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PostPosted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 6:27 pm


          She almost did it
          Blood on her hands and pain in her eyes.
          With nothing to live for
          It seemed worthwhile.

          A beacon, a light, a sound.
          She crept from the darkness and peered from afar.
          She knew not what it was
          But it gave her a name.

          Now it's a happy life
          Filled with laughter, joy, and a sense of belonging.
          But the pain still lay there
          In its beautiful remains.



          Feedback? :3
PostPosted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 7:11 pm


In my opinion:
I freaking love it. It has just the right balance of mystery and creepy and... over all it was enjoyable to read and I like it so much, I'm going to post a few of my poems here whenever I decide to get over my bad case of procrastination ^^;;

But seriously, that was a really good poem!

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