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PostPosted: Sun Jan 16, 2011 6:01 pm


this is my team that ive been working on, rate it and tell me what needs to be done to it ^^

Golduck : Female
Timid
Cloud nine
Item- Life orb
Hp/ 301-Atk/ 180
Def/ 192-Sp. Atk/ 288
Sp. Def/ 196-Spd/ 295
Calm mind
Hydro Pump
Ice beam
Hidden Power

Electivire: Male
Adamant
Motor Drive
Item: Expert Belt
Hp: 292-Atk/ 379
Def/ 170-Sp. Atk/ 203
Sp. Def/ 206-Spd/ 289
Thunder Punch
Ice Punch
Cross Chop
Fire Punch

Dragonite: Female
Adamant
Inner Focus
Item: Choice Band
Hp: 323-Atk/ 403
Def/ 227-Sp. Atk/ 212
Sp. Def/ 236-Spd/ 259
Outrage
Earthquake
Fire Punch
Extreme Speed

Houndom: male
Timid
Flash Fire
Itme: Passho Berry
Hp: 290-atk/ 194
def/ 136-sp. atk/ 318
sp. def/ 197-spd/ 317
nasty plot
fire blast
dark pulse
hidden power

Sceptile: Male
Timid
Overgrow
Item: Leftovers
hp: 281-atk/ 185
def/ 167-sp. atk/ 309
sp. def/ 206-spd/ 371
substitute
leech seed
leaf storm
hidden power

Snorlax: Male
Calm
Thick Fat
Item: Leftovers
hp: 508-atk/ 230
def/ 192-sp. atk/ 166
sp. def/ 341-spd/ 96
curse
return
earthquake
rest
PostPosted: Mon Jan 17, 2011 1:47 pm


your team looks pretty nice but i noticed some flaws in it. This is just me but maybe you should go with a different sweeper than golduck. golduck's special sweeping prowess is a bit lack-luster even with life orb and it's not nearly fast enough to catch up to the more prominent sweepers in OU. i might suggest instead rain dance mixed kingdra. if you're going to boost the first turn rain dance will boost water moves by X1.5 and double kingdra's speed (swift swim) you're then free to sweep as long as rain dance lasts. so a mixed kingdra would look like this:
Kingdra~life orb
Nature: rash/mild
Ability: swift swim
Ev's: 200atk/144spatk/164
Rain dance
hydro pump/surf
draco meteor
waterfall

electivire is a great for hitting just about everything but yours is missing out on one extremely important move: earthquake. without earthquake you cannot hit fire, electric, rock, or the less common poison types for solid damage. i understand that ice punch is for the dragons and fire punch is for bronzong and forretress but consider removing fire or ice punch for earthquake.

Snorlax is going to have major problems against ghost types especially gengar. gengar will laugh at both earthquake and return and return fire with focus blast or whittle you down with it's other attacks. rest without sleep talk or chesto berry will leave you a sitting duck and gives your opponent 2 free turns to whale on your sleeping carcass. i suggest maybe changing your item to chesto berry and replacing return with crunch to take care of gengar.

overall i give it a 7/10 in effectiveness and you might want to watch out for more physically inclined teams harboring strong sweepers.

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 18, 2011 2:53 pm


cool, thanks for the help
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