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 Posted: Thu Oct 28, 2010 4:49 pm
The crash and bangs,
Of the chaotic waves,
While she wades in the wet desert,
Her bare skin sensual, but cold,
Frozen,
Naked against the wind as the dark waters,
Cover her nude body forming her clothing but temporarily,
Only temporarily,
Appearing.
The foam rushing beneath her feet,
Cover her ankles in chains.
Toying with her freedom,
Pulling her deep,
And deep,
And deep,
Until the waves have bound her in shackles upon her scarred skin,
Taunting her with her love and memories,
Until she is enveloped in the dark ocean,
Drowning her with its waters,
Pouring itself into her lungs.
Killing her slowly, Until hence,
Sarah the Lost Water Angel has drowned once again.
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Posted: Thu Oct 28, 2010 9:30 pm
you have some very nice lines here. i love the image of the ocean pouring itself into her lungs. not sure that i like the repeat of "deep" though.
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Posted: Thu Oct 28, 2010 9:42 pm
your personal venom you have some very nice lines here. i love the image of the ocean pouring itself into her lungs. not sure that i like the repeat of "deep" though. Thank you! ^_^!
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