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 Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2011 10:18 pm
do you think this is a good speach for a dying man in a rp me and a read are tryying to finish.
As long there is breath in me and/ or my family and friends this world will always be protected. even in death i shall never be forgotten.( his arm begins to turn into petals and being scattered in the air.)this is the outh i have taken. we will meet again everyone. - shin(DBZRPOC)
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Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2011 10:21 pm
With grammatical improvements, yes, it would be good. Meaningful, certainly.
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Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2011 10:21 pm
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Posted: Fri Apr 22, 2011 12:38 am
I can help with that. ^^
"As long there is breath in me, my family, my friends... This world will always be protected. Even in death, I shall never be forgotten." His arm slowly faded, turning into light flower petals that danced in the wind. "This is the oath i have taken. We will meet again, everyone."- Shin(DBZRPOC)
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Posted: Fri Apr 22, 2011 12:10 pm
Lovely Sailor Sirius I can help with that. ^^"As long there is breath in me, my family, my friends... This world will always be protected. Even in death, I shall never be forgotten." His arm slowly faded, turning into light flower petals that danced in the wind. "This is the oath i have taken. We will meet again, everyone."- Shin(DBZRPOC) that was a beautiful way to say it. :3
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Posted: Fri Apr 22, 2011 8:03 pm
sntsbueno Lovely Sailor Sirius I can help with that. ^^"As long there is breath in me, my family, my friends... This world will always be protected. Even in death, I shall never be forgotten." His arm slowly faded, turning into light flower petals that danced in the wind. "This is the oath i have taken. We will meet again, everyone."- Shin(DBZRPOC) that was a beautiful way to say it. :3
Fantasy is my forte. ^^ I love writing and roleplaying, and both of those skills benefit from each other.
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Posted: Fri Apr 22, 2011 10:09 pm
Lovely Sailor Sirius sntsbueno Lovely Sailor Sirius I can help with that. ^^"As long there is breath in me, my family, my friends... This world will always be protected. Even in death, I shall never be forgotten." His arm slowly faded, turning into light flower petals that danced in the wind. "This is the oath i have taken. We will meet again, everyone."- Shin(DBZRPOC) that was a beautiful way to say it. :3
Fantasy is my forte. ^^ I love writing and roleplaying, and both of those skills benefit from each other.the reason why i post this is because my DBZ RPOC died in the DBZ rp. and to puit in short word. he died giving his remaining life force/or in dbz terms energy to his friend that made a choice. to either save the girl or shin.(plus i also life fantasy and roleplaying in rp of course. but i suck in writing one. lol)
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