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II Palmtop Tiger II

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Posted: Sun Jun 12, 2011 6:24 pm

Okay... so this was brought to my attention...

Your character is too 'perfect'. It makes it boring to play, and no challenge to use. The personality and powers make it too perfect... Those are just the first things I got from skimming.

Secondly, your shikai powers need limits set upon them... And the amount of power of your shikai is weakened depending on the amount of abilities... so take that into consideration.

I would just go over it again, and tone down the power by one or two stages.

Posted: Sun Jun 12, 2011 8:11 pm

Shattered_Fangs

Okay... so this was brought to my attention...

Your character is too 'perfect'. It makes it boring to play, and no challenge to use. The personality and powers make it too perfect... Those are just the first things I got from skimming.

Secondly, your shikai powers need limits set upon them... And the amount of power of your shikai is weakened depending on the amount of abilities... so take that into consideration.

I would just go over it again, and tone down the power by one or two stages.

As mentioned, I intend to tweak the personality through character interaction.

I think I fixed them up more. I'm really trying to keep the Ice Cloak without making it pathetic, simply because I like it and I feel it's unique.

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Posted: Mon Jun 13, 2011 1:39 pm

Okay, I have one thing to tack onto the review here, and it's in reference to the martial arts you have listed.

I'm willing to let you have Wushu, as it isn't a listed style that can be trained for in Squad 7.

Aikido, however, you will need to apply for training in. Please go to this thread in order to apply for training.

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