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PostPosted: Mon Nov 08, 2010 9:33 am



Six humans trapped by happenstance, in the bleak & bitter cold,
Each one possessed a stick of wood, or so the story's told.

Their dying fire in need of logs, the first man held his back,
For of the faces 'round the fire, he noticed one was black.

The next man looking 'cross the way saw not one of his church,
And couldn't bring himself to give the fire his stick of birch.

The third one sat in tattered clothes, he gave his coat a hitch,
Why should his log be put to use to warm the idle rich ?

The rich man just sat back and thought of the wealth he had in store,
And how to keep what he had earned from the lazy, shiftless poor.

The black man's face bespoke revenge as the fire passed from sight,
For all he saw in his stick of wood was a chance to spite the white .

The last man of this forlorn group did naught except for gain,
Giving only to those who gave was how he played the game.

Their logs held tight in death's still hand was proof of human sin,
They didn't die from the cold without--They died from the cold within.
 
PostPosted: Mon Nov 08, 2010 10:25 am


Nice! It gives a great sense of scenery and the bitterness of all the people just complement the cold weather.

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 08, 2010 1:32 pm


Toxic_Treats
Nice! It gives a great sense of scenery and the bitterness of all the people just complement the cold weather.


Exactly ! I knew you'd pick up on that 3nodding
PostPosted: Wed Nov 10, 2010 5:48 pm


Ayako Miyojin
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Nice! It gives a great sense of scenery and the bitterness of all the people just complement the cold weather.


Exactly ! I knew you'd pick up on that 3nodding

What a beautiful way to explain the human condition. Simply amazing that you were able to capture one of humans greatest downfalls... Greed

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 12, 2010 6:23 am


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Ayako Miyojin
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Nice! It gives a great sense of scenery and the bitterness of all the people just complement the cold weather.


Exactly ! I knew you'd pick up on that 3nodding

What a beautiful way to explain the human condition. Simply amazing that you were able to capture one of humans greatest downfalls... Greed


That was the hardest part. Coming up with a descroption of greed without making it completely obvious
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