Oh man, this poem is way better than the other one that I read by you, gothlove. It was... Friendly Human.... yeah, that one.

Anyway, I really like this one because of the awesome words you used, your wacky but great meter/syllables, and the good rhyme scheme. I gotta say, this was spectacular until about halfway through - it degraded a little bit, with the rhyme becoming a little bit more forced and obvious - pretty much everything after "routine is the key" rhyming with "be".

Uhh... there was one or two typos - I think that "build" probably should have been "built", and you've got a grammatical problem with the next line, "rules to adhere". I guess since it's poetry it's okay, but it's not grammatically correct in normal writing. Just bringing it to your attention.

Besides that, the poem is great, because your message just flows clearly throughout the whole thing - you start at a and get to b, no problems or crazy deviations to c or d. Super.

I really want to see some more stuff by you. Please write more!!! =)