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Midnight Marvel

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 03, 2010 3:35 pm


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RPC Name: Adachike Castan
RPC Age: 27
RPC Year of Death: 1983
RPC Gender: Male
RPC Personality: Adachike is very calm and collected, however in battle he's the first to attack only to estimate his possibilities of wining thus demonstrating tactical intelligence. Also his clown side makes him quite funny and creative. In addition as child he was always known for having such a great will to forgive others despite the actions they committed against him. However he still punishes those who have done wrong.
RPC Bio: Adachike was not born in a luxurious life, with all the things he wanted, nor did his parents bathe in a golden bathtub and silk towels to dry them. No, Adachike was born as a farmer’s boy and loved as the baby of a farmer’s wife. Because of this, Adachike was exposed to hard work, diligence, fidelity, love, covetousness and mediocrity. Having to live through all that would surely make any man feel as if he was high up on a thin wire not knowing if he’ll make to the other side and be happy or take a fatal fall and resent others for it.

However Adachike was strong, he fought through the humiliation of not knowing how to read, he laughed of all the criticisms about the way he dressed and what made him really powerful was the way he loved and cared for his parents despite all the rumours surrounding them. His mother would always chant (Theme rock a bye baby) ‘’ Soar high little biddy, hurry to the sky, don’t let them see your tears as you fly by, don’t let go, don’t get lost in the crowd, for remember you have loved ones waiting in the clouds. ‘’ At the age of eleven Adachike was now considered a man, his father showed him undying respect and gave him responsibilities to show how much trust he had in his son this was his fatherly way of loving his son while maintaining his manhood. A few months later while Adachike was twelve his parents fell sick and so the young boy had to abandon his young life activities and place himself as the king of the house, the young boy had to take care of his parents and the farm to ensure order and stability for when his parents recovered. At the age of fourteen Adachike’s father was ordered to join the army and partake in the war, his mother was ordered as well so she could nourish the fighting men, conversely Adachike was not ordered to partake in the war for his parents had hid his very birth from the authorities fearing that this day would ever come. And so his mother and father had left him with his aunt and her twelve kids to take care of the farm and live a happy life, after a year Adachike’s parents had still not come home and so the young farmer took it upon himself to go to war to find them.

After being in the army for five years Adachike had risen from a simple pawn in the army to the west general however the location of his parents were still unknown except back home his parents were safe and sound, they returned during his third year in the army. During his twenty-seventh war Adachike was hit by a poisonous arrow, later on he reunited with his parents while in a hospital bed. The twenty-seventh of October Adachike Castan passed on.
RPC Weight: 160 pds
RPC Height: 5'8 ft
RPC Picture Or Description: Adachike Castan
Squad
11

Squad Rank: 11th division Lieutenant
Squad Name/Number: 11th Division
Squad Captain: Unknwon

Zanpakutou

Zanpakutou Appearance: Appearance
Zanpakutou Personality: Adachikes zanpakuto is rather amusing and kind he basically shares the same personality as Adachike however more arrogant.
Zanpakutou History: Once Adachike had arrived to the Soul Society he continuously had dreams of a strange person laughing and smiling at him. It was obvious to him that his dreams meant something for once he tried to speak a musical not would escaped his lips before any word could and upon waking his room would be tattooed with musical markings. The dreams continued and the conversations became more elaborate until Adachike asked who that person was then the next morning a blade had appeared next to him.
Zanpakutou Name: サイレントノート --- Sairentonōto --- Silent note
Zanpakutou Element: Sound based Zanpakuto
Zanpakutou Shikai Obtained?: Yes
Zanpakutou Bankai Obtained?: Yes
Zanpakutou Spirit Picture Or Description: Zanpakuto


Shikai

Shikai Release State Picture Or Description: Once the Shikai phase is in motion, the blade transforms into a Guan Dao however the main blade has a hollow interior with one musical note on each side which act as a hole for the air and spirit particles to pas through. A basic view of a Guan Dao: Guan Dao
Shikai Release State Release Abilities: Once the Shikai has been activated, all living things which are in a 5 meters radius of Adachike will be momentarily deafened, for the blade emits a powerful high frequency sound which seem to inflate the ear drums. This effect does not apply to the user.
Shikai Release Command: Play your melody, Sairentonōto.

Shikai Abilities

  • Ability One: Forte: Once in the Shikai phase, the Zanpakuto is able to preform a powerful sonic blast which has enough force to crush a ten story high building this attack can be released at any moment the user desires. However to accumulate enough power to preform such a technique the suer must rotate his Guan Dao rapidly.

  • Ability Two: Crescendo: Before preforming this technique the Guan Dao begins to vibrate rapidly and is able to cut with much more easy. In addition, whatever the Guan Dao cuts, it can be easily absorbed by the blade. The particles which are absorbed are stored within the hollow area of the blade and thus the blade gains the ability to grow in length and diameter.

    Ability Three: T

    Ability Four:

Bankai

Bankai Release State Picture Or Description: Bankai
Bankai Release State Release Abilities: Once the Bankai phase has been activated, six small and round Christmas bells position themselves around Adachike, these bells are essential for they permit Adachike to preform his Bankai techniques.
Bankai Release Extended Name Command: Play your melody without silence and ring in their hearts --- のサイレント注意終わることのない --- No sairento chūi owaru koto no nai --- silent note of the never ending

Bankai Abilities

  • Ability One: Caesura: Once activated the bells surround the target chosen by the user. Once positioned the bells start to emit a very powerful vibration which vibrate the molecules around he target. Because the molecules are so agitated they push against the molecules which the target is made of. Because of the constant bombardment of molecules the target is completely frozen in place unable to move. This technique can be used in reverse to repulse the molecules from outside and so it acts as a barrier.
  • Ability Two: Sforzando: Once this technique is activated the bells which surround Adachike began to vibrate violently indicating they they have collected enough sonic force. And so on the command of the suer the bells can launch themselves in any given pattern towards the target. In addition, once the bells come into contact with anything they release they powerful concentrated sonic force which causes a large sonic boom.
  • Ability Three: Forte-piano: Once activated the bells surrounding Adachike surround the selected target and so once the target has been completely surrounded they bells begin to emit a loud sound then an immediate soft sound, this is executed constantly. This technique allows the bells to agitate the molecules which can enhance the healing process of any wound.
  • Ability Four: [Optional - Erase field if not implemented]
  • Ability Five: [Optional - Erase field if not implemented]
  • Ability Six: [Optional - Erase field if not implemented]
  • Ability Seven: [Optional - Erase field if not implemented]


Kido

Kido List: [Corresponding with your rank]

Shinigami Techniques

  • Technique 1: Proficient Swordsman: Being the General of an army he was trained in the arts of Swordsmanship.
  • Technique 2: Skillful hand to Hand combatant: When in war close range combat is something unavoidable and so Adachike had learned how to defend and attack with his body.
  • Technique 3: Shunpo Expert: Adachike has been proven to be very quick in and out of battle.
  • Technique 4: Vast Spiritual Pressure: Being a Lieutenant Adachike has a powerful Spiritual Pressure.
  • Technique 5:[5-9 are all optional fields]
  • Technique 6:
  • Technique 7: [Techniques 7-9 can only be filled in if you are of a Captains or Vice-captain RP rank]
  • Technique 8:
  • Technique 9:


Unique Character Weapons

- Tantō: A small blade.

Shinigami Character Ranking Points
[See Points and Ranking system in order to fill in this section]

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Intelligence =
 
PostPosted: Wed Nov 03, 2010 4:34 pm


Nobody is gonna check me out?

Midnight Marvel

Gatekeeper


SCPX
Crew

PostPosted: Wed Nov 03, 2010 5:03 pm


You know your RPC age and Time of Death don't add up, right?

Also, your RPC Appearance link appears to be broken, as well as your Zanpakutou's Spirit picture.

Your Shikai is an interesting concept that should be fine for the most part. There are a couple of things I'd like you to fix though.

1) Under Shikai Release State Release Abilities, you state that you deafen your enemies for about 2 posts. While it is nice that you are thinking in terms of posts, you can't officially state that the ability will last that long. If someone manages to dodge it partially, they can't be restricted. Instead of saying 2 posts, just say "for a while". The equivalent allows the situation, and the other player, to help decide the length. (Most people will probably be nice enough to let it affect them for longer than two posts, although it may not affect them as much as you wish.)

2) No single ability may be allowed to be perfect. In other words, it can't cut through everything, or stop everything, or be unblock-able, or whatever extremity one claims it to be. Your second ability doesn't seem to be that way, but it's hard to tell. You may wish to specify more clearly on it and add more detail.

The other things I'd like you to fix are some of your unique character abilities and weapons. If there is nothing unusual about your character in those terms, then please put none. Otherwise, you mainly need to clean up your grammar and spelling, as well as add some more details on your capabilities. Remember that we have to be able to understand from your profile what is happening, even if our characters don't know. Otherwise, we'll easily misinterpret and claim something that isn't true for you, and you don't want that. Make sure a stranger can understand it as close to perfectly as possible, then you're good.

You still need a second crew member to authorize you.
PostPosted: Wed Nov 03, 2010 10:15 pm


@ SCPX's #2: It does look that way.

In regards to Resonate, if you don't provide me with a detailed explanation of what this force can do, I will automatically assume it's force is equivalent to a gust of wind. :3

II Palmtop Tiger II
Vice Captain

Supreme Demigod


II Palmtop Tiger II
Vice Captain

Supreme Demigod

PostPosted: Thu Nov 04, 2010 7:13 pm


Kinda wish you had posted to say you edited Resonate, but w/e. A Shikai attack taking out a 27 story building is too much. Tone it down please. I don't think it should crush a 10 story building...
PostPosted: Thu Nov 04, 2010 7:17 pm


okiie dokiee....... ! Argh are there any seats open cause I don't see any sad

Midnight Marvel

Gatekeeper


SCPX
Crew

PostPosted: Thu Nov 04, 2010 7:28 pm


Tons. Just check each squad's sub-forums.
PostPosted: Wed Nov 10, 2010 10:19 am


Did you notify anyone that you were completely changing this Zanpakuto?

II Palmtop Tiger II
Vice Captain

Supreme Demigod

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