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 Posted: Sat Mar 19, 2011 3:37 pm
I once found a slimy worm
Squirming,squishy,slimy
When i picked him up
Prickly,picky,popping
When I let him down
Dazed,dying,drooping
When I poked poked at him
Lying,longing,lonely
When I left him in the dust
The wicked
Purple is the monster roaring under your bed
The scratchy howls at the dark full moon
The echoing bats in a rocky cave
The dark purple smile from a wicked child
The wise
Purple is the nice caring friend of pink
Twas the anxious blossom longing to bloom
Thee skedaddling imaginary fairy tale
And that's the story of the
wicked
and the
wise
Sleep kitty.Dream.
Make that dream come to life.
Make it real
Make it shine
You smile when you sleep,
You purr in you're dreams.
As I sing a lullaby,
You visit your wonder land
Sleep kitty.Dream
Fluffy pink skirts twirling and whirling all around
Ballerinas dancing on a long wooden stage
Leather blue shoes
Standing straight and tall
On your tippy toes
But don't fall
Skinny little weak bodies
Bending and twisting on a wide wooden floor
Hair in biskit buns
Feeling smooth and brown
On your best tries
But don't fail
Have you ever laughed
That it hurt?
Have you ever laughed
That you choked?
Have you ever laughed
That you cried?
Have you ever laughed
That it felt
Painful
That it felt
Like your under spell
That it felt...
Endless
Firework,firework in the sky,
Blazing through the dark and high.
The breezes the coldness
The wind attacks it and it a[color=#00
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Posted: Sat Mar 19, 2011 3:42 pm
Sorry about the cut off,
but here's the rest
Firework,firework in the sky,
Blazing through the dark and high.
The breezes the coldness
The wind attacks it and it all attaches
Fire works,fire works in the sky
blazing through our eyes a light.
the smoke the coughs
The fire goes on,the darkness is off.
Fireworks,oh those fireworks.
As I lay on the green
Itchy grass,
I see a bird fly through the
trees to get to her nest.
There were eggs.
They shook and the tweeted
and they hatched.
I shut my eyes fast,
A blue feather drifted onto
my soft rosy cheeks.
The bird sang a song,
An...unique tune.
I open my eyes fast.
I find myself
on
a
cloud
I watch you.
Above the clouds.
You laugh,
I enjoy that
I wanted to protect you,
But I failed
That one time,
When you fell off of that cliff,
it was really my arm you fell of.
What I need help on is revising.What doesn't make sense?Have an lines I could put or change in my poetry?Any comments on what you liked or what I should change?Thanks,and I hope you could reply soon.
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Posted: Sat Mar 19, 2011 3:53 pm
These are too cute! (: They're light & fun & omg I just love them. Especially the worm one!
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Posted: Sat Mar 19, 2011 3:56 pm
Fouxia These are too cute! (: They're light & fun & omg I just love them. Especially the worm one! Thanks your comment was nice ^_^ OH and guess what? Back when I learn poetry in third grade,i was the first to read poetry,the first one to write poetry -and I didn't even know it was a poem-,and wrote the most poetry in the classroom! Yep,I have a thing for poetry ;3
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Posted: Sat Mar 19, 2011 3:59 pm
iiRainbowzFriendShipii Fouxia These are too cute! (: They're light & fun & omg I just love them. Especially the worm one! Thanks your comment was nice ^_^ OH and guess what? Back when I learn poetry in third grade,i was the first to read poetry,the first one to write poetry -and I didn't even know it was a poem-,and wrote the most poetry in the classroom! Yep,I have a thing for poetry ;3 ;D Cool.
We never learned poetry in third grade.
& if we had this would've been my poem:
"The cat was fat. That cat ate a rat. The end"
Rofl. xD
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Posted: Sat Mar 19, 2011 5:09 pm
Fouxia iiRainbowzFriendShipii Fouxia These are too cute! (: They're light & fun & omg I just love them. Especially the worm one! Thanks your comment was nice ^_^ OH and guess what? Back when I learn poetry in third grade,i was the first to read poetry,the first one to write poetry -and I didn't even know it was a poem-,and wrote the most poetry in the classroom! Yep,I have a thing for poetry ;3 ;D Cool.
We never learned poetry in third grade.
& if we had this would've been my poem:
"The cat was fat. That cat ate a rat. The end"
Rofl. xD Lol Here's limerick There once was a farmer named Sam He lost his favorite lamb He looked everyday Until he would say "I give up,you little scan"
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Posted: Sat Mar 19, 2011 5:23 pm
iiRainbowzFriendShipii Fouxia iiRainbowzFriendShipii Fouxia These are too cute! (: They're light & fun & omg I just love them. Especially the worm one! Thanks your comment was nice ^_^ OH and guess what? Back when I learn poetry in third grade,i was the first to read poetry,the first one to write poetry -and I didn't even know it was a poem-,and wrote the most poetry in the classroom! Yep,I have a thing for poetry ;3 ;D Cool.
We never learned poetry in third grade.
& if we had this would've been my poem:
"The cat was fat. That cat ate a rat. The end"
Rofl. xD Lol Here's limerick There once was a farmer named Sam He lost his favorite lamb He looked everyday Until he would say "I give up,you little scan" That's cute o:
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