
^ this one, actually, I'd like some advice on when it comes to constructing these skirt folds. It's fairly obvious how much I half-assed, dahaha.

I got some lovely critiques elsewhere about amping up the shadows in this picture to go along with the lighting I established with the various effects, but I'm also particularly interested on critique about the outfit -- I really love brown and blue together, and I think I might try sewing a brown-and-blue-themed lingerie collection and want to see if it is a go! biggrin
(warning, near-naked men :3c )

My roommmate said that his eyes were creepily staring into her soul, but she has a long history of being creeped out by the character in question...so I ask of you, did I actually make him a creeper or is she just biased?
(another thing -- the character is 6'4'', so I tried making the torso a little longer than normal, because all that extra height can't all come from his legs....is it too unbelievable that way?)

Derp, I should've saved an extra copy with cleaner lines. :X I swear I can draw men that aren't blond, longfaced, and smug, but I do like his facial expression.

HOKAY, this I'd like some advice on. The character on the right has a crooked nose and lots of burns, but I haven't quite mastered how to draw the crooked nose from various angles, and I'm not sure how convincing those burns our. C&C?
Thanks in advance <3