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 Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2010 7:33 pm
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Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2010 7:47 pm
Alexis was walking outside her footprints were scorch marks in the grass as her breathes were puffs of fire
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Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2010 7:58 pm
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Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2010 8:27 pm
Alexis followed the roars and a few dragons followed behind her "oh great Zemy why am i going back" she said to herself
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Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2010 8:42 pm
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Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2010 8:50 pm
Alexis sighed "i suppose i have to tell you my dad is a dragon and well kinda a bit crazy thats why i ran away when i was little and kinda been hidding so he found me now and i have to face him" she said nervously
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Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2010 8:51 pm
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Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2010 8:58 pm
Alexis looked at him "you would face a huge dangorous merciless dragon for a girl you just met"
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Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2010 9:12 pm
yeah i wanna test my new powers
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Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2010 9:17 pm
she looked at him "you know if you kill him over 30 000 000 dragons will be after you for the rest of your natural life"
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Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2010 9:24 pm
Okay, zach your RPing currently sucks (Not trying to be mean) so im gunna give you a few tips to get in good roleplays (Cause people wont want you to rp with them if you keep doing what you are doing) for one, no using ** for actions, don't use anything, for talking use " " for thoughts use Italic and if you wanna be really special you can use Bold for talking too, so there are a few pointers ^.^ hope i helped
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Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2010 9:30 pm
( hey candice does the way i rp suck because i use ** for actions and dont use " " for talking)
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Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2010 9:38 pm
(Also, you need to post with more detail, just a simple 'ok' isn't enough, how does someone respond to that?)
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Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2010 10:47 pm
yuki and suki looked at each other then nodded knowing what they must do.
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Posted: Sat Dec 04, 2010 8:07 am
(hate to say it but he kinda has a point its better to be as literate as possible when you rp)
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