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your personal venom

PostPosted: Wed Oct 27, 2010 10:06 pm


**note: this is a slam poem, ment to performed not confine to writen word, so to get the full feeling of it you may want to read it out loud. XP


You better get out of my way
This world is my stage
And you may think I am foolish
To get up and do this,
To rattle your cage.
You may not like my looks at all
But come on my ride
That is less like a slide
And more like a free fall,
Bet it is something you haven’t tried…
It will change the focus of your eyes
So you can see beyond the conformity
Covering everyone’s lies.
This is me and this is my disease.
I feel you struggling,
Running from the truth
But it wont let you go
Consuming you,it will spit you out
Stripping you of fake expressions
Teaching you some real life lessons.
No more black and white,
All the colors will change.
Forget right and wrong,
Gray will come into play
And best of all you can’t disappear
In the blink of an eye
Or fall through the cracks
No shadows to hide behind.
You will not leave unmarked
It will drag you from the dark,
No more angels and demons
Bright like the sun shine
Because it’s about time
You opened your eyes.
PostPosted: Wed Oct 27, 2010 10:15 pm


AOAIAAAOAOAIAOAIAAIA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Awesome, just awesome!

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 28, 2010 7:15 am


This would probably win a Slam. Very well phrased and written. I loved dragging the colors part into it. It really made you think.
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