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 Posted: Sat Nov 06, 2010 5:25 pm
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Posted: Sat Nov 06, 2010 5:35 pm
Beautiful! I do like the colours.
The things you can improve on are how the limbs and wings attach to the actual body. The wings are alright, but the hind legs look a little bit like drumsticks if you stare at them long enough.
I do like how you drew the dragon's underbelly and the head of the more canine-looking one.
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Posted: Sat Nov 06, 2010 5:44 pm
lol drumsticks xD
that's actually the first time I've done that pose for a dragon, and I've never attempted it for a wolf sweatdrop
I'm only an artist of five years so there is still a ton left for me to learn. sweatdrop
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Posted: Sun Nov 07, 2010 7:16 pm
I would've like to see more depth, personally. You know, shading to denote the contours of their bodies and whatnot. Also, you have the dragon's wing coming right out of the shoulder blade. Personally, I feel like it's really awkward, as if it was stuck on there by God as an afterthought. Or somebody thought they were playing "Pin the Wing on the Dragon".
I like the colors, and I love the dragon. xd my absolute favorite animal, regardless of whether it's real or not.
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Irako of the Desert Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Nov 07, 2010 7:18 pm
lol thank you xD
I'm still working on proportions, and for the most part I've got it down to where it doesn't look like a giant blob or all of it is just stuck on there randomly. sweatdrop
I've still a ton to learn and to work on though...An artist's journey is never over~
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Posted: Sun Nov 07, 2010 7:39 pm
Only thing I would suggest working on is the handwriting x.x;
I can't read it xD
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Posted: Tue Nov 09, 2010 3:50 pm
I would think that the text was "fancy", saying Wolf X Dragon.
Well... perhaps "drumstick" was a little off, but then again, I do exaggerate sometimes to make my points. For a first time, that's not too bad with proportions, but definitely something to look out for in the future. Nice colours and poses too; I can't imagine myself pulling off something like that.
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Posted: Tue Nov 09, 2010 3:55 pm
@Kira: lol yeah, sorry about that ^ ^U I tend to experiment a lot with how I want things written on my works...
@Valentorv: haha that's alright, I find it amusing how you chose "drumstick" as the word you were looking for xD
I tend to have a bit of an active imagination though, that's how I'm able to pull crazy poses like that off lol
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