I'd like to share with you a poem I wrote for my sister who left home on bad terms.

I'm not really looking for criticism, but criticism and opinions are welcome.

It's meant to be vague, with imagery that we together would understand.

So here it is:

"Konoha"


Where did it all go wrong?
You think you know a person and they
Just
Leave
And it hurts for a while
Because it's different
And different is strange
And it's quiet
It's lonely
It's empty
It's wide
You feel small
You feel alone
You turn to the left
From your bed
Where they slept
On the right
And they're not there
But there are signs
Like the rainbow pillow
Left on the floor
And the game that doesn't work
Still stuck in the system
The pictures you gave them
Still stuck to the wall
And you wonder
What?
What did I do wrong?
Where?
Where are they going next?
Who?
Who have they become?
How?
How will I ever get through to them?
Why?
Why is it that when they admired
Naruto
I am the one
Who must bring Sasuke
Back to Konoha?