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Posted: Sat Mar 26, 2011 10:46 pm
Name Haiku Last Name Unknown Gender Female Age Unknown looks to be about 19-20yrs old Species Demon/elf Occupation Circo nelle Stelle/ Acrobat
Appearance Standing at only 5ft 3, she was shorter than most elves. Usually having short red and cream colored hair, and it was usually hiding the base of her elven ears. Though above those ears seemed to get more attention she has ram horns, twirling so that they just brushed those ears under them into their center. It seemed red was her favored color, as she even has red eyes as deep as rubies at times when she watched people around the grounds. A long ribbon like scarf danced along her neck and down towards the ground, sleeves longer than her hands themselves were rested on her shoulders as they were a black faded to a red. On that pale white skin it seemed she had bright golden yellow ribbons covering her breasts, though somehow they stayed in place even when she moved. Black underwear covered her bottom, and thigh high boots covered the rest, as a long white demon tail seemed to pull it all together as it was twirling behind her. Picture [In due time dears for now look at my avi. <3]
Personality Haiku is normally very shy, even when asked simple questions, sometimes she feels that she is a mute, because it just seems hard to answer anyone. As she is quiet, it makes things frustrating. Or she is really nervous, its hard to approach her, since she will shiver lightly and hope that you either keep walking or ignore her. She is quite the odd creature, but who could blame a child who was never shown that groups are good. But once you are able to open her up and get her to talk, she is a whole new person, she will be a goofy, random and even having a dirty mind if she gets use to you. Most fear that she has M.P.D. or Multiple Personalities Disorder, with the way she is, even though she truly has it, she tends to laugh it off if someone says something. Its a scary thing her personality, but she knows how it is, and how to control it, for the most part, at least its only two of her personalities and not more, then all hell could break loose.
Abilities At any moment she is carrying a blade that is much longer than her, but hardly does she use it, its more for her shows then for fighting, but she does take them out to scare off bigger men mostly, as she is a small girl. Weaknesses Thunderstorms make her jump, sometimes hide, spiders are a big weakness too. Fighting,
Backstory-A forbidden love and 9months later this mental problem was born.- Haiku was always the unusual one even from a very young age, too short to be an elf, but not mean enough to be a full demon, even in school, yeah the village had one, so neither sides wanted her, she was abandoned, left to fend for herself, thank goodness for that blade she owns, even if at times it was too heavy for her to carry. It was good to defend and use if she needed it. Then again she had her mental problem too, so it was like someone else was with her as well, until she yells at herself, then its quiet again; fearing that, that was the reason her family and friends didn't like her, she normally kept her issue to herself, which always caused her body stress, and it always made her feel faint, Though her blade did get her in trouble quite a few times, bandits thinking she wanted to fight, guards not letting her in because they thought she was gonna attack, always making her go around the villages or towns, it was like she was an animal; unable to feed or be loved, that is why she came up with the ability to transform this rather large blade into a simple piece of ribbon to cover her upper body. She needed clothing anyway, right? As she was walking, she stumbled upon a place named Gaia, and then a place that was basically made for kinds like her, so she slipped in, practically unnoticed by most, only because she was able to leap herself up into trees like it was nothing, some would think she weighed less then a feather, but no she weighed about average, a mere 120lbs, she just learned to make herself seem lighter to avoid fights, 'What a strange place' but it fit her, or so she hoped it seemed friendly enough. As she looked around she peeked into tents and carts, smelling the food and watching all the people it was amusing to say the least. Then she learned she was in a Circus, How fun! She felt at home here, but would the accept her? She hoped so. And thats where her new adventure began.
Facts Haiku likes most sweets and those are an easy way to get her to talk more if you want her to. She hates fighting too, yeah she has a blade, but her ability to use it is slim to none.
Sample Brushing back her short hair, Haiku scanned the audience, a faint smile pressed on those painted black lips, as she danced lightly over the tight rope, hearing as people were in aw and shocked as she did it. Chains on her horns jingled in the silence, and then she fell, or so many thought with those loud gasps! As she dropped a male came swinging by and grabbed her arms, with her smile growing she gave a nod and was let go, that scarf on her neck fluttering like a ribbon held by a dancer, doing a flip up and onto a high column, she bowed and listened to the claps before they quickly faded away, with a tilt of her head, she wondered why she couldn't hear them anymore, then she realized....She was awake. Sitting there in a chair, her small desk lamp turned on with a book open, obvious imprints along her arm, of the chains from her horns, Haiku sighed and lowered her head to the desk before her. "I must have dozed off" she muttered aloud and pushed away from the desk, closing the book and shutting off the small lamp, she dragged her hand along the cover a moment then picked it up, slipping off to her bed, hugging this lone copy close to her breast, hoping that dream would come again, this time with possible friends to join in, that is what she felt in this world, like this torn book to her chest, as she looked it over once more, watching as the moonlight shown through this tent like home, revealing the small dancers along the front, it was obvious that she liked the idea of being an acrobat, so she smiled and rested the book down near her pillow and rolled over, her attention to the moon once more. Before whispering a soft goodnight to herself, she soon had her eyes closed and was drifting off into a dream most wonderful. Well this was only the beginning to her next day, lets hope its more exciting.
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Posted: Mon Mar 28, 2011 9:31 am
 So, going to assume that this is done, so I'll go ahead and leave my comments.
Her personality seems to be a little short and her history is definitely vague, if you could expand on those a little it'll help.
And do you think you could do more with the sample?
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Posted: Mon Mar 28, 2011 9:33 am
Edit: Goodness. I added more, but it hardly looks like it. xp
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