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 Posted: Sun Aug 15, 2004 1:43 pm
Hello, This is the concept sketch for the banner image of my webpage. It is planned for her to be leaning against text saying "The art of Mercae" It will appear as if she has painted it on a wall. PLease tell me if you see anything i need to change. 
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Posted: Mon Aug 16, 2004 1:21 pm
I think it'll make a nice banner. The image looks slightly skewed, it's probably due to the way you scanned it? (more like you take the picture with a camera to skew it though)
Just one little pointer, I think the brush should point downward a little. razz
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Posted: Mon Aug 16, 2004 3:52 pm
Look I think it'll make a nice banner. The image looks slightly skewed, it's probably due to the way you scanned it? (more like you take the picture with a camera to skew it though) Just one little pointer, I think the brush should point downward a little. razz thanks for the input smile i must have had it a little crooked in the scanner.
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Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 3:21 pm
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Posted: Fri Dec 01, 2006 5:08 am
First of all, I must impress upon you that I could NEVER have done anything as good as that sketch, so I am probably not qualified to comment at all. I think it is fantastic, but I have only one criticism. Although it is probably anatomically correct, I would suggest making the head/face/hair larger in proportion with the body - a classic cartoon technique to highlight the eyes and facial characteristics. Not really a criticism, just a suggestion. Very well done.
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