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Just like what the title says. As of right now, I only have one picture up, but I'll put up some more once I scan it and trace it over on the computer. >.<

This first girl is called Rehn. She's the main character to the webcomic/manga that I'm hoping to make...hopefully. XD
It's just the picture of her head. I will be working on the full body version once I have my other characters' facial looks. I just hope that I can draw her again. -.- Anyways, it's an uncolored version.
Critique if you want...I just know there's something wrong with it, haha.

Rehn

Wow, it's pretty, are you planning to color it?
Also sky_angel_rawwr seems right, the neck is a little on the long side, but I love the chocker.

Anyways, these are the pencil drawings. Update:

This is Iru, the Goddess:

Iru

Her head looks a little funny. Weird that I only noticed that after I scanned it. =/

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One of my older works: (Not too old)

Untitled

I'd offer redlines and such, but it would make it so much easier on me if I had a tablet. xD

For Rehn: it looks like the frame of her face was going to be kinda angled to make it look like she's looking off in some direction at first, but you went with a frontal view instead. The left side of her face (that's on our right side) has a bit too much curve and makes it look a bit awkward, so level it out to be more like the other side of her face.

Move her left eye (that's on our right) inward, and her mouth and nose seem to be very tiny. I think you should enlarge those more.


For Iru: Her face looks too small for her head, actually. And this is where I show you this guide here, since I can't work well with MSPaint.


And that last one, I think her behind is angled strangely in relation to her legs' positions. And if her shoulder is kinda pulled back, you should be able to see a bit of an outline where her scapula is.


Hope this was useful for you. :3