his nose and smelling the air he smiled as he turned and faced the direction of his opponent, spotting where he believed the boy was he dashed forward with extremely impressive speed and hurtled his body towards his opponents location. Landing the center of a large crevice he looked around knowing what he was looking for was around here. Once more sniffing the air he smiled as he looked to his left and right and spoke " Come out now boy... I can smell that delicious rinnegan chakra on you... Just give it to me so I can go home and get something real to eat!" he said darting to his right and smashing through a boulder sending a huge shockwave in the direction of the attack he just fired as a massive explosion ensued after his punch. Smiling wildly the man continued to search speaking " You know the call me Gluttony... and if there is one thing I hate... it's missing meals!!!" he said as his chakra levels began to soar as he grew angrier and angrier with each passing second that the one thing standing between him and his meal was hiding from him.

Looking around he smiled knowing what his next move would be, it was simple, if you can't find a rabbit you simply flush it out. His smiled turned more and more devious as this idea came to him and he nodded, facing the large rocky walls of the crevice that surrounded both him and his seemingly hidden target he slammed his powerful fist into it sending a huge explosion up the wall and creating a deep 15 foot wide crater in the side of it. After doing this rumbling could be heard as Gluttony smiled and looked around waiting, after a few seconds rocks began to cascade down around them. Boulders now plummeting into the crevice as he remained resolute and waited for the rinnegan user to reveal himself, finally after a few seconds the boy darted away and tried to escape, watching him Gluttony only whispered " Easy as pie...." he said to himself as he darted after the boy blaring through any boulders that might have gotten in his way. Finally after several minutes of chasing the small, or at least small compared to Gluttony, boy was trapped inside a large naturally formed crater. Looking around with an extremely panicked demeanor about him Gluttony smiled and spoke " Now now... no need to be worried, just let me take the thing I want and I will leave...." he sneered as he looked to the boy hungrily practically licking his lips with anticipation...

Watching as the kid remained still and continued to look around Gluttony smirked and awaited, after a few seconds the young man simply stared down his chaser and spoke
" I am the wielder of the Asura path, my body is my weapon, a weapon that will not soon be defeated by the likes of you..."the Man said confidently as he assumed a stance infront of Gluttony and looked at him. Gluttony heard this and smiled speaking " Good... It means I won't have to hold back and worry about obliterating you... Pride does enjoy having the bodies as well as the actual rinnegan..." he said smirking as stood upright and awaited the boy. Dashing quickly towards him the rinnegan user slammed his fist forward as Gluttony did the same, the immense force with which the kid released this attack and the strength of the explosion that Gluttony expelled with his own punch was unbelievable, as though an unstoppable force had met and immovable object. The two stood resolute for a moment as their attacks waged against one another and all of a sudden a blinding light exploded outwards and consumed them both along with the entire crater. After several minutes all that was left was rubble and nothing could be seen of the two combatants. On the opposite end of what used to be the crater a massive explosion erupted from the rubble as Gluttony rose out and brushed himself off, stretching a bit he was clearly injured as large scrapes and bruises were across his body, however simply shrugged them off and move towards where he assume the boy was; searching through the large amount of debris he pulled the boys body and slung it over his shoulder walking away as he smiled happily and began to muse over what he would have for lunch...

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manseyful
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PostPosted: Sat May 28, 2011 2:30 pm


raijin sasori
Username: raijin-sasori
RPC Name: Ken (Gluttony) Sasori
RPC Rank: S-ranked missing nin

Kekkei Genkai/Clan jutsu applying for: Explosion release
Kekkei Genkai stage: Stage 1? There is only one stage...
Why Should you have this: My rpc is gluttony and as such he is a massive man standing at about 7 and a half feet tall. Being so huge and his biography showing him to have such intense physical prowess it makes sense for him to have something that causes such massive and rather uncontrolled damage as an explosion based kekkei genkai. The village he grew up in was rather belligerent in nature also making this combination of explosion release very compatible with not only his current status but his past one as well.

(Would you mind if I made some techniques for the blast release? There is only one and the clay release has like 10... seems a bit one sided to me haha sweatdrop )

RP Sample:

A huge man could be seen walking into the area as he calmly looked about searching for what he had been tasked to steal. Standing roughly six inches short of 8 feet he was practically a monster compared to other opponents. Moving through the terrain of the rather hilly mountainside that surrounded him he grumbled to himself a bit as he continued to search for his soon to be prize " Why do these damn kids have to be so well hidden all the time?! I mean just once... Just once I want there to be a boy out in the open that I can just grab and I can bring back and then grab something to eat! I am tired of these endless journeys!!!!" he shouted the last bit slamming his fist into a nearby boulder and blasting it away. Panting heavily as his rage slowly subsided he took a deep breath and let out a considerable sigh as he calmed himself and regained his focus speaking " Look... the sooner I get this over the sooner I can eat..." he said nodding in approval of his own sentiment as he regained some confidence and moved back to the path he was following knowing he had to get this over with.

The extremely large man had begun to pick up his pace a small smile crossed his lips, lifting up his nose and smelling the air he smiled as he turned and faced the direction of his opponent, spotting where he believed the boy was he dashed forward with extremely impressive speed and hurtled his body towards his opponents location. Landing the center of a large crevice he looked around knowing what he was looking for was around here. Once more sniffing the air he smiled as he looked to his left and right and spoke " Come out now boy... I can smell that delicious rinnegan chakra on you... Just give it to me so I can go home and get something real to eat!" he said darting to his right and smashing through a boulder sending a huge shockwave in the direction of the attack he just fired as a massive explosion ensued after his punch. Smiling wildly the man continued to search speaking " You know the call me Gluttony... and if there is one thing I hate... it's missing meals!!!" he said as his chakra levels began to soar as he grew angrier and angrier with each passing second that the one thing standing between him and his meal was hiding from him.

Looking around he smiled knowing what his next move would be, it was simple, if you can't find a rabbit you simply flush it out. His smiled turned more and more devious as this idea came to him and he nodded, facing the large rocky walls of the crevice that surrounded both him and his seemingly hidden target he slammed his powerful fist into it sending a huge explosion up the wall and creating a deep 15 foot wide crater in the side of it. After doing this rumbling could be heard as Gluttony smiled and looked around waiting, after a few seconds rocks began to cascade down around them. Boulders now plummeting into the crevice as he remained resolute and waited for the rinnegan user to reveal himself, finally after a few seconds the boy darted away and tried to escape, watching him Gluttony only whispered " Easy as pie...." he said to himself as he darted after the boy blaring through any boulders that might have gotten in his way. Finally after several minutes of chasing the small, or at least small compared to Gluttony, boy was trapped inside a large naturally formed crater. Looking around with an extremely panicked demeanor about him Gluttony smiled and spoke " Now now... no need to be worried, just let me take the thing I want and I will leave...." he sneered as he looked to the boy hungrily practically licking his lips with anticipation...

Watching as the kid remained still and continued to look around Gluttony smirked and awaited, after a few seconds the young man simply stared down his chaser and spoke
" I am the wielder of the Asura path, my body is my weapon, a weapon that will not soon be defeated by the likes of you..."the Man said confidently as he assumed a stance infront of Gluttony and looked at him. Gluttony heard this and smiled speaking " Good... It means I won't have to hold back and worry about obliterating you... Pride does enjoy having the bodies as well as the actual rinnegan..." he said smirking as stood upright and awaited the boy. Dashing quickly towards him the rinnegan user slammed his fist forward as Gluttony did the same, the immense force with which the kid released this attack and the strength of the explosion that Gluttony expelled with his own punch was unbelievable, as though an unstoppable force had met and immovable object. The two stood resolute for a moment as their attacks waged against one another and all of a sudden a blinding light exploded outwards and consumed them both along with the entire crater. After several minutes all that was left was rubble and nothing could be seen of the two combatants. On the opposite end of what used to be the crater a massive explosion erupted from the rubble as Gluttony rose out and brushed himself off, stretching a bit he was clearly injured as large scrapes and bruises were across his body, however simply shrugged them off and move towards where he assume the boy was; searching through the large amount of debris he pulled the boys body and slung it over his shoulder walking away as he smiled happily and began to muse over what he would have for lunch...



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PostPosted: Wed Jun 15, 2011 5:51 am


Username: Panthers7
RPC Name: En Sabah Nur ( Aburame )
RPC Rank: ( Academy )

Kekkei Genkai/Clan jutsu applying for: Aburame Clan
Kekkei Genkai stage: 1
Why Should you have this: well this will actually be my first time utilizing the Clan, I will admit. But I have a rather interesting concept that I want to utilize with the Aburame Clan. Utilizing various different insects to command and attack with. It is sorta my own twist that I wish to implement into the Clan and make it my own, so to speak. I have used similar Bloodlines that enable the user to attack with forces outside of themselves ( I've used Ichibi and the Iron Sand Kekkei Genkai in the past so I know how to keep from over powering such gifts. ) I feel like I'm a modestly good rper and know how to regulate from being powerful to being over-powered due to power-playing or something of that manner. And, I take criticism that if I am indeed sorta of going over board well, so that I may learn from it rather than gain offense to it. =^^=

RP Sample: (( I'm not utilizing very many techniques seeing as I'm rping him as not even an Academy Student yet. But hopefully, this will exhibit my knowledge of the Clan as well as what I hopefully intend to do with it, while keeping it within control ))

Konoha, isn't the only place that has the Aburame Clan nestled throughout it's branches. Like some of the main clan's and bloodlines, there have been families that have departed from the traditional ways of their Clan's to seek freedom outside of Konoha's prying eye. One family of the Aburame Clan, had done just that and departed into the depths of the harsh terrain of the Wind Country. Finding a village that accepted them for who they were, despite the betrayal they have done for their village and their Clan. But then again, this family wasn't truly betraying their so called home land. The mother, was a native of the Wind Country and lived in the very village they now lived in, while the father was the only native of the land of Leaves. After weeks turned into a year of settling into their new home, they bore a child who held the unique abilities of the father, as the mother was nothing more than a regular woman. Giving dominance to the father's gene's that would bring the calling of greatness to come out.

They first noticed their brilliant eyed child possessed the Clan's ability when the mother came to check on the crib... which to her unwanted surprise saw what seemed like an invasion of ants crawling all about her child's crib; what worse, these ants were nothing short of normal. Each about an inch long in length and seemed to crawl all over the new born who, despite the danger, lay giggling and laughing to these creatures that invaded it's space. They were none other than Paraponera or the Bullet Ants. Known for their up most bite painful bite and their lethality in numbers. Like any mother would, she reached out to grab her seemingly child in harm but as that hand caught the attention of these beady eyed creatures they snapped their large pincers viciously to the intruder. Each halting in places and turning their attention to, what seemed like to them, an intruder to their home. As if warning that any closer shall be the end of her hand. Of course to any mother, this was not something she wanted to have, being permitted from getting her baby and just as she aimed to kill the creatures the father told her that he was merely being 'broken' into the Clan. She looked at him puzzled for a moment before telling her to look closely in which she witnessed small bugs crawling through the pores of his skin. This was the first showing of Nur's abilities as an Aburame, and once he became of age the teaching of his gift would commence.

As the years progressed, the father who knew more about the Clan seeing as he had once held the title of Clan head back in Konoha, began to hone his child in his life as an Aburame. Even though, Nur seemed to be a little... unique with his abilities. In fact the dear boy seemed to hone more than simple the usual Kikaichu bugs that every Aburame hosts. The child who, outside of the ants that were exhibited earlier,were only a few bugs that the boy had learned to control. By utilizing the Kikaichu as bugs to retrieve various foods, Nur was able to attract different species of bugs which after some training picked him too to be their host; to be dependent on him to survive like the Kikaichu. Though they all of course didn't stay within him, they still crawled upon his skin like the Kikaichu. Living in the same harmony as them for as long as Nur kept up their dependency on him to survive. This intrigued the man greatly at this system his child made up, as he gave him one final test before teaching him the true techniques of the clan. For he will not have him grow up holding techniques and jutsu's and not even know the purpose of the bugs he utilizes nor the history and mechanics of a Aburame.

Taking his child out to the vast and spacious desert, away from the village so that he could teach his son in private, the man turned to his boon from underneath his large black cloak. The man, was hard to be seen from from such a large garment covering his shoulders but those same brilliant eyes that radiated in the pride of his life's own skull, showed nothing but pride for his boy. He was almost abnormally tall, reaching to the height of six-feet and six inches while holding jet black hair which had a somewhat cow-lick look to it. One could only wonder why anyone would wear such a color in the heat of Suna's unforgiving heat but it seemed the man was very content and comfortable with his colors." Child... I will teach you the ways of the gifts the God's have given you. We are the Aburame, the controllers and hosts to insects known as Kikaichu. Or others that may come our way. Though do not mistake us for the Kamizuru Clan who are nothing more than an off branch of us."He said, with a little distaste in his tone when he mentioned him as he awaited for Nur to look up from staring at his arm. The boy was a mere eight years of age. Silver hair due to the mixed traits of his parents yet he still held those brilliant almost glowing eyes as his father. Eyes, even for a young one, peered from from his 'cute' face like a wolf; prideful, sharp, and rather ruthless. The same eyes that watched with interest of his beetles that popped in and out of the pores of his skin harmlessly. Not feeling pain of their moving about and actually felt at peace; to be more precise, he didn't truly feel them moving within him until they came out in to his skin.

" So... they are parasites?" Nur asked as he looked back to his father who shook his head, or at least that is what he could decipher from how his cloak moved and the top of his head exhibited, " They are but not to you my child, do you not remember? Parasites feed on the hosts and prove harm upon them. I'm sure by now, you can see these creatures pose no harm to us. In fact, they seem to hold mutual respect for us." Nur tilted his head, surprised these creatures held enough knowledge or rather... intelligence to know that they are on the same 'team.' "You see..." The man began once again," We Aburame are able to live with them due to -" Nur cut his father off quickly and began to finish his sentence," The 'Destruction Bug Host' technique, correct? It is the technique you taught me when I was five." Nur said, being now at the age of eight and readying to become a shinobi like his father,"It is the technique that helps us live in the harmony with our Kikaichu. And other bugs they attract. It is through this technique and our chakra, that we become like a living hive for them. Providing the Ying-and-Yang of our partnership. We provide them protection from predators and we control them and give them commands with our chakra. To the point that they can even feel and hear our thoughts and we their own." As he looked to his ants that also crawled along the Kikaichu, his father chuckled to his highly insightful child. Much more articulate and straight forward than others of his age than scampered around the village. But that is to be known for a boy that would rather read books to learn methods of war, than pass a ball around and seemingly waste a day through play.

"Correct father?" Nur said lowering his arm to his side and looking back at the man adorned in the black cloak who nodded in agreement,"Very insightful child. I am glad my teachings have stuck with you. We are powerful for taking advantage of our opponents little knowledge of our clan, and let them face the misery of their ignorance. Tell me boy, what are the positives of our anthropid companions?" He asked as Nur, who went back to looking back upon his arm to look over his bugs. Intrigued at how they just moved along and did their business without a care in the world; almost as if feeding off his emotion of being calm and relaxed while being with the one that helped give him life."The benefits..."Nur began as he watched one Kikaichu fly off from his arm and attack an insect that rather came too close," Is that we can drain our opponents of chakra without them realizing it. Our bugs, can be planted upon our target and drain their chakra to the point that when they wish to fight, they will be incapable to do so because they have been drained of the life force that is within us all. We can also imprison opponents through the same manner by surrounding them with our bugs and draining them useless... Or simply killing them if needed." Nur said as he maneuvered one bug so that it may crawl to the tip of his index finger and fly off. Watching the beetle take off into the Suna plains before continuing to speak on his analysis of his clan,"We can also utilize our bugs as a defense. Seeing as my life and body is their home, with enough chakra I can form a wall of defense to protect me. Sacrificing them for my safety and the safety of those that lay with me." The man continued to nod as he listened to his seed speak of the truth as he spoke softly at the end of the previous sentence,"Meaning you will have to do what?" He asked in a darker tone who spoke without hesitation,"Kill them for their insolence of destroying my companions. Then... re-create them. Utilizing a jutsu you told me known as the.... as the..." Nur narrowed his eyes as he began to think, knowing his father's eyes were beginning to narrow due to his stall he was making before he quickly spouted the name," 'Insect Cocoon technique'. Which can not only re-populate our beetles but also make an entirely new population of bugs. By taking surviving bugs that have received some sort of onslaught, be it elemental or something of that nature... we can utilize to make an evolutionalized version of their former selves. Making them, above all, perfect being, so to speak."

The child looked up to his father, who crossed his arms, and looked to the boy as if he was waiting on something important."But wha -" Nur's eyes flashed as he quickly knew where his father was going with his question and answered,"But our Kikaichu can only last a couple hours, even within us. So they continue to breed to keep numbers up. But as we grow in our shinobi career and increase our chakra, we can start to host more and more Kikaichu within us making our maximum capacity of insects be heightened."

There was silence before the man known as Nur's father placed his hand upon his child's head and nodded,"Yes... That is correct. Very good my son. Tomorrow, we shall learn to control them as well as learn how to control those other's insects you seem to contract. We will ensure that you will become the pride of the family. For as your name entails, you are 'The First One.' I have never in my day seen anyone be able to control other insects but you have done it without fai. Very interesting... This will separate you from the weak that live in Konoha, and make you the strong. For you hold my blood in your veins." He gave chuckled and gave him a small nuggie,"And don' t you ever forget that..."

Panthers7


manseyful
Captain

PostPosted: Wed Jun 15, 2011 5:56 am


Panthers7
Username: Panthers7
RPC Name: En Sabah Nur ( Aburame )
RPC Rank: ( Academy )

Kekkei Genkai/Clan jutsu applying for: Aburame Clan
Kekkei Genkai stage: 1
Why Should you have this: well this will actually be my first time utilizing the Clan, I will admit. But I have a rather interesting concept that I want to utilize with the Aburame Clan. Utilizing various different insects to command and attack with. It is sorta my own twist that I wish to implement into the Clan and make it my own, so to speak. I have used similar Bloodlines that enable the user to attack with forces outside of themselves ( I've used Ichibi and the Iron Sand Kekkei Genkai in the past so I know how to keep from over powering such gifts. ) I feel like I'm a modestly good rper and know how to regulate from being powerful to being over-powered due to power-playing or something of that manner. And, I take criticism that if I am indeed sorta of going over board well, so that I may learn from it rather than gain offense to it. =^^=

RP Sample: (( I'm not utilizing very many techniques seeing as I'm rping him as not even an Academy Student yet. But hopefully, this will exhibit my knowledge of the Clan as well as what I hopefully intend to do with it, while keeping it within control ))

Konoha, isn't the only place that has the Aburame Clan nestled throughout it's branches. Like some of the main clan's and bloodlines, there have been families that have departed from the traditional ways of their Clan's to seek freedom outside of Konoha's prying eye. One family of the Aburame Clan, had done just that and departed into the depths of the harsh terrain of the Wind Country. Finding a village that accepted them for who they were, despite the betrayal they have done for their village and their Clan. But then again, this family wasn't truly betraying their so called home land. The mother, was a native of the Wind Country and lived in the very village they now lived in, while the father was the only native of the land of Leaves. After weeks turned into a year of settling into their new home, they bore a child who held the unique abilities of the father, as the mother was nothing more than a regular woman. Giving dominance to the father's gene's that would bring the calling of greatness to come out.

They first noticed their brilliant eyed child possessed the Clan's ability when the mother came to check on the crib... which to her unwanted surprise saw what seemed like an invasion of ants crawling all about her child's crib; what worse, these ants were nothing short of normal. Each about an inch long in length and seemed to crawl all over the new born who, despite the danger, lay giggling and laughing to these creatures that invaded it's space. They were none other than Paraponera or the Bullet Ants. Known for their up most bite painful bite and their lethality in numbers. Like any mother would, she reached out to grab her seemingly child in harm but as that hand caught the attention of these beady eyed creatures they snapped their large pincers viciously to the intruder. Each halting in places and turning their attention to, what seemed like to them, an intruder to their home. As if warning that any closer shall be the end of her hand. Of course to any mother, this was not something she wanted to have, being permitted from getting her baby and just as she aimed to kill the creatures the father told her that he was merely being 'broken' into the Clan. She looked at him puzzled for a moment before telling her to look closely in which she witnessed small bugs crawling through the pores of his skin. This was the first showing of Nur's abilities as an Aburame, and once he became of age the teaching of his gift would commence.

As the years progressed, the father who knew more about the Clan seeing as he had once held the title of Clan head back in Konoha, began to hone his child in his life as an Aburame. Even though, Nur seemed to be a little... unique with his abilities. In fact the dear boy seemed to hone more than simple the usual Kikaichu bugs that every Aburame hosts. The child who, outside of the ants that were exhibited earlier,were only a few bugs that the boy had learned to control. By utilizing the Kikaichu as bugs to retrieve various foods, Nur was able to attract different species of bugs which after some training picked him too to be their host; to be dependent on him to survive like the Kikaichu. Though they all of course didn't stay within him, they still crawled upon his skin like the Kikaichu. Living in the same harmony as them for as long as Nur kept up their dependency on him to survive. This intrigued the man greatly at this system his child made up, as he gave him one final test before teaching him the true techniques of the clan. For he will not have him grow up holding techniques and jutsu's and not even know the purpose of the bugs he utilizes nor the history and mechanics of a Aburame.

Taking his child out to the vast and spacious desert, away from the village so that he could teach his son in private, the man turned to his boon from underneath his large black cloak. The man, was hard to be seen from from such a large garment covering his shoulders but those same brilliant eyes that radiated in the pride of his life's own skull, showed nothing but pride for his boy. He was almost abnormally tall, reaching to the height of six-feet and six inches while holding jet black hair which had a somewhat cow-lick look to it. One could only wonder why anyone would wear such a color in the heat of Suna's unforgiving heat but it seemed the man was very content and comfortable with his colors." Child... I will teach you the ways of the gifts the God's have given you. We are the Aburame, the controllers and hosts to insects known as Kikaichu. Or others that may come our way. Though do not mistake us for the Kamizuru Clan who are nothing more than an off branch of us."He said, with a little distaste in his tone when he mentioned him as he awaited for Nur to look up from staring at his arm. The boy was a mere eight years of age. Silver hair due to the mixed traits of his parents yet he still held those brilliant almost glowing eyes as his father. Eyes, even for a young one, peered from from his 'cute' face like a wolf; prideful, sharp, and rather ruthless. The same eyes that watched with interest of his beetles that popped in and out of the pores of his skin harmlessly. Not feeling pain of their moving about and actually felt at peace; to be more precise, he didn't truly feel them moving within him until they came out in to his skin.

" So... they are parasites?" Nur asked as he looked back to his father who shook his head, or at least that is what he could decipher from how his cloak moved and the top of his head exhibited, " They are but not to you my child, do you not remember? Parasites feed on the hosts and prove harm upon them. I'm sure by now, you can see these creatures pose no harm to us. In fact, they seem to hold mutual respect for us." Nur tilted his head, surprised these creatures held enough knowledge or rather... intelligence to know that they are on the same 'team.' "You see..." The man began once again," We Aburame are able to live with them due to -" Nur cut his father off quickly and began to finish his sentence," The 'Destruction Bug Host' technique, correct? It is the technique you taught me when I was five." Nur said, being now at the age of eight and readying to become a shinobi like his father,"It is the technique that helps us live in the harmony with our Kikaichu. And other bugs they attract. It is through this technique and our chakra, that we become like a living hive for them. Providing the Ying-and-Yang of our partnership. We provide them protection from predators and we control them and give them commands with our chakra. To the point that they can even feel and hear our thoughts and we their own." As he looked to his ants that also crawled along the Kikaichu, his father chuckled to his highly insightful child. Much more articulate and straight forward than others of his age than scampered around the village. But that is to be known for a boy that would rather read books to learn methods of war, than pass a ball around and seemingly waste a day through play.

"Correct father?" Nur said lowering his arm to his side and looking back at the man adorned in the black cloak who nodded in agreement,"Very insightful child. I am glad my teachings have stuck with you. We are powerful for taking advantage of our opponents little knowledge of our clan, and let them face the misery of their ignorance. Tell me boy, what are the positives of our anthropid companions?" He asked as Nur, who went back to looking back upon his arm to look over his bugs. Intrigued at how they just moved along and did their business without a care in the world; almost as if feeding off his emotion of being calm and relaxed while being with the one that helped give him life."The benefits..."Nur began as he watched one Kikaichu fly off from his arm and attack an insect that rather came too close," Is that we can drain our opponents of chakra without them realizing it. Our bugs, can be planted upon our target and drain their chakra to the point that when they wish to fight, they will be incapable to do so because they have been drained of the life force that is within us all. We can also imprison opponents through the same manner by surrounding them with our bugs and draining them useless... Or simply killing them if needed." Nur said as he maneuvered one bug so that it may crawl to the tip of his index finger and fly off. Watching the beetle take off into the Suna plains before continuing to speak on his analysis of his clan,"We can also utilize our bugs as a defense. Seeing as my life and body is their home, with enough chakra I can form a wall of defense to protect me. Sacrificing them for my safety and the safety of those that lay with me." The man continued to nod as he listened to his seed speak of the truth as he spoke softly at the end of the previous sentence,"Meaning you will have to do what?" He asked in a darker tone who spoke without hesitation,"Kill them for their insolence of destroying my companions. Then... re-create them. Utilizing a jutsu you told me known as the.... as the..." Nur narrowed his eyes as he began to think, knowing his father's eyes were beginning to narrow due to his stall he was making before he quickly spouted the name," 'Insect Cocoon technique'. Which can not only re-populate our beetles but also make an entirely new population of bugs. By taking surviving bugs that have received some sort of onslaught, be it elemental or something of that nature... we can utilize to make an evolutionalized version of their former selves. Making them, above all, perfect being, so to speak."

The child looked up to his father, who crossed his arms, and looked to the boy as if he was waiting on something important."But wha -" Nur's eyes flashed as he quickly knew where his father was going with his question and answered,"But our Kikaichu can only last a couple hours, even within us. So they continue to breed to keep numbers up. But as we grow in our shinobi career and increase our chakra, we can start to host more and more Kikaichu within us making our maximum capacity of insects be heightened."

There was silence before the man known as Nur's father placed his hand upon his child's head and nodded,"Yes... That is correct. Very good my son. Tomorrow, we shall learn to control them as well as learn how to control those other's insects you seem to contract. We will ensure that you will become the pride of the family. For as your name entails, you are 'The First One.' I have never in my day seen anyone be able to control other insects but you have done it without fai. Very interesting... This will separate you from the weak that live in Konoha, and make you the strong. For you hold my blood in your veins." He gave chuckled and gave him a small nuggie,"And don' t you ever forget that..."



I liked it, accepted
PostPosted: Tue Jun 21, 2011 4:00 am


Username: Chison Uchiha
RPC Name: Rei Yamazaki
RPC Rank: To be Announced

Kekkei Genkai/Clan jutsu applying for: Origami no Dara
Kekkei Genkai stage: Stage two, Origami no Dara Suiton
Why Should you have this: Because no one else seems to desire or recognize it. I want to make people want it by using it in awesome ways.

RP Sample:

- | Rei Yamazaki | -

The Paper
Tactical Genius

Chakra: - 55/130 -


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The mind is a terrible thing to waste
In the heat of battle a single miscalculation could be fatal...





Rei walked through his entrance already becoming wary of his surroundings. Though his was still very excited his expression had changed to one of readiness and anticipation. He was mostly silent as he moved through the maze relying on Tenshi to communicate anything that might have escaped Rei's notice. 'Well now this is...interesting, so far I haven't encountered any resistance in the maze. Was it supposed to be a simple stroll as I attempt to find my way out?' He though on this briefly only to come to the assumption that this simply wasn't the case. 'No it would never be that easy, most jounin don't keep anything simple when teaching us genin.' Rei continued to walk, his hands now in his pockets as he looked straight ahead still trying to make sense of the eerie lack of activity here. To him it simply made no sense.

"At the very least I feel certain that I no longer need to refrain from speaking in order to hide my presence. I found it strange that there was nothing here to stop me until I came to a very possible conclusion. At first I considered that I may simply be in the easiest maze there is, but if you apply further thought it becomes obvious what the lack of opposition means." Of course Rei wasn't talking to himself granted he does do that from time to time. Still he was now talking to Tenshi who can of course understand every word he says. "Well if you've figured it out then please enlighten me, one of your deductions is exactly what I need right now anyway, this walk has just been too boring."

Rei smiled and scratched his cheek with the index finger of his right hand before responding. "Oh come now Tenshi, I think that walk has given us some valuable quality time, still I'll tell you what I'm thinking if it'll ease your boredom. I feel that I may actually be in the most challenging maze...the challenge is likely waiting for me at the end of the maze, I can't really be certain about this but the fact that nothing else has happened gives it some merit. In fact I'd say there's about a fifty fifty chance that I'm wrong...no better make it a forty percent chance that I'm wrong. Whatever is waiting for me at the end of this maze will likely be the most challenging thing I've ever faced. It might take nearly everything I have." Tenshi ruffled his feathers as he responded to Rei's deduction.

"Ah so thats what you're thinking huh? You really think thats how its gonna play out, so much so that there is only a forty percent chance of your being incorrect? You don't think it a bit of a stretch since the only thing you have to go off of is your lack of traps and opposition at this point?" Tenshi's retort made Rei frown a bit, he thought it was a pretty good deduction even if the basis could have easily been mere coincidence. "Tenshi...its not very often that ones intellect and skill is put to the test and is pitted against nothing. My deduction is the most logical explanation I could think of. Hell forty percent is may even be too high a percentage to calculate the extent to which I may be mistaken. No...now I have no doubt about it...something is waiting for his at the end of this maze."

Tenshi didn't respond, he had to admit Rei had sort of a valid point. Still even if Rei was wrong then it would simply mean they were allowed to stroll through uninhibited which would work even better. Rei continued to walk for about thirty minutes or so before he came to a door. "Hm? A door...Tenshi I think we made it to the end of the maze." Rei walked over to the door and examined it seeing nothing out of the ordinary save the lonely seal on the door. This was it, Rei didn't know what awaited him but he knew he'd know it soon. He looked carefully over the seal and around the room to see whether or not there were traps connected to the seal. Rei performed a set of hand seals before a rather large collection of paper and explosive tags came from his pack and formed into a clone of himself and Tenshi sitting on his shoulder.

Rei went with Tenshi back around the final corner of the maze and peered around it to look at his clone which he would now control remotely. "This is it Tenshi, whatever is gonna happen will happen as soon as that seal is removed." The clone removed the seal from the door and Rei continued to look in that direction. He didn't see anything out of the ordinary. "Hmmm...perhaps if I attempt to open the door." The clone reached to open the door before Rei noticed a shinobi come at the clone from the right attempting to punch it in its left jaw area. Rei's eyes widened as he saw this movement. 'Thats me! I'm attacking my clone right now!?' Rei maintained a degree of calm as he allowed the punch to meet his clones face before it dispersed and quickly wrapped the copy of him in paper. He then used his chakra to ignite the explosive tags. It took about ten seconds for the smoke to clear revealing absolutely nothing. There was nothing in the spot at all that would hint at his ruse being successful. 'Interesting so its a copy of me, I must face myself to get out of here huh?' His attention shifted again to the floor where the explosion happened.

'There are some singed pieces of paper scattered across the ground, of course I could assume that its only my paper that the clone was made of. I could also assume that what I blew up was either a paper clone or a wind clone. This of course is only based on the premise that he has my every ability. It was definitely a clone, that explosion wouldn't have destroyed a body completely. It means that he's using the exact same tactic as I am right now.' Rei took a deep breath and sat down leaning against the maze wall. 'This is a bit of a pain, he has everything I have. My knowledge, abilities, and skills. The only way to defeat him is to so something out of the ordinary.' Rei stood up slowly and began to walk into the small area where the door was. 'At the very least If he's thinking like I am then he won't see a reason to hide from the person who knows what he's likely planning.' True enough, soon after the double flickered into sight.

The double wore a vacant and serious expression, not too characteristic of Rei at all. Rei quickly thought about his weaknesses, unfortunately he didn't have them at his disposal. Fire and water were Rei's weaknesses but neither of them were present. 'He doesn't have a hawk...thats it, I do have a way to bring out my weakness but its dangerous to simply assume that he has no hawk. I cannot see the hawk but that doesn't mean it isn't present.' Rei thoughts were interrupted by the double moving in swiftly for an attack. His right arm came up in a straight punch toward Rei's face. Rei himself brought his left arm up and around in order to deflect his doubles hand downward and out to Rei's left while he himself launched a barrage of close body shots toward the doubles abdominal area which unfortunately were all blocked.

Rei jumped back to gain some distance as he began to feel a little annoyed with the whole thing. 'Damn...he has everything that I do...is there anything that I haven't tried before...something I've thought about but never done?' Rei turned his attention to Tenshi. and began to speak to him mentally. 'Tenshi its time to try our paper and fire combination, to my knowledge he seems to missing his version of you, either the seal didn't pick up on your or he's concealing your double somewhere. Either way its time to attempt this.' Tenshi nodded and immediately lifted off from Rei's shoulder. At the same time Rei performed a series of seals that resulted in paper rushing from his pack and surrounding the enemy in a tornado of paper. Of course his double immediately did the same to him, and both tornadoes were littered with explosive tags. 'I figured as much...now I'll also have to test that ability out.' Rei held a single seal, the horse seal to be exact, before paper began to pour from his pack covering him in a dense chakra filled paper from head to toe. This paper was thick and was now used for the purpose of armor.

Rei was the surrounded in an oval shaped shield of paper the covered his body. 'Be careful Tenshi, do it as fast as you can and get out of there.' At this point Rei couldn't see anything outside of his shield, he had to rely on Tenshi for the next part, he increased the density and protectiveness of the paper that the shield was now air tight, so not only could he not seem for himself what was happening, he also had limited air within his little shield. Meanwhile, Tenshi flew toward the double's tornado, he too had covered himself in a shield of the same strength and density of Rei's. The difference was the this would be the first time that Rei had tested his armor of paper so it was unlikely that double would understand what he was doing. Tenshi let out a screech and set himself ablaze before grazing the side of the tornado letting off a quick burst of flame to further accelerate his movement as well as ensuring the flames caught to the paper.

Tenshi himself made it out of range of the tornado before the tags within made it explode, and it was a large explosion who's impact caused the tornado around Rei to ignite as well. Luckily there were no falling flames in Rei's tornado due to Tenshi's assistance. The doubles shield quickly caught fire and the double lowered it immediately in order to prevent being burned. The double was still shrouded in smoke and was unable to see, the same was true for Rei as well. Still the double would begin to see and opening in the smoke although what was coming couldn't exactly be made out instantly. This is because it was a ball of wind. The double was able to notice what it was, but not in time to actually react to it. The double would take a direct hit an fly back out of the smoke cloud and into a wall. As soon as the double impacted the wall he was wrapped in explosive tags being unable to react to it at that point. Rei smirked happily realizing that everything that he had said up to this point came true. "Excellent then...another case solved...katsu!" The bombs exploded on the double causing terrible traumas to it and certainly death. Rei moved as quickly as possible out of his smoke cloud in order to begin catching his breath. He had deprived himself of air for at least a minute and a half. Though he was catching his breath now his body would no longer stand. His lack of oxygan caused him to fall to the ground panting heavily. "Th...thank you Tenshi...were it not for you I would have had no idea where he even was through the smoke." Rei through sheer force of will, determination, and controlled breathing successfully maintained his consciousness. About ten minutes later he stood slowly to his feet and walked steadily through the door with a contented smile on his face.

Paper Clone - 10
Explosive Tornado - 30
Chakra required to change the density of the paper -20
Kaze Bakuhatsu(Wind Explosion) - 10
Random widespread paper manipulation(shield) - 5





So lets calculate
Lets prepare
Lets value our lives...
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 21, 2011 9:23 am


chison uchiha
Username: Chison Uchiha
RPC Name: Rei Yamazaki
RPC Rank: To be Announced

Kekkei Genkai/Clan jutsu applying for: Origami no Dara
Kekkei Genkai stage: Stage two, Origami no Dara Suiton
Why Should you have this: Because no one else seems to desire or recognize it. I want to make people want it by using it in awesome ways.

RP Sample:

- | Rei Yamazaki | -

The Paper
Tactical Genius

Chakra: - 55/130 -


User ImageUser Image



The mind is a terrible thing to waste
In the heat of battle a single miscalculation could be fatal...





Rei walked through his entrance already becoming wary of his surroundings. Though his was still very excited his expression had changed to one of readiness and anticipation. He was mostly silent as he moved through the maze relying on Tenshi to communicate anything that might have escaped Rei's notice. 'Well now this is...interesting, so far I haven't encountered any resistance in the maze. Was it supposed to be a simple stroll as I attempt to find my way out?' He though on this briefly only to come to the assumption that this simply wasn't the case. 'No it would never be that easy, most jounin don't keep anything simple when teaching us genin.' Rei continued to walk, his hands now in his pockets as he looked straight ahead still trying to make sense of the eerie lack of activity here. To him it simply made no sense.

"At the very least I feel certain that I no longer need to refrain from speaking in order to hide my presence. I found it strange that there was nothing here to stop me until I came to a very possible conclusion. At first I considered that I may simply be in the easiest maze there is, but if you apply further thought it becomes obvious what the lack of opposition means." Of course Rei wasn't talking to himself granted he does do that from time to time. Still he was now talking to Tenshi who can of course understand every word he says. "Well if you've figured it out then please enlighten me, one of your deductions is exactly what I need right now anyway, this walk has just been too boring."

Rei smiled and scratched his cheek with the index finger of his right hand before responding. "Oh come now Tenshi, I think that walk has given us some valuable quality time, still I'll tell you what I'm thinking if it'll ease your boredom. I feel that I may actually be in the most challenging maze...the challenge is likely waiting for me at the end of the maze, I can't really be certain about this but the fact that nothing else has happened gives it some merit. In fact I'd say there's about a fifty fifty chance that I'm wrong...no better make it a forty percent chance that I'm wrong. Whatever is waiting for me at the end of this maze will likely be the most challenging thing I've ever faced. It might take nearly everything I have." Tenshi ruffled his feathers as he responded to Rei's deduction.

"Ah so thats what you're thinking huh? You really think thats how its gonna play out, so much so that there is only a forty percent chance of your being incorrect? You don't think it a bit of a stretch since the only thing you have to go off of is your lack of traps and opposition at this point?" Tenshi's retort made Rei frown a bit, he thought it was a pretty good deduction even if the basis could have easily been mere coincidence. "Tenshi...its not very often that ones intellect and skill is put to the test and is pitted against nothing. My deduction is the most logical explanation I could think of. Hell forty percent is may even be too high a percentage to calculate the extent to which I may be mistaken. No...now I have no doubt about it...something is waiting for his at the end of this maze."

Tenshi didn't respond, he had to admit Rei had sort of a valid point. Still even if Rei was wrong then it would simply mean they were allowed to stroll through uninhibited which would work even better. Rei continued to walk for about thirty minutes or so before he came to a door. "Hm? A door...Tenshi I think we made it to the end of the maze." Rei walked over to the door and examined it seeing nothing out of the ordinary save the lonely seal on the door. This was it, Rei didn't know what awaited him but he knew he'd know it soon. He looked carefully over the seal and around the room to see whether or not there were traps connected to the seal. Rei performed a set of hand seals before a rather large collection of paper and explosive tags came from his pack and formed into a clone of himself and Tenshi sitting on his shoulder.

Rei went with Tenshi back around the final corner of the maze and peered around it to look at his clone which he would now control remotely. "This is it Tenshi, whatever is gonna happen will happen as soon as that seal is removed." The clone removed the seal from the door and Rei continued to look in that direction. He didn't see anything out of the ordinary. "Hmmm...perhaps if I attempt to open the door." The clone reached to open the door before Rei noticed a shinobi come at the clone from the right attempting to punch it in its left jaw area. Rei's eyes widened as he saw this movement. 'Thats me! I'm attacking my clone right now!?' Rei maintained a degree of calm as he allowed the punch to meet his clones face before it dispersed and quickly wrapped the copy of him in paper. He then used his chakra to ignite the explosive tags. It took about ten seconds for the smoke to clear revealing absolutely nothing. There was nothing in the spot at all that would hint at his ruse being successful. 'Interesting so its a copy of me, I must face myself to get out of here huh?' His attention shifted again to the floor where the explosion happened.

'There are some singed pieces of paper scattered across the ground, of course I could assume that its only my paper that the clone was made of. I could also assume that what I blew up was either a paper clone or a wind clone. This of course is only based on the premise that he has my every ability. It was definitely a clone, that explosion wouldn't have destroyed a body completely. It means that he's using the exact same tactic as I am right now.' Rei took a deep breath and sat down leaning against the maze wall. 'This is a bit of a pain, he has everything I have. My knowledge, abilities, and skills. The only way to defeat him is to so something out of the ordinary.' Rei stood up slowly and began to walk into the small area where the door was. 'At the very least If he's thinking like I am then he won't see a reason to hide from the person who knows what he's likely planning.' True enough, soon after the double flickered into sight.

The double wore a vacant and serious expression, not too characteristic of Rei at all. Rei quickly thought about his weaknesses, unfortunately he didn't have them at his disposal. Fire and water were Rei's weaknesses but neither of them were present. 'He doesn't have a hawk...thats it, I do have a way to bring out my weakness but its dangerous to simply assume that he has no hawk. I cannot see the hawk but that doesn't mean it isn't present.' Rei thoughts were interrupted by the double moving in swiftly for an attack. His right arm came up in a straight punch toward Rei's face. Rei himself brought his left arm up and around in order to deflect his doubles hand downward and out to Rei's left while he himself launched a barrage of close body shots toward the doubles abdominal area which unfortunately were all blocked.

Rei jumped back to gain some distance as he began to feel a little annoyed with the whole thing. 'Damn...he has everything that I do...is there anything that I haven't tried before...something I've thought about but never done?' Rei turned his attention to Tenshi. and began to speak to him mentally. 'Tenshi its time to try our paper and fire combination, to my knowledge he seems to missing his version of you, either the seal didn't pick up on your or he's concealing your double somewhere. Either way its time to attempt this.' Tenshi nodded and immediately lifted off from Rei's shoulder. At the same time Rei performed a series of seals that resulted in paper rushing from his pack and surrounding the enemy in a tornado of paper. Of course his double immediately did the same to him, and both tornadoes were littered with explosive tags. 'I figured as much...now I'll also have to test that ability out.' Rei held a single seal, the horse seal to be exact, before paper began to pour from his pack covering him in a dense chakra filled paper from head to toe. This paper was thick and was now used for the purpose of armor.

Rei was the surrounded in an oval shaped shield of paper the covered his body. 'Be careful Tenshi, do it as fast as you can and get out of there.' At this point Rei couldn't see anything outside of his shield, he had to rely on Tenshi for the next part, he increased the density and protectiveness of the paper that the shield was now air tight, so not only could he not seem for himself what was happening, he also had limited air within his little shield. Meanwhile, Tenshi flew toward the double's tornado, he too had covered himself in a shield of the same strength and density of Rei's. The difference was the this would be the first time that Rei had tested his armor of paper so it was unlikely that double would understand what he was doing. Tenshi let out a screech and set himself ablaze before grazing the side of the tornado letting off a quick burst of flame to further accelerate his movement as well as ensuring the flames caught to the paper.

Tenshi himself made it out of range of the tornado before the tags within made it explode, and it was a large explosion who's impact caused the tornado around Rei to ignite as well. Luckily there were no falling flames in Rei's tornado due to Tenshi's assistance. The doubles shield quickly caught fire and the double lowered it immediately in order to prevent being burned. The double was still shrouded in smoke and was unable to see, the same was true for Rei as well. Still the double would begin to see and opening in the smoke although what was coming couldn't exactly be made out instantly. This is because it was a ball of wind. The double was able to notice what it was, but not in time to actually react to it. The double would take a direct hit an fly back out of the smoke cloud and into a wall. As soon as the double impacted the wall he was wrapped in explosive tags being unable to react to it at that point. Rei smirked happily realizing that everything that he had said up to this point came true. "Excellent then...another case solved...katsu!" The bombs exploded on the double causing terrible traumas to it and certainly death. Rei moved as quickly as possible out of his smoke cloud in order to begin catching his breath. He had deprived himself of air for at least a minute and a half. Though he was catching his breath now his body would no longer stand. His lack of oxygan caused him to fall to the ground panting heavily. "Th...thank you Tenshi...were it not for you I would have had no idea where he even was through the smoke." Rei through sheer force of will, determination, and controlled breathing successfully maintained his consciousness. About ten minutes later he stood slowly to his feet and walked steadily through the door with a contented smile on his face.

Paper Clone - 10
Explosive Tornado - 30
Chakra required to change the density of the paper -20
Kaze Bakuhatsu(Wind Explosion) - 10
Random widespread paper manipulation(shield) - 5





So lets calculate
Lets prepare
Lets value our lives...
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It was fun to read but there is no Suiton or second stage to this ability.
PostPosted: Tue Jun 21, 2011 10:34 am


Hidden Amongst the Lies
chison uchiha
Username: Chison Uchiha
RPC Name: Rei Yamazaki
RPC Rank: To be Announced

Kekkei Genkai/Clan jutsu applying for: Origami no Dara
Kekkei Genkai stage: Stage two, Origami no Dara Suiton
Why Should you have this: Because no one else seems to desire or recognize it. I want to make people want it by using it in awesome ways.

RP Sample:

- | Rei Yamazaki | -

The Paper
Tactical Genius

Chakra: - 55/130 -


User ImageUser Image



The mind is a terrible thing to waste
In the heat of battle a single miscalculation could be fatal...





Rei walked through his entrance already becoming wary of his surroundings. Though his was still very excited his expression had changed to one of readiness and anticipation. He was mostly silent as he moved through the maze relying on Tenshi to communicate anything that might have escaped Rei's notice. 'Well now this is...interesting, so far I haven't encountered any resistance in the maze. Was it supposed to be a simple stroll as I attempt to find my way out?' He though on this briefly only to come to the assumption that this simply wasn't the case. 'No it would never be that easy, most jounin don't keep anything simple when teaching us genin.' Rei continued to walk, his hands now in his pockets as he looked straight ahead still trying to make sense of the eerie lack of activity here. To him it simply made no sense.

"At the very least I feel certain that I no longer need to refrain from speaking in order to hide my presence. I found it strange that there was nothing here to stop me until I came to a very possible conclusion. At first I considered that I may simply be in the easiest maze there is, but if you apply further thought it becomes obvious what the lack of opposition means." Of course Rei wasn't talking to himself granted he does do that from time to time. Still he was now talking to Tenshi who can of course understand every word he says. "Well if you've figured it out then please enlighten me, one of your deductions is exactly what I need right now anyway, this walk has just been too boring."

Rei smiled and scratched his cheek with the index finger of his right hand before responding. "Oh come now Tenshi, I think that walk has given us some valuable quality time, still I'll tell you what I'm thinking if it'll ease your boredom. I feel that I may actually be in the most challenging maze...the challenge is likely waiting for me at the end of the maze, I can't really be certain about this but the fact that nothing else has happened gives it some merit. In fact I'd say there's about a fifty fifty chance that I'm wrong...no better make it a forty percent chance that I'm wrong. Whatever is waiting for me at the end of this maze will likely be the most challenging thing I've ever faced. It might take nearly everything I have." Tenshi ruffled his feathers as he responded to Rei's deduction.

"Ah so thats what you're thinking huh? You really think thats how its gonna play out, so much so that there is only a forty percent chance of your being incorrect? You don't think it a bit of a stretch since the only thing you have to go off of is your lack of traps and opposition at this point?" Tenshi's retort made Rei frown a bit, he thought it was a pretty good deduction even if the basis could have easily been mere coincidence. "Tenshi...its not very often that ones intellect and skill is put to the test and is pitted against nothing. My deduction is the most logical explanation I could think of. Hell forty percent is may even be too high a percentage to calculate the extent to which I may be mistaken. No...now I have no doubt about it...something is waiting for his at the end of this maze."

Tenshi didn't respond, he had to admit Rei had sort of a valid point. Still even if Rei was wrong then it would simply mean they were allowed to stroll through uninhibited which would work even better. Rei continued to walk for about thirty minutes or so before he came to a door. "Hm? A door...Tenshi I think we made it to the end of the maze." Rei walked over to the door and examined it seeing nothing out of the ordinary save the lonely seal on the door. This was it, Rei didn't know what awaited him but he knew he'd know it soon. He looked carefully over the seal and around the room to see whether or not there were traps connected to the seal. Rei performed a set of hand seals before a rather large collection of paper and explosive tags came from his pack and formed into a clone of himself and Tenshi sitting on his shoulder.

Rei went with Tenshi back around the final corner of the maze and peered around it to look at his clone which he would now control remotely. "This is it Tenshi, whatever is gonna happen will happen as soon as that seal is removed." The clone removed the seal from the door and Rei continued to look in that direction. He didn't see anything out of the ordinary. "Hmmm...perhaps if I attempt to open the door." The clone reached to open the door before Rei noticed a shinobi come at the clone from the right attempting to punch it in its left jaw area. Rei's eyes widened as he saw this movement. 'Thats me! I'm attacking my clone right now!?' Rei maintained a degree of calm as he allowed the punch to meet his clones face before it dispersed and quickly wrapped the copy of him in paper. He then used his chakra to ignite the explosive tags. It took about ten seconds for the smoke to clear revealing absolutely nothing. There was nothing in the spot at all that would hint at his ruse being successful. 'Interesting so its a copy of me, I must face myself to get out of here huh?' His attention shifted again to the floor where the explosion happened.

'There are some singed pieces of paper scattered across the ground, of course I could assume that its only my paper that the clone was made of. I could also assume that what I blew up was either a paper clone or a wind clone. This of course is only based on the premise that he has my every ability. It was definitely a clone, that explosion wouldn't have destroyed a body completely. It means that he's using the exact same tactic as I am right now.' Rei took a deep breath and sat down leaning against the maze wall. 'This is a bit of a pain, he has everything I have. My knowledge, abilities, and skills. The only way to defeat him is to so something out of the ordinary.' Rei stood up slowly and began to walk into the small area where the door was. 'At the very least If he's thinking like I am then he won't see a reason to hide from the person who knows what he's likely planning.' True enough, soon after the double flickered into sight.

The double wore a vacant and serious expression, not too characteristic of Rei at all. Rei quickly thought about his weaknesses, unfortunately he didn't have them at his disposal. Fire and water were Rei's weaknesses but neither of them were present. 'He doesn't have a hawk...thats it, I do have a way to bring out my weakness but its dangerous to simply assume that he has no hawk. I cannot see the hawk but that doesn't mean it isn't present.' Rei thoughts were interrupted by the double moving in swiftly for an attack. His right arm came up in a straight punch toward Rei's face. Rei himself brought his left arm up and around in order to deflect his doubles hand downward and out to Rei's left while he himself launched a barrage of close body shots toward the doubles abdominal area which unfortunately were all blocked.

Rei jumped back to gain some distance as he began to feel a little annoyed with the whole thing. 'Damn...he has everything that I do...is there anything that I haven't tried before...something I've thought about but never done?' Rei turned his attention to Tenshi. and began to speak to him mentally. 'Tenshi its time to try our paper and fire combination, to my knowledge he seems to missing his version of you, either the seal didn't pick up on your or he's concealing your double somewhere. Either way its time to attempt this.' Tenshi nodded and immediately lifted off from Rei's shoulder. At the same time Rei performed a series of seals that resulted in paper rushing from his pack and surrounding the enemy in a tornado of paper. Of course his double immediately did the same to him, and both tornadoes were littered with explosive tags. 'I figured as much...now I'll also have to test that ability out.' Rei held a single seal, the horse seal to be exact, before paper began to pour from his pack covering him in a dense chakra filled paper from head to toe. This paper was thick and was now used for the purpose of armor.

Rei was the surrounded in an oval shaped shield of paper the covered his body. 'Be careful Tenshi, do it as fast as you can and get out of there.' At this point Rei couldn't see anything outside of his shield, he had to rely on Tenshi for the next part, he increased the density and protectiveness of the paper that the shield was now air tight, so not only could he not seem for himself what was happening, he also had limited air within his little shield. Meanwhile, Tenshi flew toward the double's tornado, he too had covered himself in a shield of the same strength and density of Rei's. The difference was the this would be the first time that Rei had tested his armor of paper so it was unlikely that double would understand what he was doing. Tenshi let out a screech and set himself ablaze before grazing the side of the tornado letting off a quick burst of flame to further accelerate his movement as well as ensuring the flames caught to the paper.

Tenshi himself made it out of range of the tornado before the tags within made it explode, and it was a large explosion who's impact caused the tornado around Rei to ignite as well. Luckily there were no falling flames in Rei's tornado due to Tenshi's assistance. The doubles shield quickly caught fire and the double lowered it immediately in order to prevent being burned. The double was still shrouded in smoke and was unable to see, the same was true for Rei as well. Still the double would begin to see and opening in the smoke although what was coming couldn't exactly be made out instantly. This is because it was a ball of wind. The double was able to notice what it was, but not in time to actually react to it. The double would take a direct hit an fly back out of the smoke cloud and into a wall. As soon as the double impacted the wall he was wrapped in explosive tags being unable to react to it at that point. Rei smirked happily realizing that everything that he had said up to this point came true. "Excellent then...another case solved...katsu!" The bombs exploded on the double causing terrible traumas to it and certainly death. Rei moved as quickly as possible out of his smoke cloud in order to begin catching his breath. He had deprived himself of air for at least a minute and a half. Though he was catching his breath now his body would no longer stand. His lack of oxygan caused him to fall to the ground panting heavily. "Th...thank you Tenshi...were it not for you I would have had no idea where he even was through the smoke." Rei through sheer force of will, determination, and controlled breathing successfully maintained his consciousness. About ten minutes later he stood slowly to his feet and walked steadily through the door with a contented smile on his face.

Paper Clone - 10
Explosive Tornado - 30
Chakra required to change the density of the paper -20
Kaze Bakuhatsu(Wind Explosion) - 10
Random widespread paper manipulation(shield) - 5





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It was fun to read but there is no Suiton or second stage to this ability.



There is no stage 2 to this Kekkei Genkai. If a Kekkei Genkai or Clan doesn't have any stages leave this blank, there's especially no such thing as a Suiton stage.

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 25, 2011 12:50 pm


Username: shadowpisces
RPC Name: Shikamara Nayla Yuki
RPC Rank: Genin

Kekkei Genkai/Clan jutsu applying for: Yuki Clan Ice Release
Kekkei Genkai stage: 1
Why Should you have this: (I’m new at this, so if anything is horribly wrong, please let me know.) I think I can get really creative with the ice release as my skill level improves. I have a personal affinity for water and wind, so I know I’ll be able to use them to my advantage… given some time to adjust to the roleplaying. I think it could be of great use defensively, since that’s what kind of ninja Shikamara will be.

RP Sample:
Shikamara quietly jumped from tree to tree. She had been scouting the woods for hours now. “I wonder if any of my teammates have found anything?” she wondered as she jumped to the ground. She bent low and scanned the area around her. Kibato-Sensei had her squad was patrolling the west woods tonight. He hadn’t given many details, but warned to be on their guard at all times and to alert the others if ambushed.

When their sensei left them behind to scout, they just looked at each other. “I wonder what’s going on now?” said Takari. Katazuma shrugged his shoulders. “Well, shall we be off then?” said Shikamara as she leapt into the trees. She was always the first off when it came to missions. The others followed her lead, and went off into the night.

After she made sure the surroundings were clear, Shikamara stood up and walked over to a small river she landed by. Kneeling down, she dipped her hands into the cool water and took a drink. Suddenly, there was a crackling sound behind her. She jumped up quickly and looked around as at the dark woods. She heard a crack to he left, then to her right, one in front of too. How many people were there? She heard swift movements again form her left. She got in defensive stance, ready for what was coming. She slid out her blade and held it in front of her. One of the enemies jumped out at her from the right. The ninja threw smoke bombs at Shikamara. She couldn’t see anything. She started to panic.

Remembering what Katazuma had told her, “You must remain calm, and protect yourself. I will always be there to help you, but sometimes it may take me a minute to get to you.” She smiled.” I CAN DO THIS!” she thought and sheathed her blade. She slowly started making hand signs, trying to generate ice chakra. She wasn’t sure which way the ninja were. But if she could create enough ice to scatter all directions then she might be ok. “KATAZUMA!!!” she screamed and made the hands signs as fast as she could. Shikamara felt the chakra building.

“Ice release!! Protective dome!!” she screamed as the dome built up around her. She took this time to breathe calmly for a second. Surikens and exploding tags bombarded the dome. She had to think fast, her shelter wouldn’t hold up much longer. She knew she had to gather the ninja together somehow. As soon as the dome collapsed she rolled forward and ran as soon as her feet hit the ground. She tried to make plenty of room between her and the enemy ninja.

When she felt she had put enough space between, she spun around quickly. “What am I going to do now?” she thought helplessly to herself. She was still unsure exactly how many ninja were there. She stood her ground and waited for them to strike. Two of them suddenly came at her. She did the hand signs as fast and accurately as she could. “Ice Spikes!!” she screamed. One of them hit the ninja to the right. The ninja on the left was able to dodge it. She gathered her chakra and did the hand signs once more. “Ice Spikes!” she yelled. With that she lost the remaining amount of chakra and passed out.

Later, she awoke to Katazuma, Takari, and Kabato-Senseis’ faces over her. “Are you ok? What happened?” Takari was kneeling beside her, holding her hand. “I was ambushed.” Shikamara said as she sat up. “I tried to use the ice release jutsu, but I’m not sure what happened after that.” Katazuma kneeled down beside her, “I’m so sorry I didn’t get here in time.” Shikamara got to her feet, with the help of her squad mates. She looked around and was horrified.“Looks to me like you were successful.” Said Kabato-Sensei. Three ninja lay on the ground around them. Sensei had already searched them. He was awaiting another sensei to come assist him. “Take her back to the village.” He instructed Takari and Katazuma.
PostPosted: Mon Jun 27, 2011 10:42 am


shadowpisces
Username: shadowpisces
RPC Name: Shikamara Nayla Yuki
RPC Rank: Genin

Kekkei Genkai/Clan jutsu applying for: Yuki Clan Ice Release
Kekkei Genkai stage: 1
Why Should you have this: (I’m new at this, so if anything is horribly wrong, please let me know.) I think I can get really creative with the ice release as my skill level improves. I have a personal affinity for water and wind, so I know I’ll be able to use them to my advantage… given some time to adjust to the roleplaying. I think it could be of great use defensively, since that’s what kind of ninja Shikamara will be.

RP Sample:
Shikamara quietly jumped from tree to tree. She had been scouting the woods for hours now. “I wonder if any of my teammates have found anything?” she wondered as she jumped to the ground. She bent low and scanned the area around her. Kibato-Sensei had her squad was patrolling the west woods tonight. He hadn’t given many details, but warned to be on their guard at all times and to alert the others if ambushed.

When their sensei left them behind to scout, they just looked at each other. “I wonder what’s going on now?” said Takari. Katazuma shrugged his shoulders. “Well, shall we be off then?” said Shikamara as she leapt into the trees. She was always the first off when it came to missions. The others followed her lead, and went off into the night.

After she made sure the surroundings were clear, Shikamara stood up and walked over to a small river she landed by. Kneeling down, she dipped her hands into the cool water and took a drink. Suddenly, there was a crackling sound behind her. She jumped up quickly and looked around as at the dark woods. She heard a crack to he left, then to her right, one in front of too. How many people were there? She heard swift movements again form her left. She got in defensive stance, ready for what was coming. She slid out her blade and held it in front of her. One of the enemies jumped out at her from the right. The ninja threw smoke bombs at Shikamara. She couldn’t see anything. She started to panic.

Remembering what Katazuma had told her, “You must remain calm, and protect yourself. I will always be there to help you, but sometimes it may take me a minute to get to you.” She smiled.” I CAN DO THIS!” she thought and sheathed her blade. She slowly started making hand signs, trying to generate ice chakra. She wasn’t sure which way the ninja were. But if she could create enough ice to scatter all directions then she might be ok. “KATAZUMA!!!” she screamed and made the hands signs as fast as she could. Shikamara felt the chakra building.

“Ice release!! Protective dome!!” she screamed as the dome built up around her. She took this time to breathe calmly for a second. Surikens and exploding tags bombarded the dome. She had to think fast, her shelter wouldn’t hold up much longer. She knew she had to gather the ninja together somehow. As soon as the dome collapsed she rolled forward and ran as soon as her feet hit the ground. She tried to make plenty of room between her and the enemy ninja.

When she felt she had put enough space between, she spun around quickly. “What am I going to do now?” she thought helplessly to herself. She was still unsure exactly how many ninja were there. She stood her ground and waited for them to strike. Two of them suddenly came at her. She did the hand signs as fast and accurately as she could. “Ice Spikes!!” she screamed. One of them hit the ninja to the right. The ninja on the left was able to dodge it. She gathered her chakra and did the hand signs once more. “Ice Spikes!” she yelled. With that she lost the remaining amount of chakra and passed out.

Later, she awoke to Katazuma, Takari, and Kabato-Senseis’ faces over her. “Are you ok? What happened?” Takari was kneeling beside her, holding her hand. “I was ambushed.” Shikamara said as she sat up. “I tried to use the ice release jutsu, but I’m not sure what happened after that.” Katazuma kneeled down beside her, “I’m so sorry I didn’t get here in time.” Shikamara got to her feet, with the help of her squad mates. She looked around and was horrified.“Looks to me like you were successful.” Said Kabato-Sensei. Three ninja lay on the ground around them. Sensei had already searched them. He was awaiting another sensei to come assist him. “Take her back to the village.” He instructed Takari and Katazuma.



The sample itself is just about passable, the issue of name needs to be looked at. Shikamara isn't an acceptable name for a Yuki member to have, so either rethink the name or rethink the clan. Otherwise I'll accept this.

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