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Gothique Jedi

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 09, 2010 6:41 pm


Harsh words & violent blows
Hidden secrets, nobody knows
Eyes are open, hands are fisted
Deep inside, I'm warped & twisted

So many tricks & so many lies
Too many whens & too many why's
Nobody's special, nobody's gifted
I'm just me, warped & twisted

Sleeping awake & choking on a dream
Listening loudly to a silent scream
Call my mind, the number's unlisted
Lost in someone so warped & twisted

On my knees, alive but dead
Look at the invisible blood I've bled
I'm not gone, my mind has drifted
Don't expect much, I'm warped & twisted

Burnt out, wasted, empty & hollow
Today is just yesterday's tomorrow
The sun dried out, the ashes sifted
I'm still here, warped & twisted


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PostPosted: Wed Nov 10, 2010 7:24 pm


Typos: None.
Improvements: None.
Lieks/ Dislikes: All of it I love, none I dislike.


you are so awesome!!!!!! I wanna devour your poem with adorement!!!!! Muah-Muah-Muah!

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 10, 2010 8:12 pm


Dang, this poem has no problems with the writing, but it's a little unsettling.
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