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 Posted: Wed Feb 01, 2006 11:05 pm
Well, like the title says, these are just brain barfs really. Anything that pops into my brain at the moment gets written down here, basically.
This one is actuall part of a story that's already completed.
The rain was pounding down in blinding sheets. Not the calm pitter-patter you hear normally, this was a wailing storm. Actually, it was wailing. Halloween, it was raining, and a swarm of moaning spirits were out to get me. Perfect.
I skid the corner quickly, in a panic, and almost fell. It cost me precious time. I heard the loud shrieks close in and bolted out of the alleyway, as if the jaws of hell were snapping at my feet.
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Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2006 5:15 pm
Definately original. Interesting to be sure.
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Posted: Fri Jun 23, 2006 6:45 pm
About half of those "sentences" are grammatically incorrect.
So many people think that writing comes easy, but it's a craft like anything else, and it would be best if you studied up on structure and rhetoric before writing anything serious.
In this case, however, your pieces are great as brain barfs heart
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Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2007 9:17 pm
I like tidbids. And you do have bad grammar but I dont care. I have good grammar though.
The sky shined a platinum silver sheen. On this world, the sky is grey on sunny days and a shade of pine green on rainy days. The people here are short and a tanned yellow shade of skin. There voice is rather deep and heavy.
A tidbid. YAY! ninja ninja ninja
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