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PostPosted: Wed Nov 17, 2010 5:21 pm


Break me down Summer
Sing the lines of my favorite songs
Paint my sunset now
'Cause tomorrow I'll be gone

Just tell me why you torture me
By ruining day after day
So hot, so lonely , so unproductive you linger
Winter seems so far away

Crust me by waves of memories
Tell me what I need to know
Just give me your new life lesson
And take your misery and go

Hollow hearts cruelly
Seem to crowd my mind
Bleeding unto the scorched June ground
The vertigo temporarily makes me blind

The water hits my face
And I can hear the beats in my chest
I am a current in a sea of souls
Nothing more, nothing less

My tales grow old
Because only the wise can spin
I have made a resolution to be young
And so the reversing begins

The trust is what you want
But circles and lies are what I give
My life is a blizzard
And each word falls like snow from my lips

I constantly fade from real to ideal
Slowly making myself a living being
Don't hello me in pity
Didn't I tell you to sing?

Take my deliverance to the poetic plateau
Of boredom, manipulation, and slumber
I dare you to take my light again
Come break me down Summer...


Written this past Summer after not writing for a few months.

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 17, 2010 8:52 pm


Ah summer, you have killed many an ambition.

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 17, 2010 11:41 pm


Gosh, that is such a good evil poem.
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