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IBlameRoadSuess
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 04, 2011 11:47 pm


The man was lying face up in the cold snow, now running red with blood. He held a crumpled bloodstained photograph in his left hand, an empty pistol in his right, the slide back and a single spent casing next to his head. The man breathed shallowly and difficultly, he did after all have three bullets in his chest. He was dying, the man knew it, if the bullets in his lungs or the blood-loss didn't get him, the cold would. "How did it come to this? One last job, easy, quick, simple... how did it turn out like this?" The man thought to himself as he stared up into the dark cloudy sky, snow gently burying him in his soon-to-be grave. He loosened his grip on the pistol and he couldn't feel his fingers, he wasn't going to make it. He'd be lucky if the found him before spring. His vision darkened, blurred around the edges and he thought, "Well, this is it... been a hell of a ride... but they all gotta end sometime..."


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They say, that right before you die, that your whole life flashes before your eyes. Bullshit. What flashes in front of your eyes if you die a particularly horrible death like I did, is the chain reaction of events that directly led up to your death. For me, it all started about a month before, in my office like usual.

I was busy using my red pen to figure out just how much longer I could keep up my terribly rich lifestyle. The answer, in short, was not very long. My PI business, that's private investigator business for those of you who aren't too bright, had basically been flushed down the toilet. I barely had enough money for my car payment, let alone keeping everything up and running for the business. I closed the book and put the cap back on my red pen, putting them both in the airtight secure location called my unlocked desk drawer. I turned in my chair to look out the window, the city looked gloomy to say the least; dark clouds, heavy snowfall, muddy streets and the usual city sounds that can pierce through glass. I sighed, wondering if my office was high up enough to kill me if I jumped out the window. Clearly, I didn't have much to look forward to.
PostPosted: Thu Jan 06, 2011 10:53 am


Clearly I've forgotten to introduce myself. You tend to not worry about these things when you're dead. My name is William D. Magnuson. Most people used to call me Magnus, or Will if it suits them. Now, on account of me being dead, they tend to use my full formal name, which I don't particularly like. But I'm not here to tell you my life story, if you want that, you'll have to find out for yourself. Do a little detective work, it'll be good for your character. Anyway, where was I? Oh right, the office.


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So, I'm staring out my window, when I hear a knock at the door, it was real insistent, not like an emergency, but quick enough for me to know it was important that I answer the door. I turned around, walked to the door and opened it. Standing in the doorway, no, filling the doorway, was a man in a gray suit. He was about seven and a half feet tall, and he had to weigh about five hundred pounds. Now, I knew that that was a custom tailored suit, enough fabric to make a circus tent, and I just sorta gawked at him for a moment. He saw the way I balked and spoke up, with a thick Slavic accent, "Mr. Magnuson I presume. May I come in? I have a proposal to offer you, one which may interest you." I blinked and moved out of the way, gesturing for the man to come inside, for a big fellow, he certainly stepped lightly, my creaky floorboards didn't make a sound when he walked inside.

I moved around to my side of the desk and gestured for the man to sit. He didn't. He simply stood in front of the desk, took out a small box from his pocket and opened it. It was a cigarette case, he took one of them and gestured towards me with the box, I shook my head and he slipped the box back in his coat. He tapped the end of the cigarette, one of those expensive black wrapping European ones, on the table before bringing it up to his mouth. He let it hang from his mouth and reached back inside his coat to pull out, and this is where I really stared, a gold plated cigarette lighter. He flicked the thing open and lit up his cigarette, taking a huge long drag from it, before blowing the smoke out into the air. I continued to stare, now wondering when he would get down to business and tell me his proposal.

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