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☠ Shinya Lee ☠ (Northern Water Tribe Nomad)

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 6:12 pm


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Basic Info: 
Username: xXRikkuCiferXx 
Character Name: Shinya Lee 
Nickname(s): Shiya  
Age: 16 
Gender: Female 
Sexuality: Heterosexual 

Appearance Info: 
Height: 5'9"
Hair Color: raven black 
Hair Length: shoulder length
Eye Color: yellow 
Skintone: fair 
Scars/Marks/Tattoos: Long diagonal slash on chest from a "job". 

In Depth Info 
Nation: Nomad (will occasionally join other nomads, but tends to stay alone.) 
Rank: N/A 
Bender: Water bender 
Bending Level: Low Master
Weapon of Choice: Bladed Tonfa  
Profesion/Job: Assassin/Tracker/Spy for hire (all depends on what you want and what your willing to pay.) 

Background Info 
Likes: The Moon, Animals, Sleep          
Dislikes: Too much noise, Annoying people, Nosy people 
Hates: Captivity 
Loves: Water 
Greatest Fear: Being put in any sort of captivity....again.
Darkest Secret: I killed my best friend....I was only an accident..... I didn't mean to......
Family: N/A 
Origin of Birth: Northern Water Tribe 
Biography: I was born in the northern water tribe to two loving parents. However they tended to keep me away from the general public because I was their only child and my older brother had been killed by "some psycho". In this way I was forced to find my own "friends" and did so in books, scrolls, and my water bending teacher. When I came upon the age of fifteen I decided to live life on my own and left my family. Now I travel where I want. When I want.
Theme Song: No Doubt- I'm Just A Girl  
Forgotten Info: N/A
PostPosted: Wed Dec 01, 2010 4:19 pm


It is purely my fault that I failed to see the inconsistency of the background and the bending level.

Although your role-playing skills are excellent, your character simply cannot be a Low Master with the background you currently have. Say, if the biography was modified to say that your character trained under a Waterbending master, then the rank of Low Master would be acceptable.
I suggest you change your biography.

Rakiaya Tressorea
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xXRikkuCiferXx

PostPosted: Sat Dec 04, 2010 7:01 pm


Ok I added a teacher, and I was doing her rank as in she learned a lot of her bending from the books and scrolls. The teacher though gives her atleast the base knowledge she would need to be able to learn from the books. Is that ok or should I just change the whole thing to her learning from the master?
PostPosted: Sun Dec 05, 2010 5:32 pm


It's very good. Approved.

In the Avatar Universe, books are very useful. In the show, Katara learned the Water Whip, which is supposedly a very advanced move, from a Waterbending Scroll that she stole from the pirates.

Rakiaya Tressorea
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水族角色 Water Tribes (RPC Profiles)

 
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