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 Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2011 1:00 pm
Do you want crit on your quests? You've come to the right place. Thali is offering crit to those who have put effort into their quest threads. I will be actively reading them, once you contact me saying you've put in enough information.
I will be giving notes such as "approved". Or "I think you could put more into their background and personality." Perhaps both.
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Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2011 7:00 pm
I updated information on James~ His personality, ability, and appearance. Do you think you could look it over again?? :3
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Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2011 9:19 pm
Of course, my love. Approved. <3
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