Member Looking for Critique O.O

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Errrmmmm...Please Critique my work. I really want/ need to improve.





http://diabolica15.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2ykdd5

Here are some of them O.O  

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Lea Florens

If you really want to improve, please select 1-3 pieces of your art work for crits, rather than just your entire da/photobucket account.

Just makes things easier on the people that want to help you, as well.

Ohh alright I see edited 1st post thanks c:  

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Ren_Tenjo

Wow. I really like them. I love the detail on the first one and the colors of the second. I can't look at the third one however.

I must note on the first one, when you color it pay as much attention to the coloring as the detail. It can be difficult with such intricate work but it vastly makes a difference. I look forward to when it is colored since it all one color is a bit overwhelming trying to see it all. I think when you color it the viewers will be able to tell things apart better.

I really like the coloring of the second however the lower half seems lacking on the character. The detail if very good but the legs don't seem quite naturual. I see you were going for fun and playful look but maybe a kick or action would help to complete the picture.
I have seen pictures like your first and I really like them. I look forward to the melding of the detail work and coloring. It will be amazing.

Side note to keep in mind. When you want it to look like a still picture make them sitting but if you want to portray some movement have some sort of action going on. This is easier if there is another element in the picture such as another person, or animal. That way there is interaction going on.

oOo Thak you so much for the advice!! It really helped...I might be posting new ones soon c: thanks so much again!!!  

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GalateasFire

Hello!

First I want to say that your art is wonderful and that first piece is beautifully detailed! biggrin

There are some noticeable issues with some of her anatomy though. The outside leg appears to be too short from knee to thigh, especially when you compare it to her other leg. That could be because the leg is at a very awkward angle to draw, and this effect may be more intensified because the inside leg is slightly too long. Now I am a fat and short person but when I get into that kind of position my knee does not come past my boobs. I know that this picture is probably completed and I wouldn't expect you to got back and fix this issue but maybe it will help in the future.

Again, the details are amazing and I love her face and especially her lower stomach/hip/groin area! Please keep up the great artwork!

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Thanks so much for the critique c:..yep still working on human anatomy in school c: hopefully I will post something again soon. c:
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