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 Posted: Tue Nov 02, 2010 8:50 pm
Why, why, why?
Why my family?
Why now?
Why my mom?
"Why" seems to be all I can say. All I've said in the last twenty-four hours. I want to scream, I want to cry, I want my mom to console me telling me that everything's going be ok, but none of that happens.
I stop abruptly as I walk into the kitchen, causing my converse to squeak. My eyes widen, and my hand flies to my mouth. My heart beat races as my vision blurs by the tears forming in my eyes.
"Mom," I choke out. Shock and hope spreads across my entire body. A possibility that what I've been through last night has just been a nightmare. A mistake.
She turns around. Her brown hair is up in a bun, though strands have come loose. Flour covers most of her face and apron. She wipes her hands with a nearby towel before looking up at me with her big dark brown eyes. She gives me one of her beautiful smiles, and says, "I just put a chocolate cake in the oven, Cass."
"Mom," I say again, but in a whisper this time. I want to believe this, but I'm scared. Scared that I'm gonna fall, and hit the floor hard.
Her eyebrows furrow, the way they always do when she can tell there's something wrong with me.
"Honey, what's wrong?" She expands her arms, ready to hug me. To console me.
"Mom," I say one more time before running to her, to her embrace.
I wrap my arms around her just to find that I'm hugging thin air. She isn't here. There's no chocolate cake. Nor will there ever be again. My mom won't set foot in this kitchen again. Or in this house, or anywhere.
Everything I'd been holding in spills out. I gasp as I collapse onto the floor. All of those tears that couldn't be shed, the cries that couldn't be screamed; everything comes pouring out.
I fell, and now I lie shattered in pieces.
WHY?!
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Posted: Tue Nov 02, 2010 10:04 pm
If this is a personnal experience, then I'm truly sorry for your loss hun. Everything happens for a reason, but sometime's it's best to accept things as they are, instead of dwelling upon their meanings your whole life. Every ending is just a new beginning.
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- Lune Amour - Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Nov 02, 2010 11:59 pm
This is... wow.... if it's fiction it is absolutely beautiful, you capture the emotion perfectly.... if not.... then I am incredibly sorry
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Posted: Wed Nov 03, 2010 11:33 am
wow....thats strong stuff. like they said, if that really happened to you im really sorry crying but you really have a way with words
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- Lune Amour - Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Nov 03, 2010 7:03 pm
FeenixPhyreAlways wow....thats strong stuff. like they said, if that really happened to you im really sorry crying but you really have a way with words I couldn't agree more biggrin
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Posted: Wed Nov 03, 2010 7:12 pm
Ayako Miyojin FeenixPhyreAlways wow....thats strong stuff. like they said, if that really happened to you im really sorry crying but you really have a way with words I couldn't agree more biggrin thank you, it isnt a personal experience, but i did try to imagine, to feel how it would be like, to understand people who have actually been, or are going through something like this.
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Posted: Wed Nov 03, 2010 7:13 pm
Just....
Incredible.
It's like it was you....
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Posted: Wed Nov 03, 2010 7:18 pm
Da-ku Kishou Tenpi This is... wow.... if it's fiction it is absolutely beautiful, you capture the emotion perfectly.... if not.... then I am incredibly sorry thank you :]
makes me feel like i might actually have
a shot at being a writer =D
and it is fiction, but i did
try to understand and feel
the emotion (i actually cried when
i was writing this) while writing this
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Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2010 12:12 am
II-colombenoire-X Da-ku Kishou Tenpi This is... wow.... if it's fiction it is absolutely beautiful, you capture the emotion perfectly.... if not.... then I am incredibly sorry thank you :]
makes me feel like i might actually have
a shot at being a writer =D
and it is fiction, but i did
try to understand and feel
the emotion (i actually cried when
i was writing this) while writing this If you can write like that you have more than just a shot! Great job!
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Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2010 9:51 am
Da-ku Kishou Tenpi II-colombenoire-X Da-ku Kishou Tenpi This is... wow.... if it's fiction it is absolutely beautiful, you capture the emotion perfectly.... if not.... then I am incredibly sorry thank you :]
makes me feel like i might actually have
a shot at being a writer =D
and it is fiction, but i did
try to understand and feel
the emotion (i actually cried when
i was writing this) while writing this If you can write like that you have more than just a shot! Great job! I agree !! Amazing work biggrin
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- Lune Amour - Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2010 9:36 pm
Ayako Miyojin Da-ku Kishou Tenpi II-colombenoire-X Da-ku Kishou Tenpi This is... wow.... if it's fiction it is absolutely beautiful, you capture the emotion perfectly.... if not.... then I am incredibly sorry thank you :]
makes me feel like i might actually have
a shot at being a writer =D
and it is fiction, but i did
try to understand and feel
the emotion (i actually cried when
i was writing this) while writing this If you can write like that you have more than just a shot! Great job! I agree !! Amazing work biggrin thank you guys! =D
guess i can use this as
part of the porfolio for
my aplication ^-^
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Posted: Fri Nov 05, 2010 12:19 am
II-colombenoire-X Ayako Miyojin Da-ku Kishou Tenpi II-colombenoire-X Da-ku Kishou Tenpi This is... wow.... if it's fiction it is absolutely beautiful, you capture the emotion perfectly.... if not.... then I am incredibly sorry thank you :]
makes me feel like i might actually have
a shot at being a writer =D
and it is fiction, but i did
try to understand and feel
the emotion (i actually cried when
i was writing this) while writing this If you can write like that you have more than just a shot! Great job! I agree !! Amazing work biggrin thank you guys! =D
guess i can use this as
part of the porfolio for
my aplication ^-^ Good plan!
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- Lune Amour - Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Nov 05, 2010 8:49 am
Da-ku Kishou Tenpi II-colombenoire-X Ayako Miyojin Da-ku Kishou Tenpi II-colombenoire-X Da-ku Kishou Tenpi This is... wow.... if it's fiction it is absolutely beautiful, you capture the emotion perfectly.... if not.... then I am incredibly sorry thank you :]
makes me feel like i might actually have
a shot at being a writer =D
and it is fiction, but i did
try to understand and feel
the emotion (i actually cried when
i was writing this) while writing this If you can write like that you have more than just a shot! Great job! I agree !! Amazing work biggrin thank you guys! =D
guess i can use this as
part of the porfolio for
my aplication ^-^ Good plan! I never thought of that o.o Excellent idea! biggrin
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Posted: Fri Nov 05, 2010 7:46 pm
Ayako Miyojin Da-ku Kishou Tenpi II-colombenoire-X Ayako Miyojin Da-ku Kishou Tenpi If you can write like that you have more than just a shot! Great job! I agree !! Amazing work biggrin thank you guys! =D
guess i can use this as
part of the porfolio for
my aplication ^-^ Good plan! I never thought of that o.o Excellent idea! biggrin awww
thank you guys!
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- Lune Amour - Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Nov 08, 2010 10:07 am
II-colombenoire-X Ayako Miyojin Da-ku Kishou Tenpi II-colombenoire-X Ayako Miyojin Da-ku Kishou Tenpi If you can write like that you have more than just a shot! Great job! I agree !! Amazing work biggrin thank you guys! =D
guess i can use this as
part of the porfolio for
my aplication ^-^ Good plan! I never thought of that o.o Excellent idea! biggrin awww
thank you guys! We're here for you ^-^
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