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Posted: Mon Nov 01, 2010 7:40 pm
dub dub and tag were frolicking in the forest, the sky was dark and dreary the wind blew with mighty force yet the night was silent and contrary
they walked quickly and without words untill they reached, a deep dark hole, blackened and bleached...
all they could see was darkness, no light at all so they threw little stones in, to see how far they would fall
no matter how big the stones got, or how long they waited no sound was heard at all, and they grew aggitated...
they needed the answer, they needed to know they became irritated with every throw...
in their domain, all was not well what they thought they knew, confused them, they could not tell
as much as they thought they knew all, one questions eluded them, how far could one fall?
so they decided to divert, move away, trouble was sure to arrise if they choose to stay...
the hole was there for a reason, unknown to all it served its purpose, it had its call...
so like dub dub and tag on their life quest, the hole was just there doing its best no choice it had but to be, alone in a forest, under a tree
no answer could change its fate or destiny for a big black hole had but one thing to be left alone to do its thing not knowing what its path will bring
dub dub and tag were lucky that day, frolicking along on their merry way the choice they made to carry on, protected them both from things going wrong
one choice, one moment two paths carried on along not knowing each others fate or where they belonged
together dub dub and tag travelled the night guided and protected both each others light and as time passed they grew old and tired but together they stayed strong, for they were inspired
inspired by life and the path they had taken together they had remained their path unforsaken...
now many moons on, their bodies long passed and been in the deep dark forest their spirits are still seen
frolicking along,just in sight guiding and protecting throughout the night
helping new journeys, someone who cant find their way alone guiding and protecting them, they lead them back home
shadows they are, beauty within hides their faces and in the deepest of your darkness, are their hiding places...
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Posted: Mon Nov 01, 2010 9:14 pm
So, I'm kinda confused: Is this story about two ghosts, or two kids that are fascinated by a hole, then become ghosts? Other than that, it's a pretty good story-poem!
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Posted: Tue Nov 02, 2010 7:44 am
Cloom So, I'm kinda confused: Is this story about two ghosts, or two kids that are fascinated by a hole, then become ghosts? Other than that, it's a pretty good story-poem! You pretty much got it. Two kids walking in the woods, they see a hole. Being children, they are naturally curious. After some deep thoughts, they took precautions and decided to leave. As they grew older, they kept that part of their childhood in heart. When they died, their souls went back to the hole to protect those who find it in the future from possibly falling in (use your imagination on what could go wrong), also guiding the lost to somewhere safe.
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