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Posted: Sat Jan 01, 2011 11:41 am

I would really like to get some critiques on my art so I know what to improve......and I'm also curious to what you think of my art sweatdrop

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Posted: Sat Jan 01, 2011 11:42 am

Its Way better then I can do.. xd

I like it.

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Vanna1994

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Posted: Sat Jan 01, 2011 3:56 pm

Your really not bad, but you could touch up on your anatomy a bit.

A few examples of things I see:
The guy with the purple blindfold: Neck to long, the elbow looks like it should be farther down.
The girl in that picture looks kinda expressionless sweatdrop

Picture with the owl:
Hand looks a bit small

Green and Black one:
Hands to small

Posted: Sat Jan 01, 2011 7:33 pm

schooldrawer

I would really like to get some critiques on my art so I know what to improve......and I'm also curious to what you think of my art sweatdrop

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Pretty good start to art! You've got more than me anyway... I'm so lazy...

Some reoccurring problems I've noticed are: torsos too long, arms too long, and hands too short.

Torsos are generally between 2-3 heads long, and the arm should end with the hand equal to the middle of the person's thighs. Hand size is a little trickier, but they are generally 2/3 the size of the head (when extended) and a little more than 1/2 the face wide.

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Posted: Sun Jan 02, 2011 1:57 am

Vanna1994

Your really not bad, but you could touch up on your anatomy a bit.

A few examples of things I see:
The guy with the purple blindfold: Neck to long, the elbow looks like it should be farther down.
The girl in that picture looks kinda expressionless sweatdrop

Picture with the owl:
Hand looks a bit small

Green and Black one:
Hands to small

Thank you very much for pointing out the errors. 4laugh I always knew the anatomy was wrong, but nobody had ever told me what exactly.

Posted: Sun Jan 02, 2011 2:00 am

LemurTail

schooldrawer

I would really like to get some critiques on my art so I know what to improve......and I'm also curious to what you think of my art sweatdrop

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Pretty good start to art! You've got more than me anyway... I'm so lazy...

Some reoccurring problems I've noticed are: torsos too long, arms too long, and hands too short.

Torsos are generally between 2-3 heads long, and the arm should end with the hand equal to the middle of the person's thighs. Hand size is a little trickier, but they are generally 2/3 the size of the head (when extended) and a little more than 1/2 the face wide.

Thank you very much for the tip! 4laugh

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Posted: Sun Jan 02, 2011 8:36 am

Your welcome ^^
If you need help at any time, I would be happy to try and help the best I can ^^

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